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Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Constellations

Things will be interesting soon.  If that is Edward, Jake won't be too happy he's back.

I'm still slightly confused about the dreams, but something tells me that their from an ancestor?



Author's Response:

BINGO! Dream, ancestor, witch...it's all gonna hit the fan eventually!

Thanks for the love.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Constellations

I want lots more of Edward.  Where will this leave Bella and Jake.  I was kinda comfortable with their relationship.  But as you know I have a hard time saying no to Edward.  I would never tell him no to anything.  More Edward please. 



Author's Response:

Good, one of the reasons for bringing Edward back now, is because Bella and Jacob we're comfortable and things need some shaking up! LOL, I think most people would have a hard time saying 'no' to Edward. I'd just be like "Whatever you want, yes please."

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: drunkenlemming (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Constellations

oh excitement! this story's just full of cliffhangers isn't it?! i'm dying to know what's up with bella and how edward will react to seeing her (i assume he saw) with jacob! i'm looking forward to the next chapter, so update soon!

 



Author's Response:

I guess at this point, you can assume Edward saw whatever you'd like to think he saw since we don't get his POV. I guess it's all pretty moot because he's a mindreader and picks up on that stuff even if doesn't see it firsthand. (but can you imagine what he would be feeling if he walked in on that!?!? wowza!)

Next chapter will hopefully make an appearance in the next few days!

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Constellations

whats really going on with bella the woman in her dream had the same last name is this her ancestor has she been given some kind of powers from pasat relations I reallylike your version of jake he is avery real teen age boy.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I tried to really drive home the fact that Jacob is infact a guy.  A teenage guy. Glad you appreciated the effort! As far as what's going on with Bella...stick around and find out! :)

Thank you! <3

Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Constellations

I thought it was going to be Victoria lerking about, so you threw me for a loop with that one. Can't wait for your next update. Okay, I can wait, but only because I have to. I am so glad I gave this story a second chance!



Author's Response:

Don't worry, you weren't the only one who was expecting Victoria.  Glad that you've decided you can wait, and YAY for second chances!

Thank ya much!

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Human

Just finished reading all 13 chapters and I find that this story is really good, I'm really curious as to what the link is between Bella's dreams, her new ability to be able to  vanish and what it may mean. Is she decended from a line of wiitches? Humm, if thats the case wonder how Edward and Jacob are going to react to that bit of info. Makes for some interesting senarios. Can't wait for more chapters, bring it on!!!



Author's Response:

Wow, I didn't know I was still getting new-comers to the story.  Welcome!  I'm glad you decided to take the time to read. :)

Yes! You've figured out where this story is heading (lol, I think some people who've been reading since the beginning are still trying to figure that out :P) And here I thought I wasn't dropping big enough hints. This will become even more apparent in the next chapter.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Human

I just hope Eddie boy doesn't ruin things!!!



Author's Response:

Depends what you you consider 'ruin.'  O_o

!!!

Reviewer: Aura890 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Human

This has been amazing.

I love the bond between them, how Jacob knows her so well, how she knows him and when he needs her to be close, how he can calm her down, or knows how she thinks. Like with Mike or when she was jealous over those two giggly girls. I just adore how she acts around him, around them how kinda old Bella is making her reapperence how she has learned from her pain, how it's still there how she knows she won't be the same but is trying.

 

I even enjoy her talks with Leah even if she did just attack her. Cause Leah doesn't pick and choose her words and Bella didn't care about that.

I just really hope she doesn't go all 'oh Edward' again cause that'd piss me off, he probably will come back as they all will and they probably do have things to speak about but he left he left and she has been through quite a lot . It'd kill Jacob if she just upped and went and I don't think she could actually do that to him either.

Like they said she's one of them now.

I'm damn curious about the dreams though, and her ability to transport away from danger... curious curious! hope to see more soon!

 



Author's Response:

Awe, I'm so glad you <3 Bella and Jacob's relationship as much as I do.  :D

Okay, I know alot of people are worried about Bella's reaction to Edward coming back.  And here's the thing: Bella is still Bella no matter what because I do my best not to go OOC.  That being said, the way Bella would most likely behave and the way I wish Bella would behave are not always the same. Now, the events leading up to Edward's return in this story are different than the events leading up to Edward's return in New Moon, so there will be differences in Bella's reaction just because of circumstance.  But there are some aspects of Bella's character (her deep love for Edward for example) that I can not ignore as an author and I have to deal with fairly if I want to stay true to Twilight. One of the challenges I enjoy as a fanfiction author is writing new plots while still obeying the fandom's perameters and characterizations.

