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Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Constellations
OH YEAH!!! THE SERIES BEST CHARACTER IS BACK IN THE GAME!!!
Author's Response: WOOT WOOT! Now THAT'S the enthusiasm I'm lookin' for! :D
Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Constellations
*sings*
"Hit the road Eddie, and dontcha come back no more, no more, no more, no more...hit the road Eddie, and dontcha come back no more!"
He's back and I say BOO.
Bella better not go all gooey-kneed and second guess her love for Jacob. If she does? I'll need wolf-Leah to pay her another visit.
Hmph.
Good chapter though, even if the ending did suck :p
Author's Response: *snickers* Wolf-Leah is a scary thought, but no worries. ;)
LOL, more and more people are incorporating song lyrics into their reviews. Love it.
Reviewer: twilightvamps (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Constellations
great story!
Author's Response: thank you, bb!
Reviewer: Katastrophe (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Constellations
Well, the Jacob + Bella and them almost having sex made me a bit ill. I have always been an Edward/Bella shipper. Is this going to be all J/B?
Author's Response: Well, I won't give away the ending, but I can tell you that Bella has not/will not stop loving Edward. He's a part of her, and that relationship will play a strong part in the remainder of the story (how could it not?). But that being said, the J/B will still be present as well, so if it makes you physically ill...then read at your own risk.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Constellations
Woo Hoo!!!!!! So, is Bella a witch? I am SO into this. I can't wait how Edward is going to impact everything. I love it!
Author's Response: Yeppers, you're spot-on! So glad that you love it. :)
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Constellations
Ah...curse them for butting in and of course, Bella is a W#$%^...I tried that story line but couldn't run with it, dispite how much I like P3....If you understand all that, Great! If not, that's okay.
And of course, Edward shows up when he is least wanted. I'm not much for B/J stories but I like this one.
Author's Response: That's cool to hear that you considered a witch storyline. I'll be trying to do my best to put a SM spin on the concept, so let me know what you think about it when you see how it turns out. I'm glad you like their relationship in this story! I've worked hard on it.
thank you!
Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Constellations
Oh Edward....I knew he couldn't stay away for long.
I wonder how he is going to react to Bella's injuries?
Hmmmm, I'm Team Jacob all the way but it will be interesting to see what happens between the three of them.
Jake is going to flip once he realizes Edward is back.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: I wonder how he is going to react to Bella's injuries?
Gah, I can't wait to write Jacob and Edward's first face-to-face confrontation! (almost for that reason alone.)
Next chapter should be up in a few days.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Constellations
I've always loved Jacob but at the same time thought Edward and Bella belonged together. When I read a Bella/Jacob story I usually stress out about Edward coming back, Jake imprinting on someone else etc. But I got comfortable with Bella and Jake in this story and here comes Edward. Now I am nervous again. I guess it was inevitable. I'm going to try to ignore all of this until I read what you have in store for them.
So back to Bella's dreams. WOW! She's a witch. That is awesome. I guess Felicity is her great great grand somehting.
I am really looking forward to Bella and Leah time. I always felt so sorry for Leah. I don't blame her for being the way she is.
Author's Response: Sorry that I'm making you so nervous! Yeah, Bella getting her own powers is TOTALLY awesome. I can't wait to get in to the thick of that plot. More Bella/Leah time in this next chapter, though it wont be as heartwarming as it normally is (lol!).
Thank you for sticking with me!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Constellations
Great chapter!
Author's Response: thank you much!
Reviewer: JaneJoke (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Constellations
A "Jacob’s Bitch. So back the fuck off" shirt. Hmmm, I want one, LOL!
Hee, hee. Anywayz, EDWARD IS BACK! (And you had to end it there!?) Uuggghhhh, another one of THOSE endings, eh? Ohh...I guess I can forgive you...
:(
Um, good luck with chapter 15 and don't let Eddy stress you out too much in the writing process, BUT!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! Can't wait for the whole Bella, Edward, angry Jake (?)...thing. But, I hope Bella's developed an immunity to Edward's "dazzling"... Poor Edward. Poor Jacob. Maybe Bella and dig up some spell from her witchy ancester and split herself in two! YAY! Enough Bella for everyone!!
...sorry.
Author's Response: LOL, I'd totally wear that shirt, too!
