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Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part IV
Yay! They kissed and made up, thank god!
Talk about dramatic though! What, five panic attacks, a potential divorce and CPR to finally make up?!
It's awful So romantic.
Go Bella & Edward & Future Vampire Change!
WOO!
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
OMG! Haha, that took ages. Lol. All the messing around I thought they'd never do it.
10/10
Reviewer: salesgirlone (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
great story!!!!
Reviewer: Lotus (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
WOW! I just got done reading this chapter and I can tell you it was worth waiting for...lol.
Thank you for staying true to the charactors. Sometimes people go over the top but I love how you portrait especially Edward. So far I am enjoying it. I will post more comments when I read more chapters.
Thanks for the good story!
Reviewer: lookingforhoofprints (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
Ok, so I wasn't incredibly into this story, until this chapter, especially with the scene in the living room after the reception. You did an incredible job with the exquisite description in this chapter; I almost feel like I could reach out and touch the emotion. Great job, I will most definately keep reading :)
Reviewer: Shiloh Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...
That was absolutely amazing. I cried at the wedding - physical tears, that was how much you moved me. Wow!
Reviewer: Leigh-Anne (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
Your story is delicious and the quality of your writing is wonderful. Thank you!
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
My heart is breaking for Edward.
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 11- Burning
Wow....truly at a loss right now...so well written
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part II
Poor Bella..poor Edward...absolutely heartbreaking.
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part III
OMG! My heart is breaking right now...
Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
What I really like about your story is that it's EXTREMELY well written, for one thing. You should really think about writing a book.
Also, you made Bella what she is - a newborn. I'm not hating on other stories (because on the contrary I love them all) but when they turn Bella they turn her into this newborn who has amazing restraint who doesn't have to work at all. She has no taste for humans and thinks they smell bad sometimes. She doesn't even like animals in some stories.
But Bella IS a newborn. She is going to have the strong and uncontrollable urge to eat humans. You described it perfectly - perfectly how she felt when the humas were at the door. I didn't even like how in Breaking Dawn Stephenie Meyer made her out to have amazing restraint.
Not even Carlisle had that sort of restraint when he was turned. I am just glad to find a story where Bella is a regular newborn, and not some amazing two-hour vampire with the restraint of a three-hundred year old vampire!
But don't get me wrong - I love ALL the stories!
~jemm101~
Reviewer: mitruluvedwrd (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 9- Warmed By the Fire
Speechless!!!!!
Reviewer: Stephanie Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
Please for the love of all things holy..please UPDATE!!! It's been way way too long...Just give us a little hint when you will? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! YOur killing me here..lol!
Reviewer: DanniCullen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
Update soon pleeeeease??
Your story is definately one my faveourites on this whole site. I love it.
Reviewer: insanityrules (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 4- Fire and Ice
Excellent!
Reviewer: trishachristine (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
update anytime soon!!!!!??????????
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
ive finally caught up and read through all the chapters. now i can sleep and wait for the next update to this story. phew!
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 15- Rapture
very sweet
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 14- 20 Questions
lolz
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 13- A Love Worth Fighting For
my goodness. so much drama in every chapter! hahaha. but its good cause it keeps me on the edge of my seat, and whats the point of a story if it doesnt surprise you and keep your heart racing while waiting for it all to unfold?
Reviewer: ambersky (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Vile
rly like this story, wats happening with the next chapter? been a while would like to read more of ur goodness haha
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 12- Opening My Eyes To the Sun
im so friggin tired, buti cant go to sleep with the story like this. i need a happier ending to sleep peacefully. this is just mean
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 11- Burning
i swear to goodness, if edward and/or bella doesnt want to be with one another for some reason or another, im probably gonna have an aneurysm. actually-those run in my family, so it might not be a lie, haha
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 10- Decision
this is so friggin intense. i think i stopped breathing for a couple of minutes, haha. and i teared up
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