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Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
anti-cool! Please update soon!
Author's Response: I know...sorry...I hate being anti-cool...next one up on Saturday!
Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
I just found this story today. It's so cute. I just love your Edward & Bella and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Glad you found us - thank you for letting me know you're liking the story!
Reviewer: Liskiss (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
I love the hell out of your Edward! He's such a nice guy, but in a very believable way. Keep this up because it's become one of my favorite, favorite stories!
Author's Response: Thanks - really! I love hearing you love the hell out of this boy - I do, too!
Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
I love the playfulness! This is such a sweet story. I can't wait for more - thank you!
Author's Response: Thnak you - love hearing you are enjoying the story!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
Oh my god yessssssss!!!! I can't wait! They r so precious
Author's Response: They're getting there, and I hope you think the ride is worth the wait!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
he is too hot! i hope that they have some fun together!!
Author's Response: They're going to have all sorts of fun, I promise!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
Charlie was brilliant. What a great way of letting Edward know not to touch his daughter without having to say it.
I think that Edward is going to have to spell things out for her repeatedly! I am relieved that he finally said it to her.
Can't wait for the rest of the date!
Author's Response: I think Emmett burned Charlie's retinas. I love Charlie! And now that Edward's feeling more confident, he's not going to let anything get in the way of something he wants!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
Edward is too dang cute. Great job with the inner workings with Bella's mind vomit. Loved the chapter and the little teaser...girl! Keep up the good work. ;)
Author's Response: Thnak you! Edward's on it now!
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
Ohhh!!! I remember that first hand hold on your first date... the way you just melt inside and start giggling and squeeling in delight inside your head and chanting 'he liiiiikes me, he really liiiiikes me!'. Sigh, it's been a damn long time since i last had a hand hold :(
I can't wait for the next chapter, especially if the teaser's anything to go by!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!
Author's Response: I know - is there a better feeling? That first contact, the giddiness, the heat, the happiness...le sigh...Next chapter up on Saturday!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
Yay! I'm loving this story, and the quick updates you provide. Can't wait to see how the date goes, now that they've cleared the air a little!
Author's Response: Thank you! They're going to have some fun now that Edward's got his feet back under him!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
You are a meanie but we love you anyways! Good chapter, so are we getting the first kiss next chapter, tomorrow?
Just kidding!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! And no one is more anxious for that first kiss than Bella!
Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
What's really mean is that little teaser at the end...can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response: Oh, they're going to have some fun eventually, don't worry! I'm not that mean...well, okay, maybe just a little...
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
Silly Stacey Hsmilton...
YAY!!! I love this! You didn't make Edward a jerk, like a lot of people write him now, and for that I love you!
I laughed so much when Edward told Bella why Charlie said those things... The principal's office... really? Wow, Emmett. I guess the hotness runs in the family XD
Author's Response: Edward can be genuinely nice and a good, non-broody boy, and still sexy. I thought I'd give it a shot - glad you like! And Charlie's just awesome...
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
And then Charlie opens the front door? hahah...great update girl! Cannot wait to read more
Author's Response: Thanks! More coming on Saturday.
Reviewer: njdevil30718 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
She's gonna kill Charlie! I can't believe he asked him THAT!....i hope all their chats go as honestly as this one went....i like that they are so blunt with each other
Author's Response: It's time to get the air cleared so Edward can get his game on, right? And I love me some Charlie...
Reviewer: buggybell13 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
U NEED TPO WRITE MORE! AND FAST!!!
THESE LIL CHAPTRERS ARENT ENOUGH FOR HOW LONG U TAKE!
WRITE MORE AND TAKE UR TIME, OR WRITE THE SAME AMOUNT BUT FASTER!
I MEAN COME ON, IM DIEING HERE!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Trying to update twice weekly to make up for it! Hope you're enjoying it anyway, though!
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
*sigh* Edward in a hockey jersey....you are sooooooooo clever! Ok! Communication established, phone #'s exchanged. Progress!
It's official! Detroit vs. Phoenix in first playoff round! I've always felt the first round is always the hardest to get through. Look at how many times the Wings have crashed and burned in the first round....yet when they get past it, they make it to the finals. Go Wings! Let the octopi fly!!
Author's Response: If he can't be naked - or mostly naked - he might as well be wearing a hockey jersey, right? Ha!
And I never thought I'd say this, but I miss buying raw squid...
Reviewer: butifuldevine (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
Ok so normally I don't review until after I finished with a story, but I couldn't pass up the opportunity to tell you how fucking funny and amazing you are! I laughed all thru this story so far. Alice smacking his ass, The human ping-pong ball hahahaha it was absolutely entertaining. I'm actually about to head over to your thread and see how often you post because I can't wait for the next one. Have a good day
-C
Author's Response: Thank you for breaking your habit and letting me know you're enjoying the story! I don't have a thread for this in the forum, but I update twice per week, every Saturday and Tuesday - I'm hoping I can keep to that schedule. The story is complete, it's just not completely beta'd yet!
Reviewer: ga4ever (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
Hi, loved this chap.... and how would I like to be in Alice's place when she grabbed Edward's ass :)) hilarious ....
keep on updating, xx
Author's Response: Thanks - I don't think any of us would mind grabbing a little something if given the opportunity, huh?
Reviewer: ga4ever (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
OMG, how would I like to be in Alice's place when she grabbed Edward's ass :))) hilarious :)
They are so cute together :) and now, they even have their phone numbers....
So, go on girl :)))
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
I like the cute way he walked away! I could just visualize it!
Author's Response: He just couldn't take his eyes off her - aww!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
I like the cute way he walked away! I could just visualize it!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
Are you trying to kill me? Seriously? Edward in a dress shirt and tie AND a hockey jersey? Oh my vagina! LMAO
Author's Response: Laughing again - I know! The guys in my HS did this every when they had a game. Had to put it in the story because...just...GAH!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
yay!!!!!! we're making progress!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Finally! Their big first date coming up soon!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
great chapter they are finially going on a date yay
Author's Response: I know, finally, right? Thanks!
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