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Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 08:08 PM · On: Present Day - Part I
huh? only saw black and white lines...not story for epi...? boohoo major bummer :-(
Author's Response: This is so weird...some can read it and some can't...idk...I tried to upload it again. I'll see what I can find out. :(
Reviewer: ram2001 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 07:31 PM · On: Present Day - Part I
i was loking forward to reading part one but all that comes up is a blank page w/ white boxes
Author's Response: What the heck?? You're the 2nd one to say that...I'll see if I can repost it.
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 05:13 PM · On: Present Day - Part I
well i hope edward makes it out of this ok!
Author's Response: ;)
Reviewer: beng_326 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 03:44 PM · On: Present Day - Part I
mind if you post this chap again? it's all white spaces that i can see apart from your AN.
Author's Response: Try refreshing the page and let me know if that works...it's happened to me before when reading a story. SO SORRY!! :(
Reviewer: twilightgirl224 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 12:55 PM · On: Present Day - Part I
Oh. My. God. It took everything I had not to cry picturing Edward in that hospital bed looking like that...
I'm VERY anxious to read the update next weekend!!!!
Author's Response: Trust me...I cried! LOL Hang in there love! xoxox
Reviewer: s3xyr0s (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 01:35 AM · On: Epilogue - Everything
omg!!! i love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! Enjoy it!! :)
Reviewer: Mrs_Dynamint (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 12:53 PM · On: Epilogue - Everything
Congratulations on your completed story! First, I appreciated that you concluded at the logical end of this part of Bella's life. I can understand how something you have nourished for such a long time is hard to end, but too many fresh writers ruin a good tale by continuing on " just to write SOMETHING" as you so aptly said.
Second I appreciated the amount of detail you furnished in the description of the wedding. It was enough to form a stunning visual, but not enough to make me want to slit my wrists. I am a firm believer that unless you are the one getting married NO ONE really wants to know the entire hors d'oevre menu, every single flower in the bouquet and what type of under wear the bridesmaids had to purchase. (You catch my drift I am sure).
Finally I loved that continued to be very consistent with the dramatic characterizations in the epilogue. Bella will always be a Mom first and it was cute that she was distracted enough to notice Robbie slinging around the ring pillow and his difficulty with the stairs. Her joy at her FOUR children being together on this day gave me a clear picture of what hers and Edward's future would be like. Thank you for that. I have loved this story from the beginning and very happy that you brought it to such a perfect ending without being overly sentimental.
Will there be a sequel? Here's to hoping...
Mrs. D
Author's Response: You're reviews always ALWAYS make me smile. Your support and love of this story, understanding of the characters, and my writing humble me. THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart! I do have a glimpse of the future in the works for you guys, and I hope you like it! You're wonderful! Much much much love!! <3
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 04:47 PM · On: Epilogue - Everything
I thoroughly enjoyed this story! I discovered it last night, and just finally got to finish it. I couldnt take the time to comment each chapter, as i desperately needed to make it to the next page. Very good job. Well done :)
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! I am so excited that you loved it! :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 04:34 AM · On: Epilogue - Everything
Great ending. I am so happy for them. Such a wonderfully sweet ending.
Thanks for writing and sharing this story with us.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your support thru this!! You've been wonderful!!! xoxoxo
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 07:16 PM · On: Epilogue - Everything
Loved the wedding :) I'm so sad this story is over :(
Author's Response: I know....me too...but it just felt right...but stay tuned...I have another one in the works...:) Can't wait to share it with you guys!! xoxoxo Thank you for all your support...you've been AWESOME!! xoxox
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 06:23 PM · On: Epilogue - Everything
im glad that they got their happy ending
Author's Response: Me too!! Thank you!! xoxox
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 05:47 PM · On: Epilogue - Everything
No thank you for sharing this amazing story with me. I did not want it to end I loved it so, but you could not have ended this story any better then you did. I know these two will have a life full of love and their new family will live in love forever. Thank you for just being you.
Lilly
Author's Response: You're one-in-a-million girl! I have something new in the works, so stay tuned! Thank you again for your undying support!! xoxoxo
Reviewer: twimasch (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Only You Can Love Me This Way
loved it!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :)
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 01:16 AM · On: Prologue
June 27th and so is my son. I will be 50 and he will be 11. One thing I can tell you that he really doesn't like Robert Pattinson. I think he thinks that I am going to leave my hubby for him. (Maybe just for one night) hehehehe THANKS.
Author's Response: Hmmm...maybe we can figure something out! LOL I was kinda hoping it was closer to Nov 18! ha!!
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Only You Can Love Me This Way
GREAT LEMON!!!!!!Edward is all I want for my 50th birthday. Can I have him??????THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING . Sher
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! When's your bday? Maybe something could be arranged! Lol xoxo
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Only You Can Love Me This Way
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Only You Can Love Me This Way
so sweet and everyone should have an edward!
Author's Response: Amen!!!
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Are You Gonna Kiss Me or Not?
WOW............JUST WOW....................Edward is some type of operator. Talking to Jacob about marrying Bella. I can't believe Jacob didn't punch him in the face. THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL AND THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sher
Author's Response: It's a perfect fantasy world....remember? LOL Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 10:18 AM · On: Prologue
I could not believe my eyes when I checked my email this morning! You are awesome!
Loved the lemony goodness! I am so happy for both of them....they've come a long way!
Author's Response: Yay!! Glad I could make you happy!! Thanks for coming back to read!! xoxo
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Are You Gonna Kiss Me or Not?
I'm so happy for them. That was such a lovely proposal.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Only You Can Love Me This Way
Lemony chapters should not make you nervous. Your writing is a wonderful thing to read. You make Edward come alive for me oh and Bella to. I so want my owmn Edward to play with. It is really nice to see how far they have come. I hope they stay that way through the rest of their lives. Oh hell I have to go to work till next time,
Lilly
Author's Response: Thanks Lilly!!! You're awesome!! Thank you!!
Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Only You Can Love Me This Way
It was amazing!!
To have loved & lost.....then find each other & wait for the commitment before sex! Getting the kids & ex permission? Yep, he's perfect!
Author's Response: <sigh> If only...right??
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Only You Can Love Me This Way
I don't smoke but I need a cigarette. I want an Edward too!
Author's Response: Hahaha!!!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Only You Can Love Me This Way
i would love to stay in bed all day with sexy edward! keep the updates comming
Author's Response: Meeeee toooooo!!!! xoxox
Reviewer: Bella MacLeod (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Are You Gonna Kiss Me or Not?
You sure do have a way with words,and know how to put romance in it's right place!!!!!!!!!You have no idea how many times I cries while reading this.....Please finish it soon...would love to read the outcome you have planned!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVE IT,I LOVE IT,I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is so sweet!! The next chapter is in que! Hopefully it will validate soon!! :)
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