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Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Bring Me Your Love

These boys have really taken me on a journey.  I am so happy for them.  I positively beaming right now! :D

Reviewer: jajo (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Bring Me Your Love

So sweet.  You've completley won me over.  :)

Reviewer: Tigersmom (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Bring Me Your Love

*sigh* Love the quote, love the chapter.

Reviewer: AshLove (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Bring Me Your Love

Beautiful, as you story always is.

Reviewer: BeCullen1 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Bring Me Your Love

Well you know I love this story. Great chapter. Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Bring Me Your Love

Oh my... *smiles and sighs* I'm so happy for them. It was lovely. So perfect, it brought tears to my eyes. Fine work, Draven

Reviewer: MauraRenee (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Out of the Ordinary

Love it! :D I saw it and about screamed...I've always wanted Edward to be gay...and now he is!!! That sounds odd, but it's so true, I've always wanted him to be my gay best friend! Yay this is at the top of my list! :D

Reviewer: vbfb1 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Bring Me Your Love

YAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! that was fanfuckingtastic i am so sad this tory is going to finish soon i will miss them but in the same token i can't wait for the next chapters to see what happens.

keep up the excellent work

Reviewer: vbfb1 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Reconciliation

as usual another wonderful story that I start reading and then when it is finally getting to the really good stuff theres no more.

can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Reconciliation

Hoping up and down in my seat, with a big ass smile on my face. My heart is light and happy again. All is right with the world. I've had one hell of a day reading this! Absolute bliss. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Dilemma and Dream

Love Jack for this line alone:

“Then drink up,” he encourages. “Because if you’re in love with Edward Cullen, you need these a hell of a lot more than I do.”

And that dream! I was so worried and confused! You are evil!

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Visitors Expected and Unexpected

Oh Edward! Oh Jasper! Please kiss and make up!

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Sacrifice & Alice

Loving it all. Jasper's reaction to hearing Edward on the phone, to Alice coming to visit, and yes, hello - picturing Carisle getting steaming in the shower......

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 21 - According to Carlisle

I totally did not see that coming! I am so happy for Edward that he opening up. I think you protrayed Esme's and Carisle's characters and reactions to perfection.

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 18 - In Retrospect

At least Edward's behaviour is true to his character, miracles don't just happen over night. I know in my heart of hearts this will come together. There is just a lot more suffering to endure to make sure its worth it. *Sigh*

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Aftermath

Trying to keep it together....I have faith they will be together again, I just don't know when or how. I definitely enjoyed both POVs, it is helping my heartache.

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Awry

NO! This can't be happening! My heart is so heavy, my eyes are teared up...say it isn't so!

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Sweet with Heat

I am having the best day off reading this story! I'll try to come up for air every once and awhile and review, but hitting the bright red button NEXT is way too tempting!

 

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Unpleasant Memories

Wow, Edward's revelation was a breath of fresh air, a deep heavy breath, but still fascinating.

Bear claw tub, and claiming Jasper's bed as "our bed" - you always know how to tease us along to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 10 - In Jasper's Apartment

Jasper cooks too! Mamma mia, you're killing me over here!

I really liked that as much as Jasper wanted to run to the door before Edward even got to it, he waited 3 seconds - absolutely adorable.

Can I just say, I am really enjoying their love story. The revelations, the emotions, the insights - there is just so much here to take in. It is a beautiful story and look forward, as always, to the next chapter........You are the reason by the way that I don't eat dinner until 10pm! There is always "Just one more chapter honey, I promise...."

Oh and did I mention I'm addicted to hot boy on boy love?????? :-p

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Vancouver

Melting, totally melting. One from the extreme hotness, but also for the extreme romance of it all.........

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 6 - On The Ledge

I meant to say in my last review my favourite line was this

I shout as each paroxysm sucks me into a vortex of dancing lights and sizzling raindrops. 

Totally blew me away. I wish I was a writer so I could fully express myself, but the best I can come up with is that is was sheer poetry. Stunningly beautiful ---not to mention HOT!! But also, romantic and gorgeous.

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 6 - On The Ledge

ARGHHHHH! I am never going to buy, let alone cook dinner tonight! Maybe just one more.......my husband is a very patient man.

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Morning

I'm looking forward to Jasper making good use of that shower ledge....

Great character developement.

Incredibly sexy closing line. I'm supposed to go grocery shopping now.....um yeah, that ain't happenin', need to read the next chapter right away!

Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Gift

Sigh................ *Our Bed*- Perfect, absolutely perfect.

Here I am getting all hot and heavy and now I want to cry because it is just so BEAUTIFUL! Amazing...

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