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Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

so sad..I actually feel bad for her.

Reviewer: ravenwhitlock33 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

I want more - please continue - So far I'm hooked - Thanks

Reviewer: Shadowolf (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2008 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

I like this. I really enjoy the fact that you give some true thoughts and good intentions behind Leah's harsh words towards Jake about Bella and the wedding. Really like how it flows and explains the way Leah feels about things with Sam & Emily also. Very nice work!

Reviewer: effection (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2008 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi!

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Best One-Shot Short

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Reviewer: My_Topaz_Eyes (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2008 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Gah! I have to keep reminding me that this is only fan fic! This was VERY well written... I can't tell you how much I love your work :)

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you very much!

Reviewer: kohana of the roses (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2008 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really like this story. It really explains what could be going on inside of Leah's mind. I really feel sorry for her, and Jacob too. Great story all in all. :D

Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2008 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

How agonizingly painful for Leah. You made me feel really badly for her. What a well written story.

Reviewer: godsendsangel (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2008 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

Aw, you go Leah. You patch up Jacob. :]
Great story. :] wonderfully written

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! THANKS!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2008 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

I could sincerely feel Leah's pain throughout this chapter. The idea that she not only was rejected but would now "share" the romantic memories of the one who rejected her through their werewolf minds is going to rub the proverbial salt in her wounds!

Author's Response: Writing this story was the first time I actually felt sorry for Leah. Poor Girl! Can you imagine? *shakes head*

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