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Reviewer: ptl4ever (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2014 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
AWWW, wow, I love it and adore the french ;)
Reviewer: ruthh (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
such a fun story !:D
Reviewer: momof4luvntwisaga (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved this! And the possibilities if you do choose to continue, ooohh so juicy!
Reviewer: Yuri (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yes, yes, continue, continue, pleaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeeee...
Reviewer: jaclynheartz (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
LOVED IT!! :)
Reviewer: bellangel5 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! And yes please continue it because I want to know if Mrs. Cullen is related to Edward & how!!!!
Reviewer: Rie (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
MUST CONTINUE!!!!!! That is too good to stop it there!
Reviewer: brittanymichelle (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
YOU SO NEED TO CONTINUE THIS STORY, BECAUSE IF ESME IS THE BABYSITTER THAN SHE CAN SEE THAT ALICE IS HER GRANDDAUGHTER
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
This story was some kind of mad hot, damn, I think you made me blush! lol Emmett is fucking hot I must say. Bella's a lucky woman on this web site, between getting sexed up with either Jacob, Edward, now Emmett, Jasper, Embry ect, ect, oh to be her for awhile:) lol
I loved this, You should continue it, it's wonderful!!!
Dixie
Reviewer: raemoferg1 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
I think this is a great story and should definitely be more than just a one shot! I want to see where this goes and how Edward, Tanya and Mrs. Cullen play out in the story. I'm already imagining Bella putting the soccer moms in place and being good friends with Angela.
Keep Writing!
Rae
Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
I absolutely loved it. I love stories where Emmett is the main character. He is always so fun and loveable, even when he is being serious. I love how the girls conspired together so they could both have a mommy and daddy. i think this story has a lot of potential if you wanted to expand on it, and I would definitely read it if you did!
Reviewer: Suzi (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
I loved this! Absolutely totally and utterly... It had me both sighing and laughing and giggling..
Totally well done! :D
Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
PLEASE, PLEASE continue this story! :)
Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
PLEASE, PLEASE continue this story! :)
Reviewer: CrissDiNozzo (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love this sooo much. I hope you get enough inspiration to continue!
Reviewer: blackwidow16amanda97 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
I normally dislike one-shots, because of the shortness and the ending, is the actual end, but with this story, even though I knew it was just one chapter I was desperately hoping for the next at the end, lol I absolutely loved it! If you decide to add more too it, I'll be sure to read it :). Wonderfully done!
Amanda
Reviewer: blackwidow16amanda97 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
I normally dislike one-shots, because of the shortness and the ending, is the actual end, but with this story, even though I knew it was just one chapter I was desperately hoping for the next at the end, lol I absolutely loved it! If you decide to add more too it, I'll be sure to read it :). Wonderfully done!
Amanda
Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it! The french was awesome, cracked me up! There is so much room for you to continue. Please do so!
Reviewer: katey07 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was great =) Your one shots are great, they actually have a story line. My first Emmett/Bella fic, I was a bit apprehensive but it was great. He's one of my favs. Keep writing!
Reviewer: Twilightinmyheart (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Mmmmmm now that is my kind of sex right there, you hot bitch!!!!!! Much love from me to you in my pants!
Chuck
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
This would be a great story to expand! =] I really liked it. Are you thinking that Edward is Alice's father? Just wondered...
Lovely and fun!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hot and sweet--just the way I like it!
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ella B!!!! That was the best!!!! Oooo, I love me some dirty gruntin', french talkin', dimple lovin' Emmett! The story was great and YES I think it should continue. I love the idea of a certain baby Daddy rearing his jealous bronze head into their lives for a bit of angst!
And thanks for making the dead beat mom Tanya. I hate Tanya. I'll take a sadistic Jane over a ho-bag like her anyday.
Looking forward to more, more, more! OH! And maybe a little flashbacks to sorority life could be fun.... a baby kick during the "ring ching-ching?" Just a thought ;)
Author's Response: I totes had Telford Hall in my mind during the morning sickness scene! And I don't know if you'll remember, but I was actually voted "Most Likely to become a Soccer Mom" in my rush class. It was totally inspirational as I made that prediction come true in August when Bonnie enrolled in her first year of soccer. No DILF coaches though...
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was awesom! YES! You should TOTALLY continue it sometime!!
Reviewer: KellansBBR (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is cool. I figure that Mrs. Cullen is Edward's mom and that she knows nothing about having a granddaughter...LOL
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