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Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 6 The Wolves
Excellent chapter. I can't wait until Edward get there! More please!
Author's Response: Thanks! And I'm working on the next couple of chapters as we speak.
Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 6 The Wolves
wild edward is on his way! can't wait to see how he is. very curious how he will take it :)
Author's Response: I will tell you this. he won't shut up!! Arrggh I have nothing but utter respect for SM, Edward is a very difficult character to write. I think he is too complex for me but I'm trying my best. Thanks again for reviewing.
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2008 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 6 The Wolves
Every time I read one of your chapters, I am left with an overwhelming urge to call Alice and soothe her. I worry for Bella, but she is all crazy and doesn't really know what is going on right now anyway... it's Alice that I am feeling the worst for!
Author's Response: Yeah I know what you mean, I feel really sorry for Alice too. For once she is completely helpless, and she cannot see Charlie and that scares her too. Thanks again for reviewing.
Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 6 The Wolves
Of course I like the story. A lot! You clear up one cliffhanger just to set up another great cliffhanger. Sooo now a very wild Edward is coming back to a traumatized, catatonic Bella who may still believe that he murdered her family. Auuuuuugggghh the supense!!! Update soon. Please. You've got to write my favorite star-crossed couple out of this mess.
Author's Response: I can't make you any promises ;P Thank you so much for taking the time to review and for leaving such a great review.
Reviewer: Chelsea (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 6 The Wolves
Oh gosh! I'm sitting on pins and needles waiting to see what happens next. Good story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far. Thanks too for reviewing, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 6 The Wolves
Edward was living underwater! If this wasn't a horrible situation that'd be freaking awesome!
Author's Response: I thought so too! And I'm pretty sure it hasn't been done before. Thanks for taking the time to review, I do appreciate it. Keep on reading!
Reviewer: KellyCullen (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
It was good!! But I wanna know what happened!!
Author's Response: Me too me too!! :) Thanks for taking the time to review, I appreciate it :)
Author's Response: Me too me too!! :) Thanks for taking the time to review, I appreciate it :)
Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks for taing the time to review, I appreciate it :)
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
Ooooh I am so intrigued! I really cannot wait to read more! Your cliff hangers are just entirely way to good and leave me just craving more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoy them :) and thanks for taking time to review, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2008 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
I can't tell you how glad I am that you did not just have her wake up and be all "hunky-dory" just because Alice came to talk to her. It is good that she keeps lapsing into this semi-catatonic state... especially since it *really* does not look like it was an easy death for the rest of her family. Some authors have Bella get over things far too quickly - no matter what the trauma - she bounces right back. This is not the case with most people. KUDOS!! APPLAUSE!! - more please...???
Author's Response: What a really nice review! Thank you so much for that! I've already written the next two chapters, one is with my Beta right now and the other I'm still tweaking it a wee bit afore I send it to her. Thanks for taking time out to review, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
Come on now, you've beat around the bush enough....what really happened?
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. I appreciate it. Sorry that you are getting a wee bit impatient. The pace will pick up now, I just had to get Bella's past out the way. I hope you begin to like it again soon.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
I love this story. I wish I found it sooner. I am dying to know what happened. Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far and thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
loving the story so far. I can't wait to see where you go with this!
Author's Response: Glad you are liking it! Thanks for taking the time out to review, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
I want to know who was there!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time out to review, I appreciate it. I'm glad you are wanting more :)
Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 2 Resolution
Very Interesting...I am....curious of where this will go!
Author's Response: I'm glad it's caught your interest. I hope you continue reading. And thanks for taking time out to review, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
Ugh!!!!!! Where is Edward! I need to see/read him!!!!!! Gah! Sorry, I'm not very patient. :(
Author's Response: LOL that's ok, I'm impatient too. I miss my Edward. Hopefully he will appear soon. Thanks for taking the time out to review I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
this is really good, please update...
Author's Response: Glad you are liking it and thanks for taking the time out to review. I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 Alice's Vision
Re your response to my last review. I'll be sticking around. How could I not. Despite my frustration, it's mostly caused by a serious lack of self control and an unhealthy amount of curiosity. I want to know it all, and I want to know it now. Mostly I'm just looking forward to whatever you have in store next. I wouldn't be nearly as hung up about this if you weren't an excellent and enthralling author. ~Mia
Author's Response: <whew> I'm glad to hear that. I felt bad that you disliked it. And thank you so much for the great compliment!
Reviewer: chloe9 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
I like this story, I can't wait to find out what really happened.
Author's Response: Glad you are liking this so far. I hope you stick around. Thanks for taking the time out to review, I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
WoW! what has bella gotten herself into now?!?! I love the original plot twists you've created. The whole storyline is so different than most AU New Moon fics I've seen. This is really one of the most suspenseful, and interesting things I've read in a while. Not at all predictable. I can't wait for more. This is definetly worth finishing. Sorry no one's reviewing, but their definetly reading, so they must know what an awesome fic it is! KEEP IT UP!!! XD!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a great review. I do appreciate the time that it took to review. And I hope you stick around and continue to enjoy the story :)
Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
You have got me SO curious about what happened to Charlie and everyone in this story! Awesome chapter and I can't WAIT for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to know you are liking it :) Thanks for taking the time to review, I do appreciate it.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
This story is very intriguing. I am very interested in how everything is going to unfold. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it. And thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
This is good.Update soon
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it! And thank you for reviewing, I appreciate the time you took to do so.
Reviewer: Mallers (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
loved it!!!! it is so good!!! i can't wait to read what happens!!
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying this. Thanks for taking the time to review, it's appreciated! :)
Reviewer: arra584 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 5 My Past
This is a great story, Donna. It definitely intrigued me from the first moment you sent it to me. I'm as anxious as everybody else to know what happened to Bella and her family and how Edward will react. P.S. Don't worry about before. I totally overreacted.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review, I really do appreciate it. And you didn't overreact at all. You gave me a much needed kick in the pants :) Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
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