Yeah, this really isn't going to be a good situation for anybody involved. Drama, angst, drama, action, drama...I knew adding Edward to the mix would make things more interesting! :)
Two Bella'!?!? IDK, I certainly wouldn't mind there being two Edwards or two Jacobs...mmm. ;)
Reviewer: KayCullen 2009 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Constellations
omg a cany believe it plz plz hurry and update lol am sure th chapter is fine lol
a cany wait 2 find oot more aboot bella
=)
Author's Response: Next chapter will hopefully make it's way onto the site in the next few days, so hang tight!
Thanks!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Constellations
Things will be interesting soon. If that is Edward, Jake won't be too happy he's back.
I'm still slightly confused about the dreams, but something tells me that their from an ancestor?
Author's Response: BINGO! Dream, ancestor, witch...it's all gonna hit the fan eventually!
Thanks for the love.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Constellations
I want lots more of Edward. Where will this leave Bella and Jake. I was kinda comfortable with their relationship. But as you know I have a hard time saying no to Edward. I would never tell him no to anything. More Edward please.
Author's Response: Good, one of the reasons for bringing Edward back now, is because Bella and Jacob we're comfortable and things need some shaking up! LOL, I think most people would have a hard time saying 'no' to Edward. I'd just be like "Whatever you want, yes please."
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: drunkenlemming (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Constellations
oh excitement! this story's just full of cliffhangers isn't it?! i'm dying to know what's up with bella and how edward will react to seeing her (i assume he saw) with jacob! i'm looking forward to the next chapter, so update soon!
Author's Response: I guess at this point, you can assume Edward saw whatever you'd like to think he saw since we don't get his POV. I guess it's all pretty moot because he's a mindreader and picks up on that stuff even if doesn't see it firsthand. (but can you imagine what he would be feeling if he walked in on that!?!? wowza!)
Next chapter will hopefully make an appearance in the next few days!
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Constellations
whats really going on with bella the woman in her dream had the same last name is this her ancestor has she been given some kind of powers from pasat relations I reallylike your version of jake he is avery real teen age boy.
Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to really drive home the fact that Jacob is infact a guy. A teenage guy. Glad you appreciated the effort! As far as what's going on with Bella...stick around and find out! :)
Thank you! <3
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Constellations
I thought it was going to be Victoria lerking about, so you threw me for a loop with that one. Can't wait for your next update. Okay, I can wait, but only because I have to. I am so glad I gave this story a second chance!
Author's Response: Don't worry, you weren't the only one who was expecting Victoria. Glad that you've decided you can wait, and YAY for second chances!
Thank ya much!
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 03:21 AM · On: Human
Just finished reading all 13 chapters and I find that this story is really good, I'm really curious as to what the link is between Bella's dreams, her new ability to be able to vanish and what it may mean. Is she decended from a line of wiitches? Humm, if thats the case wonder how Edward and Jacob are going to react to that bit of info. Makes for some interesting senarios. Can't wait for more chapters, bring it on!!!
Author's Response: Wow, I didn't know I was still getting new-comers to the story. Welcome! I'm glad you decided to take the time to read. :)
Yes! You've figured out where this story is heading (lol, I think some people who've been reading since the beginning are still trying to figure that out :P) And here I thought I wasn't dropping big enough hints. This will become even more apparent in the next chapter.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Human
I just hope Eddie boy doesn't ruin things!!!
Author's Response: Depends what you you consider 'ruin.' O_o
!!!
Reviewer: Aura890 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Human
This has been amazing.
I love the bond between them, how Jacob knows her so well, how she knows him and when he needs her to be close, how he can calm her down, or knows how she thinks. Like with Mike or when she was jealous over those two giggly girls. I just adore how she acts around him, around them how kinda old Bella is making her reapperence how she has learned from her pain, how it's still there how she knows she won't be the same but is trying.
I even enjoy her talks with Leah even if she did just attack her. Cause Leah doesn't pick and choose her words and Bella didn't care about that.
I just really hope she doesn't go all 'oh Edward' again cause that'd piss me off, he probably will come back as they all will and they probably do have things to speak about but he left he left and she has been through quite a lot . It'd kill Jacob if she just upped and went and I don't think she could actually do that to him either.
Like they said she's one of them now.
I'm damn curious about the dreams though, and her ability to transport away from danger... curious curious! hope to see more soon!
