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Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Amazing Grace

This is such a heart warming chapter.  I love it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I thought it was especially heart warming...it's nice to be out of the dark angst!

Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:46 AM · On: The Plan

hahahahahahahahahaha alice is evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wtm



Author's Response:

yeah, I've always pictured Alice as a little evil...knowing the future also gives you the ability to twist the future...little on the evil side!

I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story!

Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Where I Belong

crying again

wtm



Author's Response:

Sorry....I didn't mean to make you cry!!

I hope you're enjoying it through your tears!

Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Mercy

i cant find this song on the internet who is the artist???? love this story so far totally cried when the old guy died.

wtm



Author's Response:

Let me see...this chapter was Mercy...the song was: 

Mercy ~ One Republic
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qDU3EVAct9c

I'm not sure if the link will come through, but if not, go to Youtube and put in Mercy - One republic and you should get it.

Yeah, Jessie's death was tough...based on real life.  Sweetest and most tragic story I've ever heard.  Try and imagine both your parents dying within hours of each other, the tragedy and beauty of it has always touched me.

Thanks for taking the time to leave me a review!  I appreciate it!

Reviewer: dazzled22 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Awakenings

I really really like this story, and i like where it's going. Please update sooner!



Author's Response:

Well hello there!  Thank you so much!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story!  The newest chapter is with the beta!  I'm hoping to have it updated soon!

Thanks again for the review!  I apprecaite each and every one!

Reviewer: msj2779 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Awakenings

I love your story.  Your characters, especially Edward and Bella are so real.  My biggest pet peeve is when someone has E and B fall in love at the drop of a hat.  We all know it is going to happen and we love when it does but my favorite part is the falling in love part and some people try to rush it.  You dont and I love it.  Please continue your story. I love it!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for your reivew.  If there's one thing I've said from the beginning this is an exercise in realism.  I like to read fics where things are realistic.

I appreciate your reivew, I love it when someone likes the pace, it's slow for a reason and the fact that you appreciate that makes me all kinds of happy!

The next chapter is being beta'd as we speak...I'm hoping to have it out soon!

Thanks!

T

Reviewer: gray_matters (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Awakenings

I just wanted to let you know that I started your story today - I saw the recommendation on Ficster.  I just couldn't stop reading!   Your characters are very real and incredibly believable.  The emotions are raw - I've laughed, cried and smiled my way through so far.  I want to thank you so much for sharing!

~ Andrea



Author's Response:

Wow, that's a wonderful review!  I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it!  I've enjoyed writing it.  It's a labour of love that's for sure!  I'm glad to have evoked such emotion from you, that's the best compliment I could ever get.

Thanks for reading and for leaving a review!  i apprecaite the support!

 

♥ T

Reviewer: Lead69 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Awakenings

Wow Tammy!  You were not kidding about giving us a decent chapter and I can so see what you meant about there being no right place to break this chapter up at.

Esme just knowing straight away and Emmett and Jasper getting all big brother while Bella and Edward take baby steps it all works so well.

PSA on CF well done!  Hope is one of the lucky ones making into her teens.  You have done an exceptional job bring this character to life, so real and not at all pretty.  As always I look forward to reading more of your story.  Lea

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  Really, thanks!  I appreciate your words and your support.  I'm glad you liked the chapter.  I'm working on the next one tonight...

I've got a date to write...and maybe a few other things...can't decide on a POV at this point...that's always dangerous!

Reviewer: niuforever (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Awakenings

I have been reading your fic from the beginning, and while I have always thought it was well written and entertaining in its own right (I've always been pulled to dramas), I have been unfortunate enough to have been experiencing something in my own life that has allowed me to identify with the feelings that Edward and Bella have felt over their pasts. Even though it is fiction, it is nice to know that I am not alone. Thank-you for writing this story, and developing thses characters as you have.

On another note, I know a fair amount about CF, and I think you are doing a wonderful job of portraying a character that as a teen must face what most of us as adults can barely fathom. Living life while dying is a terrifying prospect, and Hope does it as no one else can. She is real, sarcastic, and scared. In truth, all of us are, about alot of silly things, she is facing death with grace. I applaud your characterization and realism. Amazing work.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'm flattered that you can identify with the characters of the story.  The one thing I've always tried to do is keep it real.  I see no villians in this, just people who've made mistakes in their past.  How do we get over those mistakes and make the rest of life better.  We all have demon's, we just need to learn how to overcome them.

I'm sorry for whatever past problems you've had and I'm so very flattered you've found any commonality to this story.  I wanna give you a hug!!

This is the best review I think I've gotten and I thank you for taking time out of your life to not only read my story but to also share a part of yourself with me.

hugs....

Tammy.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Awakenings

Really good chapter! Hope does add something very special to this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I love Hope.  I'm glad she comes through to everyone as well as she does.

thanks for your support.

Reviewer: justareader (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Awakenings

I'm sorry about your friend with CF, it's amazing that you've been able to give a real voice to a disease which affects so many. I loved so many parts of this chapter, from your description of the photographs capturing Edward's changing life to the interaction between Edward and Bella as they both search for something to heal them. I hope Bella can overcome her past, it seems like she's got a little farther to go at this point than Edward, but I can't wait for when that happens. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Bella is still in a differnet place...she's healing but it's been a slower process and she hasn't had her ah ha moment yet...but she will get there, I promise....it's been happening slowly but surely with her.  The next few chapters are very important.

Thanks so much for reading and for leaving a review...I appreciate the support.

Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Awakenings

Great chapter!  I was so excited to see the update alert in my email.  Can't wait to see what happens next. :)



Author's Response:

:-)

Thanks so much!!  I'm glad you like it enough to get excited about an update! 

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Awakenings

HEY this chap was fantastioc and really emotional i love the way you portray hope =]



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!  It was a rollercoaster with the emotions!  Probably could have been split into a few different chapters but I really just wanted to get the day done and out there...now onto the next!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Awakenings

that was a sweet chapter! i'm glad that edward realized that he loved bella!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Yep...he realized it this chapter!  And now he's ready to move forward with it!  thanks for reading!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Awakenings

Tammy...that was an amazing chapter!!  You did a phenomenal job!  It was so worth the wait!  I love the small changes that are coming about in Bella.  I love that we learned a little more about Edward's past!  It was fantastic and very enjoyable!  Thank you for a great update!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Jessica!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!  I'm glad you see the little things!  A lot of people don't always catch those!

Thanks for reading and leaving a review!  I apprecaite it!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Awakenings

Tammy!! That was perfection!! Holy Hell!! Just about lost it when he came to the realization that he was in love with Bella. Leave it to Esme to make things crystal clear!!! Looking forward to more bb!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I'm glad you liked it...Emse set me off too!  She kind of snuck up on me and inserted herself...but it worked!!

Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Awakenings

What a lovely chapter.  Hope really is the perfect mixture of fatalism and, well, hope.  She accepts the realities of life, and still appreciates the beauties that she can find.  She's also willing to be open and honest with others.  She'll be a wonderful foil for getting Edward and Bella to open up to each other.

I was so happy to hear Edward admit his love.  He may go slowly, but I do hope it's surely.  Convincing Bella bit by bit that he is safe, he can be trusted.

Congrats to your daughter!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much!  I'm glad you liked the update!  Edward will win her over, he already has really, that was the purpose of the Sincerely Edward's...he's opening up with him without even knowing it.

I'll pass on your congratulations to Ally!  It was a great accomplishment just to get as far as she did!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Awakenings

I read this last night on FF. But I just have to tell you that this story is beautiful and always worth the waiting for new update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for coming here also!  I appreciate the support!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 01:04 AM · On: Awakenings

Great chapter. I loved all the family interaction on Thanksgiving, especially the Esme/Edward bit in his room. I got all teary-eyed when Bella was looking through the photos of Edward.

I'm glad Bella's opening up. I liked the conversation between her and Hope. I've grown to love Hope. I'm glad she's there for Edward and he's there for her too.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!  Thanksgiving was fun to write, trying but fun.  I loved writing the pictures section...I just could see them all so clearly in my head, I'm glad I was able to get them through!

I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Awakenings

"She's the one, Em.  She's my beautiful." - You did it again, leveled my heart and affected my soul. God, how I love that. It's just simply gorgeous writing Dear.

And so now I pray for Bella to begin to open up her soul to Edward. For what lays before them will be glorious and consuming. With your magnificent writing there can be no doubt. 

Please update soon. This is all wonderfully divine.



Author's Response:

Wow...you make me feel so special!  thanks so much for your wonderful review!

I love how passionate you write about it...you humble me!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Awakenings

OK -- I have to tell you this.  This is so creepy!  I was thinking about this story, again, a few days ago.  I even checked to see if I missed an update --- yesterday.  And then you update today!  I may be psychic! (well, in regards to this story)  :)

Another incredible chapter.  I love that Bella is opening herself up more.  I understand why she is scared and cautious.  I truly hope that she continues to allow herself to live and love again!

Edward, oh my Pieward.  I just adore him!  He broke my heart when he was talking to Esme, realizing his feelings for Bella and crying.  Pieward should never hurt!!

The progression of their friendship/relationship is truly beautiful.  It is amazing to watch their growth.  I so love it!

Hope is such a remarkable person.  She is brilliant, insightful and funny.  I enjoy her so much.  I constantly find myself hoping that she will be alright. 

Great job!  I am looking forward to more!!



Author's Response:

We're mind melded you and me...

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, it was a doozey to write!

Pieward thanks you for your compassion!

Thanks again for your wonderful review!  I appreciate your support!

Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Awakenings

Another wonderful chapter. It's nice to see Bella slowly coming out of her shell. I love that Hope has picked up on Edward and Bella's relationship even though Bella doesn't want to see it. Hope is an amazing character. Keep up the great work and I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story!  Hope is wonderful, I really do love her.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Awakenings

this is a wonderful story. I really love hope. she's a sweet,sassy kid. reminds me of myself as a kid.



Author's Response:

:-)

Thanks!  I'm glad you can identify with Hope.  She truly has a place in my heart!  Thanks for reading and leaving the review!  I appreciate it!

Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Awakenings

I can't believe I screwed that up, too.  What I meant to write was "naught", meaning "nothing".  I guess I was so anxious to show how smart I think I am, that God decided I needed alittle dose of humility!  I apologize.



Author's Response:

no problem!  I corrected it with the A...so...no harm.

Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Awakenings

"self pep talks were for not", seriously? wouldn't that be "for nought?" Never mind....please write more and faster. I had almost decided you weren't every going to write another chapter.

Author's Response:

Sorry, the chapter does go through usually two different beta's plus myself.  We don't always catch everything.  Thanks for pointing it out for me.  I'll correct it.

Timing is difficult.  I was on vacation for the last couple weeks without a computer and I do have work and kids so, I do the best I can.

I do have the next few chapters plotted out and a couple of them outlined already.  I just need to write the next one then flesh out the next couple.  Hopefully it will be soon.

I'll do the best I can.

Thanks for the review.

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