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Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Onto the Sidewalk

LMAO ... they definitely need a taxi! Thank God they are finally stepping it up. Can't wait to read the next chapter - loving this story :)



Author's Response: Thank you!! Isn't it terrible when a week of them pining away, feels like forever!? I hope to have the next chap. wrapped up soon! Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Onto the Sidewalk

nice!  can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to have it posted, lickety split ;) thanks for reading!

Reviewer: EdwardianVelvet (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Onto the Sidewalk

you're such a tease...



Author's Response: Sigh....I know. I so didn't mean to be....the chapter just kind of ended itself there. I was frustrated too. Thank you so much for reading though, despite my being a terrible tease.

Reviewer: Chicsarah (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Baby Bok Choy

Love, love, love!  I am sorry Bella had to leave, I could have read about that walk all day!



Author's Response: Yay...thank you for reading and responding! I'm so glad you like their sweet walk...SF is the best place for sweet walks:) again...thank you!

Reviewer: foxster70 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Baby Bok Choy

I am loving this story, very different.

You took me back to my youth with the Smiths and the Cure.

I have now got Love Cats and Hang the DJ in my head.

I look forward to then next chapter.



Author's Response: Just so you know, Love Cats was exactly the song I had in mind for Bella in her room! (and i personally loooove Hang the DJ!)Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Baby Bok Choy

awesome chapter, glad they went to lunch & she wasn't afraid to meet his friends! I hope they get to kiss after Thursday xxx so will they be texting any this week before the show or have any surprise meeting on the bus or at lunch?? this is great story, can't wait for next chapter :)



Author's Response: Thank you! A walk through SF is super romantic to me too! Next chapter should be out fairly soon...I really appreciate you reading and responding!

Reviewer: little_star (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Full Blubber

I SO SO SO love this -- it could not be funnier or wiser or more perfect.



Author's Response: Um.....I want to take your note and use it as a blanket. Did you set out to make somebody's day? Because you did. Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to respond. I mean, really....wow.

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Baby Bok Choy

Love it



Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks so much for reading and responding!

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Baby Bok Choy

Ok, so you have to know this - I sqealed all the way through this chapter.  It was so fun to read!



Author's Response: Yay! *claps and hops* I squealed when I read your note! thanks so much! And thank you for reading and taking the time to respond!

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Full Blubber

so far i love this story.  nice to have an older bella and the sf setting is a nice touch, since i live there.  keep it up.



Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much for reading and for your review! I hope you continue to enjoy, and I'll try to do the City justice! Thanks again!

Reviewer: ashleyKatee (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Full Blubber

update soon! I love this story and I cant wait to see what happens! :) :) :) ;)



Author's Response: Will do! :) thank you so much - I'm thrilled you are enjoying it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: britablue (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2010 06:58 AM · On: Full Blubber

Happy Thanksgiving my dear =) I'm thankful for your wonderful story! I hope Bella realizes that she can have everything and more with sweet younger Edward and that Jacobs not worth the tears.... Well keep up the wonderful work *cheers*



Author's Response: Wowowow! Thank you- You made my day! I'm thankful for you! Thanks so much for reading and for your kind wordsouTou are so right... sometimes it's hard for girls -even the grown up ones-to realize who's worth the tears! Happy Thanksgiving to you!

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Full Blubber

WOW, what a punch in the gut for Bella...been there, done that! can't wait to see where to take this story, I am loving it!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: Uuggh, I know! :( Thank you so much for reading and for the response! So Glad you are enjoying it! Happy thanksgiving!

Reviewer: tansastrid (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Fish face & peep toe booties

Hi, I love your fic is very sweet.
up date soon.
Tks
Astrid

Author's Response:

Awww, thanks! I'm so glad you are enjoying it! The next chapter is on the way...THANKS so much for reading!!

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Fish face & peep toe booties

she can't??? of course he will assume the worst even tho it may be something stupid!! oh my, I cannot wait for the next chapter, please post soon, loving this story :)



Author's Response: :) she better have a good excuse! Hey, I am so glad you are enjoying the story! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Chicsarah (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Fish face & peep toe booties

what is Bella thinking? She should definitely go back out with him! I love your story though!



Author's Response: I know!! Who would say no to Edward!?! :) thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Fish face & peep toe booties

Mmm Hmm.  Just the way to snag a hot guy......make him work for it.  LOL



Author's Response: LOL, Soooo true! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Forest Nymph

very sweet! I totally understand why she didn't want to go to bar with his friends cos that would have been too uncomfortable on first night. so glad they exchanged numbers! hmmm, so will they be texting each other soon???? texts are always fun LOL  please update soon :)



Author's Response:

:) I'm glad they exchanged numbers too - I couldn't wait for them to run into each other again! :) I have another chapter in the queue. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! I hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Baby Deer

hmmmm, glad they are finally getting to eat her mushroom raviolli LOL ;)

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Giddy

so glad she ran into him again, but of course she had to or else it wouldn't be a good story would it? anyway, I am loving it so far :)

Reviewer: ubuhall (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 11:48 AM · On: No Cabs

she better take the bus again tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!! LMAO



Author's Response: :) the bus can be verrrrry romantic....:) thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Chicsarah (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Forest Nymph

I am really loving your story!  I like Bella and Edward.  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thank you!! A new chapter should be up soon! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing....I appreciate it so much! Hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: rpattzgirl13 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Baby Deer

I'm liking the story so far!  I grew up the CITY so it's kinda neat "seeing" these places.... love Slanted Door.  Can't wait for Edward & Bella to get together!



Author's Response: Yay! *claps like a little girl* Thank you! I think the City is so super romantic...swoon! Thank you for reading and I am so excited for when they finally get together too....Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Forest Nymph

Love it



Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thanks for reading and responding!

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Forest Nymph

Can't wait to see where this goes.  I like how you've added the little touches that show the difference in age.  Video games.  HA!



Author's Response: Wow - Thank you so much! And I love that you like the age difference pieces....it's been interesting trying to channel a 25 year old boy:) thanks so so much for reading and reviewing!

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