Great story! I'm glad they got to kiss before the drama begins!

I just reread this chapter. Edward did beautifully!!! Fully redeemed his epic flub of the night before. Hooray! Now we can enjoy the courting period of this relationship!!  

Good grief - if I move in with Alice, I'd kill her perky ass within a week! Although the thought of possibly catching sight of Jasper's naked goodness...whew! Might be worth the perky!!   Very kind of Bella, btw, to give Emm a push out of the nest and into Rose's place. It'll be good for them both. Emm changed his life so much for her - now she can give him something back.  It's going to be a big change all the way around - Emm gone, Jalice in, and the rest of the hang-out boys no longer in her house all the time! She may suffer from SWATtie withdrawal! (the withdrawal suffered from the sudden absence of SWAT hotties!!!) Hmm, perhaps Edward will pick up the slack and be All Things SWAT to her! >:>  prrrrrrr...

Egads! Things are finally turning around, and I just remembered your prologue....Miss Bella is gonna be taken hostage!! Edward's gonna pop a nut when that shit goes down!

Looking forward to the DATE chapter!! Bring it on!!!!! :)

 

Author's Response:

SWATtie...I like that!  LOL!  Yes, things are about to get a bit more interesting.  Thanks for the review(s)!  

I am so glad that they have both realized that they have feelings for eachother now they just have to make it work. I can't wait for Alice to move in. Bella isn't going to know what hit her. She will definately be looking more like a girl. Trevor is really creeping me out. Why in the world is he touching her all the time. The vibes she gets should be warning her. hopefully he doens't try anything. It will be interesting to see how Alice, Bella and Rose do while the guys are away for two weeks. Please keep up the good work. I have become totally addicted to this story in such a short period of time.

 Trevor u better not Fuck this up.. but like all assholes he will try SIGH

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Well this was really good! With acting like adults and dealing with situation.I love Bella's idea for Dooley's can't wait to see how they pull it off.I can't wait to see how the date goes!!!!

Good for Andy! He gives really good advice. The sweet Edward showed up with the romantic gesture and pulled Bella back in for the start of something really sweet. I just love this story!!!

There are two thoughts I have and that worry me: 1) Will Edward walk by while she is visiting Mama D and while the sleezy Trevor be there too? I can see old Edward overreact to that. 2) Will Sleezy Trevor try something that Edward would misinterpret? I hope not. Afterall, Trevor is a doctor and he can't be that sleezy, right?

Yay!!!  They finally got their heads out of their asses!!!  Update soon???

Great chapter!  Bring on the lemons!!

GO EDWARD!! Now you're talking makes some damned sense!!

I'm glad Bella is chilling. I also hopes she realizes that while his timing might have sucked, he SAID IT - and clearly has issues from his past and needs some time to work thru them. Bella has her own shit - she has this total Disney Princess fantasy of the dude on the white horse, sweeping her off her feet, and proclaiming his love in the perfect setting, while tiny birds sing above their heads....OI!  Grow up, Bella - Walt Disney is dead, and did the feminist movement teach you nothing?? lol...romance is lovely, but the content is more important than the setting.  And give the guy a break for saying it at all!

Glad the lunch gig worked out for them. Hope the date goes well, too! And she needs to tell Mr. Trevor Asswatcher to get to steppin'.

Thanks for the zippy update!!!

hey :)

eeeeek! I'm so happy they're finally getting their crap together. I know, I've never reviewed.. something happened the other day that changed that! So anyway, I adore this story, it makes me laugh so much, and I have to admit the fustration of how stupid slutward is! haha! Great work!!

ew. i just realised i finished every sentence with an exclamation mark.. aren't you just picturing a hyperactive bimbo now?

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Author's Response:

LOLOLOL...Well if you're one then so am I, because I always tend to review my favorite stories I tend to use far too many exclamation points in them.  I cite Emancipation Proclamation, The Elemental, and Hydraulic Level 5 as examples.  It makes me happy to know that my work excites you.  Thanks for the review!

Much better, I'm glad Bella was willing to listen to him (of course the chat with Em helped a lot).  Their dinner will be interesting to see.

I'm wondering how Bella is going to break it to Trevor that she really doesn't want to see him.  She seems like too good a person to not do the day thing she promised, but I can tell she doesn't want to even do that.

Rock Band is so much fun, I think Mama D will like that idea.