He he, all of that sounded really serious and ominous, but all I can promise is that Bella wont do something rediculously out of character. (Let me know if you ever think I break this promise!)

Thank you for the lovely review! I hope to get more feedback from you.

Reviewer: 352twiddle (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Human

Is it bad for me to say that I'm really one hundred freaking doo dah percent a TEAM JACOB FAN!!! I love that wolf and so far in this story his relationship with Bella just makes me dance in my seat. I know i know the world is big on the whole E/B thing but I am totally rooting that this ends up a Happy J/B story. sigh here's to hoping!



Author's Response:

Of course it's not bad!! Shout it from the rooftops, bb! I love Jacob, too.  He's one of my favorite characters.  Sorry I can't give away the ending, but you just keep that positive energy going. :)

Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Human

I can't wait for Edward to show and to have a taste of his thoughts...  I also hope Bella fights to have her chat with Leah because I think it would be very eye opening for both of them.



Author's Response:

Not gonna lie, I can't wait for that either!  Once Jacob figures out that Edward can read his mind, I don't doubt he'll take advantage of it (he certainly did in the books!). Of course, that can always backfire on him...

*Points at next chapter for more Bella/Leah talk*

Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:01 AM · On: What if?

Who the heck cares about Edward?? This is just teriffic Jacob/Bella stuff!  So natural, so easy, so cute! I hope Edward never comes back!!  In fact, the twilight books had it all wrong--it should have been Jacob and Bella together.  (Don't kill me Team Edward, I'm just saying)

Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Human

Man--are you sure Edward has to come back??  This was getting so GOOD!!Can't you keep him away, pretty please??  I certainly understand Jacob wanting to keep Leah away from Bella now, but I agree with Bella that she needs to talk to Leah.  I know Leah didn't want to hurt Bella, but it would be interesting to see what she was thinking when she attacked.  And how DID Bella get a mile away from the attack??  Certain vampire???



Author's Response:

I love hearing people's dissapearing theories!  But you'll have to wait impatiently just like the characters until they figure it out. ;)

And don't think just because Edwards coming back that the story is gonna be ruined.  I think you might like what he brings to the plot; things would get boring if they were all hunky-dory!

Thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 06:34 AM · On: What if?

Who the heck cares about Edward?? This is just teriffic Jacob/Bella stuff!  So natural, so easy, so cute! I hope Edward never comes back!!  In fact, the twilight books had it all wrong--it should have been Jacob and Bella together.  (Don't kill me Team Edward, I'm just saying)

Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Human

Cool story I just read all thirteen chapters and I can't wait for more! I'm really curios as to find out what bellas transformation is. Also this is the first story that I've read that I'm not really mad that bella is with jacob. I'm strangely ok with I, I'm not sure why. Maybe its more believable the way you've written it. I can't wait to see who she ends up with though. Like I said good story! I'll be watching for the next update!

Author's Response:

Oh, no!  Another one's drank some of the kool-aid!!!!  I really need to put a warning in the summary: WARNING:  THE READING OF THIS STORY MAY CAUSE YOU TO EXPERIENCE STRANGE AND FOREIGN FEELINGS OF APPROVAL FOR JACOB BLACK.  THOSE WITH A HISTORY OF ALLERGIC REACTIONS TO WEREWOLES SHOULD READ WITH CAUTION OR CONSULT A LOVE DOCTOR IF THESE SYMPTOMS PERSIST.  I'll work on that. ;)

Ugh, it's SO hard to not blurt out the ending. :S

I'm glad that you're sticking around!...oh, and welcome to the dark side. We don't have cookies. ;P 

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Human

Ahhh bella's true nature is beginning to show its face. she survived the attack by instinct. I like that image. Bella has her own strengthcoming. she'll be able to defend herself. YAY!!! I'm loving the equall groung they are headed towards



Author's Response:

It's about freaking time that girl gets some power to go with her gumption.  Should be big thrills!

Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Human

Awww this chapter warmed my heart :) I was super happy when I found it. Y

I LOVE Emily taking care of Bella.

I LOVE how protective Jake is of Bella.

And I friggin LOVE Embry:

“Okay, just like in the dress rehearsal, doll face.” I scowled at the nickname but allowed him to slide his arms beneath my back and knees. “Wait,” he said, pausing before he lifted me, “you want me to run and get the ketchup from the fridge so I can give you a few squirts? For effect? I’m not quite getting the same thrill I did last time.”

Heee! This literally made me laugh out loud. Too good.

