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Reviews For Bedtime Story
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 14

If there are those reading in this forum who don't know The Black Keys then they are not true Twihards. True Twihards know The Black Keys from the Eclipse soundtrack. Agreed?



Author's Response:

LoL! I don't know because I don't actually own the Eclipse soundtrack. LoL. I just LOVEEEEEE the Black Keys :)

Reviewer: TwiHeart13 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 14

AWWWW. I am head over heels in love with this story. PLEASE update sooon<33



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: wifie_b (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 14

Aww...Absolutely loved the sweet sentiments but come on!!  That was like a big tease :)!!  I can't wait to read the rest of the night ;).  Just kidding...sorta!!  LOl, keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 14

Oh, the UST is killing me! I hope you don't have another emergency in the works to kill their progress! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

No more emergencies, I promise! LoL. The next chapter will be alllllll lemon :) Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 14

YAy for update!!!  Please have the next one ready soon!



Author's Response:

I'm working on it! LoL. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 14

The end of the chapter was sweet. And holy wall almost-sexing, Batman! That was hot :) Can't wait for them to have a little more fun...which makes me sound like a bit of a perv lol



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the way things are moving along :) and hey, you wouldn't be reading it and I CERTAINLY wouldn't be writing it, if we both weren't just a little bit pervy :) LoL. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 14

Awwwwwwwwww!  is right. How sweet...and sexy in nothing but boxers!



Author's Response:

Very sexy! LoL. Sorry to leave it *right.there*, but don't worry! It's coming, I promise! :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 14

Listening to the way you write Edward is so heartwarming.  He is completely in love with Bella and the way you write his emotions is wonderful.   How you wrote what he was thinking when Bella spoke of Bella, was so cute!!  I had to laugh.   How fast love has grown for the two of them.   Love it all.  Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for such a lovely review!! and thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: Teahoney (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! Sharing an earth shattering kiss even before knowing each other's names? Way to go! 



Author's Response:

:) Thank you for the review, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 14

I love this story :). 8 can't wait for the next chapter. Will there be any angst? I just wanna prepare myself, just in case......

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! there is *possible* angst coming up, but not in the next chapter. I think you can guess what flavor the next will be :) (Psstttt. It's citrus) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2011 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 14

I LOVE The Black Keys! Where did you see them live?

I saw them last weekend at Bonnaroo (if you don't know what that is, go to bonnaroo.com and learn about the amazing awesomeness that is Bonnaroo), and they were AWESOME.



Author's Response:

Yay, another fan!! I saw them here in Tampa at Next Big Thing last year, in December. They were amazing, so jealous you got to see them so recently!!

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2011 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great chapter. love how Jake and Bella changed their relationship and stayed friends.

Just adore the Black Keys. Never had the chance to see them. I also like the New York Pony Club.

Looking forward to the next installment.

merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Yay, another Black Keys fan!!! They were AWESOME live :)

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2011 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hubba hubba!!!!! Oh my...I wanna get mah phone sex cherry popped too!!! lol



Author's Response:

:) LoL. Sadly, mine was popped long ago. But it was fun! LoL. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2011 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 11

gahhhh!!! u so mean!! just...how could u Do that--AGAIN!?!?!! You cockblocker you!!! O__o  LOL  Girl that was so wrong....

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 13

Whew! Is it hot in here?

Author's Response:

Nah, it's just Edward LoL. :)

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow. Um, did I mention *swoon* ??? 

Sigh...  ^_^

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

*swoon* oh I would SO play along too!!! All night bay...ALL Night!



Author's Response:

Me too! :)

Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 13

Love love love it! The phone sex was pretty hot. I can't wait for the night they spend together :) Please hurry with the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you! I'm hurrying, I promise :)

Reviewer: lovefool (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 13

Yummy. So glad this fic is back!



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: jinlor2 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 13

Sweet, sexy & hot...



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: amvel (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 13

Really, phone sex?



Author's Response:

Yes. Really.

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 10

Well it't about dam time. Now for god sakes let them jump in the sack I can't take much more. I'm not getting any younger here. So let get to it. Love ya

 

Lilly

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 4

Edward, brownies. whip cream oh where my mind is going. I may be old but I'm not dead all the parts still work. I hope you keep writing for a very long time. Love the way you tell a story girl.

 

Lilly

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 13

Mmmm, that was a nasty tease...I loved it! Can't wait to see what happens next time around. Excellent job. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

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