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Reviewer: cassieleexo (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Closer

ahhh love love loved this chapter... :) i cant wait for the next!

you girls are wicked awesome



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We are so glad you are enjoying it!

 

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Reviewer: montannaleigh (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Closer

sooo thank god for the fictionators or i might have never found this story...and it totally rocks :)



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We are so glad you found it and that you're enjoying it!

 

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Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Closer

Well, even though the night at the bar was kind of an epic disaster, I'm glad that it hapened, because the alcohol removed Bella's filter and allowed them to have a somewhat honest conversation abotu the state of things.  And as much as I want Edward to fight for Bella, I want even more for Bella to realize that she is worthy.  If she doesn't realize that, she'll never be happy.



Author's Response:

The liquid courage certainly opened her up and removed her verbal filter, something that would have taken a lot longer to accomplish had this not happened.

 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Closer

OK sobbing like a baby here. Can you hurry up and get these two together you are killing me.



Author's Response:

There is definitely more talking that needs to be done, but at least this is a start!  It'll take a little time...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Closer

yeah.  had to happen, and you brought it to us beautifully.  her slightly drunk-talk rant about his pretty penis and her untouched vagina just did me in.  tears bb.  srsly.  you NAILED that.

>



Author's Response:

The liquid courage certainly opened her up and removed her verbal filter!  That scene was heartbreaking and hilarious to right.  I think Tammy and I were giggling for hours over her proper terminology...

 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: edwardsvolvo (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Closer

it ended too soon - dammit!



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Hang in there!  We update (fairly) fast!

 

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Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Closer

lemon drops and shots will always bring out the truth. cannot wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

The liquid courage certainly opened her up and removed her verbal filter!

 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Closer

Oh please tell me Bella will remember this conversation in the morning! These two need to seriously sit down and have an open conversation, lay it all on the table, and preferrably sober! But at least Bella's breakdown will give Edward some insight into Bella's thought process of the last 8 years! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

We can only hope that she remembers some of it.  At least the liquid courage opened her up to allow her to say things she wouldn't have said for ages otherwise (not sure if she ever would have made the pretty peen comment..).  But Edward needed to see that, we think.

 

Thank you so much for all of your support!

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Closer

Ok, I always go into the updates expecting to be :( and want to bawl my eyes....uh, yeah! Kinda got that feeling again. The whole scene in the car...Bella saying how she was nothing and not worth it...and how she just wanted to go back to Florida...and Edward saying she couldn't do that cause he couldn't stand to lose her again....yep, left me a big jumbled rambling mess of :(

But damn if it wasn't beautiful written as always!



Author's Response:

The liquid courage certainly opened her up and removed her verbal filter, but it lead to quite the poignant conversation in the car.  I think he really finally started to understand how damaged she is and, more importantly, why.

 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: superstarrh (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Closer

It was funny but poignant at the same time.  I hope that they can talk soon and make everything better.  Thank you for the quick update.

Jaime



Author's Response:

*hugs you*  Hoped the "pretty penis" lived up to the hype....

 

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Closer

Favorite Roller-Coaster story does it again!

Loved this chapter for many reasons --- Bella grew a set, Edward finally got to see a little of the hurt, they talked (well, a little) and maybe move a little closer. Lets see what it looks like when there's no beer goggles! = )



Author's Response:

It’s definitely a roller coaster, that is for sure!  And they did get to talk (kinda) and Edward did, indeed, get to hear what was underneath all of the pain.  Even if it was just a glimpse.

 

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Closer

Wow. An amazing chapter. I'm speechless. Poor brave, drunk Bella. She was finally able to get it all out. I can't wait for Edward's POV. I want to read him dumping the skank Lauren on her ass.



Author's Response:

The liquid courage certainly opened her up and removed her verbal filter!  We're so proud of her for finally just saying it!

You have no idea how right you are about Lauren.  Literally.

 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Crista Irene (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Closer

This chapter was phenominal!!! FINALLY we see Bella strap on a pair and say what needed to be said! I absolutely love this story!!! It's by far my favorite that I'm reading right now. Great job!