He nervously entered the bathroom with a hand slapped over his eyes asking, “Is everything covered? ‘Cause I really don’t want to die, and Jacob can be very, very scary when he gets the inclination. And me seeing parts of you that he hasn’t would most definitely give him the inclination.”

Yep, Jake would kill him. I love that he covered his eyes!

Oh shoot, Edwards back already? Bah. Can't you hold off just a bit?  I like Bella in an Edward-less world.

*hides from the Eddie-lovers*

What? ;)

I really hope that Bella and Leah get to talk, I'm really interested with their dynamic.

Post again soon. Cause I'm greedy and want more. Soon.

kthanks<3

:)



Author's Response:

Okay, is it wierd that i don't think the lines are that funny until one of you guys points them out?  And then I'm like, "Wow, that was pretty clever.  How on earth did I do that?"  Yes?  No? *shrugs*

Don't worry about the Edward Mob coming to lynch you. ;)  I don't think many of them have stuck around the story this long. Which is a shame, because I would love feedback from both sides.  I love Jacob AND Edward.  Just for different reasons.

I submitted the next chapter a few hours ago!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Human

I just had to tell you that I dig your Embry.  :)

I'm entirely curious about Bella and the fever and if/how she is, as she blurted out, a "dog" too. (Not sure if that's a direct quote, but the impression was left, anyway.)

So what constitutes a gigantic chapter?:D



Author's Response:

Embry is my secret lover and he gives me favors in return for him geting page time.  Shhh, don't tell anyone! ;)

The dog comment was just a side-affect her hazy mind while on drugs.  When I came out of surgery and was on meds, I said lots of random things (most of them I don't even remember, which is probably a good thing!) so I felt a need to convey that.

Gigantic, as in several pages (on Word) longer than usual.

So glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: 2myblue (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Human

I really enjoyed this story , can,t wait for more.



Author's Response:

Yay!  In the immortal words of Sally Fields:  "You like me, you really like me."

Reviewer: CleanEco (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Human

Love the story. I just discovered it last night. Adding to my favorites now.

Author's Response:

Ah, thank you!  I'd add YOU to my favorites if I could. ;)

Reviewer: Buffy_289 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Human

Terrific story. No hurry from me on the addition of Edward. I love how you have written Jacob and Bella's relationship!



Author's Response:

Ah, shucks.  You're too much.

Thank you! :)

(And I think you'll like how Edward adds to the plot.)

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Human

Hmm even though I'm more a B&E fan (when Ed's not being a dunderhead), I'm liking the interactions between Bella and Jacob here. I especially like Quil's role in the story so far though, and really hope that Leah and Bella get to spend some time together soon to clear the air, so to speak.

Hopefully Leah will not have to stay so defensively angry for very long.

Oh, and very clever and subtle dig at Edward's style of dealing with Bella's "humanity" compared to Jacob's at the end there hehe

Looking forward to finding out more about Bella's power(s) too!!!



Author's Response:

Oh, good!  I was beginning to think that no one would catch onto the Edward v. Jacob comparison.  It was completely ON PURPOSE that I gave Jacob a situation to deal with that was almost exactly like what happened with Jasper.  The entire chapter was set up to show how J and E reacted both differently and similarly to one another. *Smiles that it wasn't a wasted effort*

I love Edward, too, when he's not being stupid. Let's hope he's able redeems himself some in this story.

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Human

Noooooo! Not just a wee bit



Author's Response:

YES!! Someone who is actually looking forward to Edward coming back!  Wait...unless you mean you don't want him coming back even for "a wee bit"...um, in that case...*whistles nervously*...

Reviewer: KayCullen 2009 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Human

this is rely gd am rely intersted in what happened wae bella

an i luv th way her an jacob r

plz update soon

=)



Author's Response:

Yay, I'm glad you'e enjoyed reading it so far!

I just submitted the next chapter a few hours ago.

Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Choking

"I hope you choke."

ahahaha. Love it.

Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Human

Great update.

Is everything covered? ‘Cause I really don’t want to die, and Jacob can be very, very scary when he gets the inclination. And me seeing parts of you that he hasn’t would most definitely give him the inclination.”

LOVED that line. It made me laugh, because I could actually picture Jake's reaction. I am just loving Embry in this story, with how caring and helpful he is with Bella.

I can't wait to see how the whole 'Edward' sitation pans out. I hope he leaves just as soon as he arrives, haha! I don't want it to mess with Bella's emotions toward Jacob now that she admitted she loves him!



Author's Response:

Oh, come on. You know you want Edward to stir things up a little bit.  I'm just gonna have him stir things up ALOT. ;)

Embry is my hero.  He can carry me out of the bath any day!

Thanks for the love!

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