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Reviewer: GreenPuma (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Giving Thanks
Wow--unbelievable. Fucking. Chapter.
Reviewer: JillM12 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Trojan Horse
Well I confess I've not reviewed at the end of each chapter because I just wanted to carry on reading .. yup, all 20 chapters in one sitting.
Adore those boys - very teary about all the relationshp twists - and yeah, would really LOVE the happy ending ...
Well 'observed' and beautifully written - it's all about love .. yes, life without relationship .. well, you know ...
May it end well for them (or we may end broken-hearted!)
Eagerly anticipating the next installment.
Jill x
Reviewer: bitemypillows09 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 6 - On The Ledge
I'm loving this story, but since you brought up condoms, I have a question. Why do they use a condom during sex but they don't during blowjobs? I mean they say that they both swallow everything the other is giving, so why the condom? Don't get me wrong, not criticizing, just curious. Thanks
Reviewer: bitemypillows09 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Gift
Blossoming manlove, I never knew it could be sooo beautiful. Thank you.
Reviewer: Amber_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
Amazing. Absolutely amazing
U brought me to tears
The wedding, the vows, the juicy love-making at the end lol. Beautiful!!! All beautiful.
I loved it.
Reviewer: bitemypillows09 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Confessions
Great chapter, I think I'm really going to love this story.
Reviewer: bitemypillows09 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dangerous and Subversive
Wow, that was pretty amazing!!
Reviewer: bitemypillows09 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Out of the Ordinary
I have seen this story several times, but never read it because I'm not that big a fan of slash. Then I heard Moi and Christina talk to you on Twigasm and heard how much they loved it so I decided to give it a try. I have to say that it didn't gross me out, I'm frightened to say that I loved this chapter. So on to ch 2. Thanks!
Reviewer: tuleangel (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
Ok so I am finally all the way through and I still love this fic so much I can't believe it! Even though this was my first gay Edward (and gay Jasper), I went into this completely open minded and as I said in a previous review, you have totally changed the way I look at gay relationships. I think the thing that suprised me the most was how much I enjoyed them getting back together in the previous chapter and the amout of intimacy and love and devotion you infuse into their story. I am completely in love with them and their story that you have woven so well.
I thought the wedding and reception were beautiful and romantic. The readings provided during the ceremony were beautiful and perfect. I agree thst the virtual reception was an added bonus to reading this, however I read with Corona not bubbly LOL
I thought given their previous intimate situations the wedding night would have been more. I agree that going without a condom was a huge step in their relationship, but I expected more than just one time with Jasper bottoming and that would be it. I guess I expected shower lovin with bj for both a little recovery and then more sex in the bed. I guess they needed a nap in the limo or they are holding out for Italy?
Overall, I have enjoyed this story and this chapter especially. This chapter looks like it took a lot of time and a lot of work. I look forward to what happens next.
Reviewer: tuleangel (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Terms of Endearment
Ahhh....he kissed with his eyes closed. That's so great!
I don't mind telling you that this chapter made me hat and bothered too!
Reviewer: The_empath (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Out of the Ordinary
I'm not a big reviewer, but I had to review this story.
It's one of the few I have on my favourites and I've been re-reading it for days. The wedding was beautiful, wonderfully written with the special touches I was beginning to expect from you.
Amazing characterisation of Jasper and Edward, making them as believable and endearing in this story as they are in Twilight.
Sad but glad there won't be a sequel, but this would be hard to top!
(hope you give them a wee one in at the end, but not sure my ovaries can take the thought of Daddy Jasper, I'm broody with just Uncle Jasper).
Reviewer: SummerBabe (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
OMG i teared up as i was reading this chapter. I loved it. It was amazing and perfect and just right.
Reviewer: loopylady (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
this has just been a phenomenal story- my first gay edward in fact. wow- what a way to start! it was just frickin amazing. sexy, but not without emotion, loving but not cheesy- just perfect. you did a great job of plot and well... everything! congrats!!!!! can't wait for the honeymoon ;)
Reviewer: tuleangel (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Vancouver
You can pretty it up with fancy words like "biosolids." Dude, it's still poop water. That's funny, but sad at the same time. You must hate your job.....
Bluetooth was invented for phone sex! That is efffing genius and so true lol
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
Excellent work! I cried again! It was beautiful!
Reviewer: tuleangel (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 8 - The Gamble
I have had soo many mornings like that....like every morning lol! However the flipside is that I don't have anyone sending me flowers to cheer me up :(
Started at Chapter 1 a few days ago and am loving your story. I was skeptical at first reading the description and seeing it was a gay romance, but the gals on the Twigasm podcast were raving about it so much I thought I would give it a try.
I'm not exactly sure if this will come out right but this story has totally changed my view of gays and their relationships. I'm not saying I was anti-gay, more on the fence. Not sure which side was right and which side was wrong. Now after reading a little bit of your story (and I did skip ahead and read bits and pieces of your most recent update) and other similar stories on this site, I feel like no one is wrong or completely right either. We (I am a straight woman btw) are all the same. Whether you are gay or straight or bisexual all it is is different kinds of love and we all have a right to experience love no matter what form it comes in.
That's enough of my ramblings for now, but for some reason Jasper getting the flowers and them missing each other so much triggered me wanting to get that out :)
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
Oh boy! This chapter had it all! I loved the Velvetine Rabit quote...Halo...and their wedding night. It was because of your story that I created a profile on Twilighted. I just had to comment on the story during the beginning chapters. I didn't say much but appreciated the story.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
The wedding was beautiful and so perfect. I loved their vows and the special touches. Great chapter!
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
ahhh that was beautiful. i hope my brothers commitment ceremony is just as beautiful.
Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
Awesome story! I am sorry to see it end... I will be looking out for other stories by you!
~Sapphire
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
Wow, that one was a doozy!! So much ground to cover!! But so full of the feelings and love that they have come to share - a pretty fairytale wedding and just as beutifully described!!You've done an incredible job with this - and yes, I will miss this story as well!! But of course, I see that they have grown into men and into a fulfilling relationship - and how interesting is it to read about dirty dishes and late auto ins bills??
Thanks for writing this!! ;)
Author's Response: "and how interesting is it to read about dirty dishes and late auto ins bills??"
Absolutely correct. You've explained it very well; and this is the reason why there won't be a sequel to OTT. However - a spinoff from the OTT story, featuring Jack, is in the works!
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
This was so touching!!! Beautifully written.
If the world got over all these pointless prejudices, there would be a lot less heartache. Thank you so much for this wonderful story.
Reviewer: Skeptic (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Vancouver
That was beautiful.
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
I had tears in my eyes when I read what songs they picked to dance to at their wedding. What a perfect day for them. It was beautifully written! Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story!!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 30 - The Knot
Beautiful! Absolutely lovely ceremony :) This is such a great story.
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