Author's Response:

The liquid courage certainly opened her up and removed her verbal filter!  It wasn't pretty but she said a lot of what was on her mind...

 

Thanks so much for reviewing!  We're so glad you're enjoying the fic!

Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Closer

You are the rulers of fanfic.



Author's Response:

*blushes*  Aw, no way!  Thank you!

Reviewer: iheartnj (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Closer

I love the fact that Bella is finally opening up to Edward about how badly his words/anger HURT her.

I still want to kick Edward in the nuts though.......



Author's Response:

Bella is definitely having a tough time, but she finally got the liquid courage to open up a little....

Don't kick Chubward!  He's kicking himself enough for all of us...

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Closer

Great chapter.



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Thank you!

Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Closer

Mother of Citrus, look at that mango!  Holy hell that was a great chapter.  I'm glad she slapped the shit out of him.  Ladies, I don't know how many chapters are left for the story, but I am in love with it. 

Whomever decided to add Em and B doing a rap together is a genious.  All I could picture was Jamie Kennedy in the movie Malibou's Most Wanted.  He was a white wanna be ganster rapper named Brad.  But his thug name was B-Rad G.

***sigh**** Love this story.  Slutty Edward pisses me off.  I hope he had his 'dip-stick' tested for STDs. LOL.

Oh, and please don't feel obligated to respond to all of my reviews.  You guys do a great job responding to everyone.  Since I review every god damn chapter, I'm sure it gets a little overwhelming to reach back out to everyone.  Just consider me your new best friend, and I'll know you still love me even without the responses.

xoxo,

Urs



Author's Response:

Oh, the Bella/Emmett rap was SO much fun!  I’m glad you liked it!  And yes, I can totally see the Mailbu’s Most Wanted reference!

 

We are so glad you’re enjoying the story and we respond to the reviews because we love you too!

Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Closer

oh wow....intense....feel so bad for Bella



Author's Response:

Bella is definitely having a tough time.

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Closer

woohoo massive progress - will she remember slapping him tomorrow !!!! Tis ok chubward - I kiss the handprint better and see I can tie you up to my bed to relieve you of your manwhoring ways!!!!



Author's Response:

We can only hope that she remembers some of it.  You may have to wrestle him away from me and Tammy for the rest tho!  LOL

 

Thank you so much for all of your support!

Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Closer

I loved it!  I am in tears.  Can't wait for Edward's POV of this conversation.



Author's Response:

Edward’s POV of this is priceless!  Tammy knocks it out of the park!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Closer

And so it begins... God I remember the heartbreak Bella i going thru.  @ least she will eventually get her HEA. :o)

Beautiful Chapter.



Author's Response:

This makes me so sad.  Heartbroken is the worst feeling ever...

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Closer

I love you girls.  THE END!



Author's Response:

We love you too!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Closer

Wow, this was a very intense chapter. I think they do need to sit down and talk things out.

Thanks for updating.

xo



Author's Response:

Yes, there is definitely more talking that needs to be done, but at least this is a start!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lost in his golden eyes (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2009 02:31 AM · On: Closer

Wow...I have no words to describe how I feel about that chapter. It's absolutely amazing and it's left me wanting more and wanting most importantly to know what's going to happen next.

I really hope they kiss in the next chapter.

Thanks, please update soon. :)



Author's Response:

It’s definitely a roller coaster, that is for sure!  Not quite to kissing, alas...

 

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Closer

Whoa!  What a chapter!!  I just hope Bella is going to remember this in the morning...because Edward confessed some pretty important stuff. I'm finally getting with why Bella's so broken.  Who is the guy leaning over her at Renee's?   What she molested at some point....that would make the "whore"comment so much more brutal, and may explain why it broke her so.  Anyway, thanks for another great chapter...loving the chubward...even though he's not chubby anymore! :)



Author's Response:

We can only hope that she remembers some of it.  There was some unsavoury characters at Renee's, but this reference is to the chapter "The Rescue".  The man over her bed was the reason she called Edward and the reason he called the police on Renee and flew down to get her...

 

Thank you so much for all of your support!

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