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Reviewer: purpleblanket (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Yay! It's a good story, you've developed your charcters well, but it's time to hit the action part in the next chapter or so. It seems like most of the story should be in there. Hostage drama sneaking around etc.
But, I do know this is your story, not anyone elses.
Best of luck with it! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Well this was really good! With acting like adults and dealing with situation.I love Bella's idea for Dooley's can't wait to see how they pull it off.I can't wait to see how the date goes!!!!
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Much better! Edward got over his craniorectinitis, and Bella saw Trevor the sleaze pusher for what he is. I'm glad she didnt' automatically jump into Edward's arms, but she still agreed to give him a chance. Life is very seldom all or nothing, so I think this is very real.
Love it!
Author's Response: craniorectinitis, I LOVE IT...LOL!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Good for Andy! He gives really good advice. The sweet Edward showed up with the romantic gesture and pulled Bella back in for the start of something really sweet. I just love this story!!!
There are two thoughts I have and that worry me: 1) Will Edward walk by while she is visiting Mama D and while the sleezy Trevor be there too? I can see old Edward overreact to that. 2) Will Sleezy Trevor try something that Edward would misinterpret? I hope not. Afterall, Trevor is a doctor and he can't be that sleezy, right?
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
I'm glad Edward got a clue.
Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Yay!!! They finally got their heads out of their asses!!! Update soon???
Reviewer: wophers (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
I gotta confess I'm worried Edward is about to mistakenly mess it all up again.
Reviewer: loetken (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Great chapter! Bring on the lemons!!
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
I'm glad that Edward seems to be finally getting it together. Not that I think it will be smooth sailing for them from here on out. Where would the story be in that? And there's also Trevor to consider. Something tells me he's not going to take a rival lying down...
I felt sorry for Jazz at the end, though. With Alice bouncing up and down on his lap he was either in pain from her movements, or extremely turned on (it's hard to tell from the "distressed look" comment). I'm betting the latter. Not that it stopped me from cracking up!
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
GO EDWARD!! Now you're talking makes some damned sense!!
I'm glad Bella is chilling. I also hopes she realizes that while his timing might have sucked, he SAID IT - and clearly has issues from his past and needs some time to work thru them. Bella has her own shit - she has this total Disney Princess fantasy of the dude on the white horse, sweeping her off her feet, and proclaiming his love in the perfect setting, while tiny birds sing above their heads....OI! Grow up, Bella - Walt Disney is dead, and did the feminist movement teach you nothing?? lol...romance is lovely, but the content is more important than the setting. And give the guy a break for saying it at all!
Glad the lunch gig worked out for them. Hope the date goes well, too! And she needs to tell Mr. Trevor Asswatcher to get to steppin'.
Thanks for the zippy update!!!
Reviewer: littlelarinda (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Cool fic
Reviewer: Vista Negs (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
hey :)
eeeeek! I'm so happy they're finally getting their crap together. I know, I've never reviewed.. something happened the other day that changed that! So anyway, I adore this story, it makes me laugh so much, and I have to admit the fustration of how stupid slutward is! haha! Great work!!
ew. i just realised i finished every sentence with an exclamation mark.. aren't you just picturing a hyperactive bimbo now?
:)
Author's Response: LOLOLOL...Well if you're one then so am I, because I always tend to review my favorite stories I tend to use far too many exclamation points in them. I cite Emancipation Proclamation, The Elemental, and Hydraulic Level 5 as examples. It makes me happy to know that my work excites you. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Ohhh yeah. This chapter was waaay better! Finally Eddie turned to a good person for advice!!
Eee I'm excited for the first official date!!
& Rock Band is awesome!! I love being the hott drummer...LoL
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Much better, I'm glad Bella was willing to listen to him (of course the chat with Em helped a lot). Their dinner will be interesting to see.
I'm wondering how Bella is going to break it to Trevor that she really doesn't want to see him. She seems like too good a person to not do the day thing she promised, but I can tell she doesn't want to even do that.
Rock Band is so much fun, I think Mama D will like that idea.
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Awesome as usual!! Glad to see they both grew a set and could actually talk!
Reviewer: NiCullen76 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
ok i like the story I do but I started reading it cause of your description of the hostage situation & everything at the hospital. When do we get to that part?
Reviewer: Natural_Disaster (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
i thought it was funny that Edward got slapped. and men are so clueless sometimes. but its nice thats he is trying to try.lol. and that doctor guy Tyler? should stay away from Belle...for ever amd ever.
Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
yes!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I started reading this before work but was not able to get to the end. I have thought about it all day. We can't really blame Bella for not believing Edward. Granted she may have over reacted just a tad bit...How many of us have actually slapped someone we loved? Not me. Pissed enough to slap, yes but not carrying thru. The slap worked for the story...dirty alley and professing of love do not go hand in hand. I just hope she will forgive him.
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
This was so good! I actually searched for this one at ffnet and I am in Ch 45 (within 3 days).
Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
Bella's being a bitch but then again I don't know her past yet....please update soon so I can figure some of it out. Thanx
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
he should have told her the night before.. but bella shouldn't have acted like that...
Reviewer: tg10781 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
One of my favorite stories on here! Thank you so much for the frequent updates!!!! Keep em comin!
Reviewer: tkdalton (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I just found this story and it is absolutely fabulous! Please keep up the good work. Your writing is fantastic and your version of the characters is very believable. I love that you have made Bella the Doctor in this one. I keep waiting for the prologue scene. Not sure how long it will take before we get there but it will be interesting when we finally do. Hopefully Bella will figure Trevor out soon because i really don't want to see her get hurt again. You have said many times that you have multiple chapters already written. Can you give us and idea of how long you think this story will be when completed. I quess that is enough for now but please keep up the good work i can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm working on chapter 51 right now and still have a bit to go. I'm guessing between 55 and 60 by the time I'm done. Last count I was over 300,000 words! LOL! Also the prologue won't happen for a while yet. It hits about halfway through what I've written so far. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ginnassar (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I really love the story, and thanks for updating all the time.
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