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Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 8
ah,good things come to those who wait! every time i begin to wonder if you have given up,you update.this chapter was totally hot.pity they were blocked,but then,a cute doggie's life is worth more than going to--which base that would be?;) maybe home run.
till next time.bye!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, hopefully the next update won't take as long. :)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 8
Cockblocked by a phone lol Can't wait for more action! I read all but 1 of your recs lol
Author's Response: Well yay! We apparently have the same taste. LoL. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
you cockblocker you
Author's Response: *giggle* C'mon! It was necessary! Thanks for reading anyway, my favorite disgruntled banner maker!
Reviewer: Feelybox (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 8
This is my sad face that's it's been so long since this was updated. =(
I love the story as always and can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: This is my happy face that you like my story! :o) Sorry to keep you waiting so long.
Reviewer: MrsCullen30 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 8
I need a cold shower!! :) I hope they can continue where they left off! :)
Author's Response: YOU need a cold shower? Imagine how I felt writing all that!! LoL. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Elbereth49 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 8
This was a fun chapter and worth the wait, but I sure hope we don't have to wait so long for the next one. I do understand about real life interfering with writing time. It happens to me too. I do have a couple of questions. One: about how many chapters do you think this story will end up being? and Two: earlir in the story, the girls mentioned that Irina is a hoot, owns a cabin or something, and throws great parties. Will the boys have a chance to experience Irina as they spend time with the girls. Oh! and here's another question. Will we get to see POV's from Emmett and Rosalie and Alice and Jasper as they get to know each other better? I think those would be great.
Keep up the great work. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review. Um, I honestly haven't thought about how many chapters this will be. Yes, we will see more of Irina. I hadn't planned on writing anyone's POV except for B & E, but never say never! I'm glad you are enjoying the story!
Reviewer: bannerday (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 7
Gah!!! I couldn't even review the last chapters because I had to continue. Such hotness. You describe the heat of their kisses so wonderfully. I got to the end of the chapter and was surprised that I was me, sitting in front of my computer screen, because for a few minutes there, I was most definitely Bella in a yellow eyelet sundress, swapping spit with sexy Britward.
Now if you don't post a next chapter, I'm going to be forced to re-read chapter 7 eleventy-million times. Now don't leave me hanging. And don't leave Bella hanging. And Edward---well, he's not hanging to begin with, he's upright and vertical and I want to get back to that yummy goodness.
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you liked it! Sorry to leave you hanging ;) Soon I promise! Thank you so much for all of your wonderful reviews!
Reviewer: bannerday (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 3
Sooooo dreeeaaamy! Love Broughtuprightward. What a lovely gentleman.
Author's Response: *squee* *squee* *squee*
*fans self* You reviewed me! *does the happy dance* Thank you SO much, that means a lot coming from somone that I totally fangirl =) Oh and I'm choosing to thank you for ALL of your reviews here, I loved every one of them.
I'm glad you're enjoying my little story! I'm definitely continuing this, Chapter 8 is actually almost done. It's been a dreadfully long time since I have updated, I realize this, but RL has been insane lately. We have a 5 year old and a 1 year old and between school starting, soccer (hubby is also coaching the team this year), gymnastics, and swimming lessons, I've been swamped. Oh and of course I've been completely addicted to this tiny little fic called The Transfer for the past week. Ring any bells? ;)
Chapter 8 will be soon, I promise! Things are heating up very quickly for our favorite duo as we speak.
Reviewer: bannerday (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 2
Just adorable. I really love this. I love how they are pulling the wool over Tanya's eyes and they are falling for each other at the same time. Too cute!! "Every time I kiss you it's like the first time." Classis.
I notice you've only got 7 chapters up. Are you still writing this story? It's been about 2 months since the update. I'll be sad if this doesn't continue.
Reviewer: bannerday (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
I loved it! Absolutely loved it! The way Alice meets Jasper is hilarious. and the fact that she is instantly comfortable and not embarrassed for herself is so very ....Alice. And I loved how Edward and Bella meet. Thank God for Tanya Denali and her nasally voice and pumped up boobs. Can't wait to continue.
Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 7
Wow....don't leave us hangin! Want the next chapter up NOW!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And thanks for being my 100th review! I'm still working on the next chapter (sorry, please don't shoot me that it's not done yet) but in appreciation to you for being my 100th reviewer, let me know if there's something you'd like to see happening in Chapter 8 and I'll do my best to make it happen! I'm not making promises but if I can, I will :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Elbereth49 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 7
Please Please Please! Post more chapters SOOOOOOOOON!
Author's Response: Sorry, sorry,! I'm working on it, I promise :)
Reviewer: amvel (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 7
holy cow, where did you??? i am dying here!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry, sorry! Soon, I promise
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 7
Love it! They are SO doing the deed! Sometimes the attraction is so strong, you've just got to go for it!
Love the making out in the elevator!
I'm not a sushi fan, but I love tempura.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviwing! I've always found that making out in an elevator can be lots of fun ;) Ohhh and I love tempura too!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 5
"I asked as I sipped the hot coffee. It was just the way I liked it: a little bit of sugar, lots of milk.".....I take my coffee like Winston Wolf does in "Pulp Fiction" -"Lotsa cream, lotsa sugar"..Thought you would appreciate the Tarantino reference!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 7
Well I'm definitely starting to sweat. Figures it would end right there, but the next chapter will be EPOV, right? Anyways, excellent job, keep it up! ;)
Author's Response: Wow, you are just wonderful! Thanks so much for all of your reviews, I'm thrilled that you took the time :) Yes, the next chapter will be in EPOV.
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 6
That was cold, I really did think this would be the date chapter, oh well. I'm not gonna complain about any time with Edward. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 5
Still loving this! Can't wait to see what Edward thinks. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 4
I really love this story, it's light and fun. Great job. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 3
This chapter made me hungry...and not just for brownies. Excellent job. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
So Rob and Kristen got married huh? lol, I liked that part, great chapter. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting, can't wait to see what you do with it. ;)
Reviewer: potterkitty (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 7
I like this, it's pretty hot. Not sure we need both their perspectives for everything, like the texting. But still. Also, I hope they don't have sex in the next chapter b/c the chase is half the fun. Just sayin.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh kill me now...seriously, I've just discovered this story and I'm absolutely hooked. I just about cried when I got to the end of this chapter and realised it was the most current one.
Loving the way that you've set up Bella & Edward and now we're watching on as they try to get to know one another after a fairly explosive first meeting :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far, hopefully the next chapter will be up soon (if my muse co-operates). Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: jinlor2 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 7
Thanks for the update, it's getting hot in here!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)
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