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Reviewer: laurakate84 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 09:19 AM · On: Masen House
O.O Brava my dear, brava!!!
Reviewer: TwilightFiction (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 09:15 AM · On: Masen House
Very cool to put in Edward's old house! That's so much like him to keep it restored and in perfect condition. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Lauribella (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 08:55 AM · On: Masen House
I love this new twist to the E/B story lines. This is a wonderful idea and I can't wait to see how you flesh it out! Your writing is very good and your characters feel very 3 dimensional... I like that you are true to them and yet are exploring a new idea and how they would handle the situations involved. The addition of the Masen house is an awesome idea and an insight into all things Edward..Thank you and keep writing! PLEASE! LOL
Reviewer: superstarrh (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 08:48 AM · On: Masen House
Great. I love his past playing a role. Great jpb as always.
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 08:44 AM · On: Masen House
Oooo...cookies???? Please let it be cookies!!
Reviewer: ccrawford92 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 08:32 AM · On: Masen House
Great chapter. Thank you.
Author's Response: You, my dear, are my first reviewer this time around. Just send me a message if you want the clip from chapter 9 (Trust me...you definitly do ;)) and let me know from what part of the chapter you want it from. (Pick carefully, this ones important) Also, Chace Crawford is AHMAZING! if that is, in fact, who you're pen name is derived from. Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: HopelessRomantic (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 08:12 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
I just found this and I'm really liking it! Although I don't understand why Bella only has 9 days, maybe I missed the explanation of that.
Author's Response: She still wants to keep her original date for her transformation, that and the added time to allow herself to know if she's pregnant. So all in all, she has 9 days. Thanks for the review. Sorry if I confused you. :(
Reviewer: edward_lover229 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 12:28 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
wow, this is amazing:] Great idea:] i love it:] I bet Bella will get her way;] update soon
Reviewer: dreamwatcher (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 09:54 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
I thought this story is very good and very well writen. I can't wait til the next chapter... I hope it will come soon.. Thanks for a great story..
Reviewer: ccrawford92 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 09:44 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
I really like your writing. Update soon, please. : )
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 07:43 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
Hope they get to use that room soon. ;)
Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 06:24 PM · On: Visions and Interruptions
I love the new banner!!!
Reviewer: BiteMePlease (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 05:57 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
Awwww. I didn't want it to end! Please write more soon! I love this story! Write more!
Reviewer: starcrossdlover (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 07:16 AM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
oh just yay but short...much much too short...then again, you could probably write about five hundred pages of this story and it wouldn't be long enough. i love it! good job and keep them coming :)
Reviewer: crybaby (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 03:52 AM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
i like this story very much. i love the way you discribe their feelings... so keep updating more frequently!!!!! ;)
Reviewer: siouxchef (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 10:15 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
This is so excellent!!!! PLEASE get the next chapter up soon, I'm terrible at waiting.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 10:10 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
I love Chicago - such a wonderful city! A romantic city too! I can't wait to see what happens in their honeymoon suite!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 10:09 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
I will review! The part about beer and poprocks had me rolling! I can picture that vividly in my mind. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 09:03 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
I am enjoying your story and was happy to see that you updated. Am very curious over what Bella's dream could mean, unless it's just a dream and she's just afraid of rejection. Really liked what Edward said to her about them being equals and no scales in their relationship. Hoping you will update soon.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 08:48 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
wonderful chappie!!! i cant wait to read more. Jackbauer is great people isnt she. lol will review better later when my arm is released from its slinged prison. jace
Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 08:47 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
Good chapter!
Reviewer: Platinim13 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 08:38 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
I like the idea that his eyes turn green as he gets more human...and of course, I love what makes him more human ;-) get to it!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 08:35 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
I discovered your story today and I adore it. You have captured Bella perfectly. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: mrs_cullen26 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 08:14 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
you should really bring this all the way. you're doing a really good job. I like how the eye color changes to their original human color. Keep it up!!
Reviewer: ashtong21 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 08:14 PM · On: Hotels and Hostesses
thanks for finally updating! i was beginning to give up hope. It was truly amazing...I love how intense he was with her. Please update soon!
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