Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Together

fuckin hell im trembling after that long hot lemon

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Interrogations and Declarations

I want this Edward! How can I get me some Edward NOW?

Oh funny story to share with you. My hubby asked me what got into me last night. He said that in my sleep I normally push him away and try to kick him out of bed. He told me that I was all over him; rubbing, hugging and kissing him. Little did he know that I was dreaming about Edward and Bella's Non-Sex Sex. I had to just play it off as I must have been having happy dreams about him. Poor uninformed man!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Soulja Boy and Shakespeare

They are so strong...not telling one another they love each other and not taking the next step in their relationship. I would have caved.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 04:43 PM · On: The World According to Masen Whitlock

That is so funny and sounds just like a four year olds little rambling mind. Out of the mouth of babes, right? Loved it!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 03:25 PM · On: The Beginning of the Hypothetical End

Poor Edward...his life is so screwed up right now.

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Six Weeks

"We’d steal lawn gnomes and rearrange holiday decorations into sexual positions. We used to race the motorized shopping carts around Wal-Mart at four in the morning."  OME, I did the very same things!  I was laughing so hard and loud...thanks for the memories :)

I'll never be tired of Uncle E!!  Whoo-hoo!

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:38 PM · On: The World According to Masen Whitlock

I think you did a great job!  4-5 year olds always ramble a mile a minute with no warning when they change subjects!  It's so sweet and I could totally picture Mase saying this to me :)

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:37 AM · On: The Beginning of the Hypothetical End

YAY!  I love this!  I love the sarcasm, it cracks me right the heck up!!

Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 05:36 PM · On: FInding the Melody

*sigh* There are no words. No possible words to tell you about the perfection that this story is...Perfect, perfect, PERFECT fucking final chapter! Equal parts crazy HOT, intensely romantic and LMAO hilarious.  Brits--I can't thank you so much for writing this story...I reread parts all the time and EVERY time it makes me smile and swoon.   His marriage proposal was so perfect for them, and his words are beautiful...Is it wrong that I am in love with your E and B way more than the originals, even?  Regardless, I eagerly await and sadly dread the epilogue...How can we say good-bye?

P.S.  I have followed you to Laid Bare...dark and dirrrrty...I like it!

Author's Response:

Your review made my smile so hard, my face hurt! :) Thank you so much...for everything. I'll have the epi done soon, and i'm so happy you've been reading LB. I've got a lot of plans for it. You are amazing...thanks again! :)

Reviewer: vittra (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 01:06 AM · On: FInding the Melody

awesome story.  a bit harder to follow in this version than the BPOV one because of the erratic jumps between scenes, but it works well just the same.

 

and you win for the most ridiculous emo line ever, which was "She was happy, even if things were always hanging over our head like grumpy bear’s fucking rain cloud. I knew he was my favorite Care Bear for a reason. I am one angsty bastard, after all."

All angst should be discussed in relation to care bears :D

Reviewer: vittra (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 02:45 AM · On: The Beginning of the Hypothetical End

nooooooooo!  how can you skip his POV of the bella drunk night.  it may not have anything too new and insightful, but it'd be pretty damn cute :)  plus you can play with the ide that her perception isnt always right, maybe stuf happened she didn't ememver, or things happened differently.  maybe they secretly had wild hot monkey sex that night but he roofied her :P

Reviewer: obsessivebehaviors (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 11:16 AM · On: FInding the Melody

Okay!  What's left in Dad's office?  I'm going to guess some lace from Bella's undies, or maybe a forgotten button from her blouse?

This was one of the best proposals I've ever read.  The naked part was outstanding.  Loved the comment about the lack of clothing.  How do you tell your friends that you were proposed to in the nude?  Thanks for adding the addition of Emmett’s comments regarding marriage – Rose is going to be pissed.

Karen