Edward could have a concussion and Bella half a arm.  He was getting SOME that night.  Look how fast he took her to the in the dark.  A real good chapter.

need a fag or two and a cold shower.. that was so hot...

hope we will find out about edward and lauren, what really happend between those 2

WHAT HAPPEND TO THE NEXT 2 CHAPTERS? IT SAYS U HAVE NOT UPDATED SINCE LIKE OCTOBER 09! ARE U GOING TOO? PLEASE DO!!!!!!!!

STILL LOVING!!!!!

LOVED IT!!!!

When are you finishing this? :)

 

Hey, I'm just saying. It's been a while.

I really think that Edward should just move on and start dating other people. He can't man up and tell Bella how he feels and for the most part she acts like she's not interested. I mean liking someone shouldn't be this hard, he needs to re-evaluate and decide if Bella really who he wants to pursue.

I don't want to be an annoying reader, but are you going to update?  It's been 6 months and I'm just wondering if you were going to finish or if real life came up and this was scrapped.  I really hope everything's ok and that we get the ending soon.

Author's Response:

You're not being an annoying reader at all. *I*'m being an annoying writer, by leaving you guys hanging for so long. :(

I know I keep saying it, but I really do plan on finishing the story. Soon. I've got a vague plan of attack in my head, so hopefully that'll get me motivated. Don't give up on me, though, because I promise I've not abandoned the story. :)

I've just managed to pull away from this story to review, it is honestly that good that i thought i may not have the will power to stop! hehe, but after reading the end notes after chap.5 you definately deserve to have my full attention for a review because this story is one of the best.  Im only a short way through and already your story has me hooked! B&E's personalities are perfect, it's great to see them so normal and the flasbacks just tie everthing in so well.  It's refreshing, so thank you for deciding to write this great story and sorry but i've gotta get back to reading coz i'm having withdrawls hehe :) will review again soon.

Author's Response:

I'm so sorry for taking so long to respond to your review. I'm usually so much more on-the-ball about this stuff! >.<

Anyway, thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying - and I'm flattered the story was able to grab you like that. :)

Rawr! Can't wait to read more!

just came across this. Love it! love the getting to know each other bit. One of my biggest pet peeves in Twilight etc. was that Bella and Edward never REALLY talked about anything to bond over and they never really listened to each other very well. Anyways, I like this version very much and I'm off to continue with the rest of the chapters! =)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked what you'd read when you reviewed. Hopefully the rest of the story (and how long it's been since I last updated) didn't scare you off too badly. :)