Author's Response: Awe, I'm so glad you <3 Bella and Jacob's relationship as much as I do. :D
Okay, I know alot of people are worried about Bella's reaction to Edward coming back. And here's the thing: Bella is still Bella no matter what because I do my best not to go OOC. That being said, the way Bella would most likely behave and the way I wish Bella would behave are not always the same. Now, the events leading up to Edward's return in this story are different than the events leading up to Edward's return in New Moon, so there will be differences in Bella's reaction just because of circumstance. But there are some aspects of Bella's character (her deep love for Edward for example) that I can not ignore as an author and I have to deal with fairly if I want to stay true to Twilight. One of the challenges I enjoy as a fanfiction author is writing new plots while still obeying the fandom's perameters and characterizations.
He he, all of that sounded really serious and ominous, but all I can promise is that Bella wont do something rediculously out of character. (Let me know if you ever think I break this promise!)
Thank you for the lovely review! I hope to get more feedback from you.
Reviewer: 352twiddle (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Human
Is it bad for me to say that I'm really one hundred freaking doo dah percent a TEAM JACOB FAN!!! I love that wolf and so far in this story his relationship with Bella just makes me dance in my seat. I know i know the world is big on the whole E/B thing but I am totally rooting that this ends up a Happy J/B story. sigh here's to hoping!
Author's Response: Of course it's not bad!! Shout it from the rooftops, bb! I love Jacob, too. He's one of my favorite characters. Sorry I can't give away the ending, but you just keep that positive energy going. :)
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Human
I can't wait for Edward to show and to have a taste of his thoughts... I also hope Bella fights to have her chat with Leah because I think it would be very eye opening for both of them.
Author's Response: Not gonna lie, I can't wait for that either! Once Jacob figures out that Edward can read his mind, I don't doubt he'll take advantage of it (he certainly did in the books!). Of course, that can always backfire on him...
*Points at next chapter for more Bella/Leah talk*
Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 09:01 AM · On: What if?
Who the heck cares about Edward?? This is just teriffic Jacob/Bella stuff! So natural, so easy, so cute! I hope Edward never comes back!! In fact, the twilight books had it all wrong--it should have been Jacob and Bella together. (Don't kill me Team Edward, I'm just saying)
Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Human
Man--are you sure Edward has to come back?? This was getting so GOOD!!Can't you keep him away, pretty please?? I certainly understand Jacob wanting to keep Leah away from Bella now, but I agree with Bella that she needs to talk to Leah. I know Leah didn't want to hurt Bella, but it would be interesting to see what she was thinking when she attacked. And how DID Bella get a mile away from the attack?? Certain vampire???
Author's Response: I love hearing people's dissapearing theories! But you'll have to wait impatiently just like the characters until they figure it out. ;)
And don't think just because Edwards coming back that the story is gonna be ruined. I think you might like what he brings to the plot; things would get boring if they were all hunky-dory!
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 08:34 AM · On: What if?
Who the heck cares about Edward?? This is just teriffic Jacob/Bella stuff! So natural, so easy, so cute! I hope Edward never comes back!! In fact, the twilight books had it all wrong--it should have been Jacob and Bella together. (Don't kill me Team Edward, I'm just saying)
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Human
Cool story I just read all thirteen chapters and I can't wait for more! I'm really curios as to find out what bellas transformation is. Also this is the first story that I've read that I'm not really mad that bella is with jacob. I'm strangely ok with I, I'm not sure why. Maybe its more believable the way you've written it. I can't wait to see who she ends up with though. Like I said good story! I'll be watching for the next update!
Author's Response: Oh, no! Another one's drank some of the kool-aid!!!! I really need to put a warning in the summary: WARNING: THE READING OF THIS STORY MAY CAUSE YOU TO EXPERIENCE STRANGE AND FOREIGN FEELINGS OF APPROVAL FOR JACOB BLACK. THOSE WITH A HISTORY OF ALLERGIC REACTIONS TO WEREWOLES SHOULD READ WITH CAUTION OR CONSULT A LOVE DOCTOR IF THESE SYMPTOMS PERSIST. I'll work on that. ;)
Ugh, it's SO hard to not blurt out the ending. :S
I'm glad that you're sticking around!...oh, and welcome to the dark side. We don't have cookies. ;P
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