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Unexpected Changes by twitina






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Summary:

 

Alyssa Brooks is enjoying a night by the lake with her boyfriend when they are attacked.  She wakes up to find that she has been changed into a vampire.  This story coincides with the newborn attack on the Cullen family in Eclipse - and will go beyond that time.

She meets the Volturi - and Demetri.  And she falls hard for him.  Visit Italy with her and learn more about the Volturi!!

Aro and Sulpicia's backstories are here...along with some of the other minor characters.


Rated: PG-13
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Afton, Alec, Alice, Alistair, Amun, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Benjamin, Brady, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charles, Charlotte, Chelsea, Collin, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Gianna, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Kachiri, Kate, Kebi, Leah, Liam, Maggie, Makenna, Marcus, Nessie, Other Character, Quil, Randall, Renata, Rosalie, Sam, Santiago, Seth, Siobhan, Stefan, Sulpicia, Tanya, Tia, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No
Word count: 79207 Read: 305739
Published: March 17, 2009 Updated: August 29, 2009
Story Notes:

You will recognize some of the characters that come up in the story.  Edward, Alice, Esme, Emmett and Carlisle Cullen, Rosalie and Jasper Hale, Bella Swan, Victoria, Riley, Jane, Felix, Demetri and most of the Volturi.  Also, the werewolves play a small role.

Alyssa Brooks is my creation.  The rest do not belong to me - they are Stephenie Meyer's characters.

Disclaimer:All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of Stephenie Meyer. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Twilighted Beta: qjmom

1. Chapter 1 Changes by twitina [Reviews - 10] starstarstarstarhalf-star (3896 words)

Alyssa is changed.  She wakes up to find she has incredible strength, speed and an unimaginable thirst for blood.

This chapter introduces us to Alyssa.

2. Chapter 2 - Meeting the Cullens by twitina [Reviews - 7] starstarstarstarhalf-star (2614 words)

Alyssa meets the Cullens while they are hunting.  She learns a little about vampires in general - and finds out that there are things about her that are special.

 

Thanks to my beta qjmom!!

 

3. Chapter 3 Meeting The Newborns by twitina [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarhalf-star (2658 words)

Alyssa discovers her own gift and is anxious to find out more about the vampire world. 

She tracks down the newborns in Seattle - and discovers Riley and Victoria.

I'm trying to stick to canon - but I'm having fun with the characters we don't know much about yet!

 

And as always...Alyssa Brooks is totally my creation, but I can't say the same for the recognizable characters from the Twilight series.  They all belong to SM!!

4. Chapter 4 Newborns Attack by twitina [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (3184 words)

Alyssa follows Riley and Victoria and the newborns to the battle in the clearing.  She gets to see the battle we miss in Eclipse.

 

 

Once again, I don't own the characters you recognize from Twilight - they are SM's!!  Alyssa Brooks is my own creation.

 

Thanks for your quick turn-around qjmom!!

5. Chapter 5 The Arrival of the Volturi by twitina [Reviews - 5] starstarstarstarstar (2083 words)

Alyssa watches the aftermath of the fight in the clearing, and the arrival of the Volturi (Chapter 25 of Eclipse). 

She sees someone at the end of this chapter who will change her life - Demetri!

 

Although I created Alyssa Brooks, all other characters belong to the wonderful Stephenie Meyer.

I must also give credit to SM for a great deal of the dialogue in this chapter.  It is directly from the book, to stay true to canon.

6. Chapter 6 Leaving with the Volturi by twitina [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarstar (1762 words)

Alyssa follows the Volturi as they leave the clearing.  She is discovered. 

What will happen when she meets Jane?

This chapter is rather short, but I hope you enjoy it!

 

The Twilight world and it's characters belong to SM.  I've just added a few of my own to the mix for my own enjoyment.

 

7. Chapter 7 Traveling with Demetri by twitina [Reviews - 3] (2358 words)

Alyssa has been discovered by the Volturi and has used her ability to convince them to take her to Italy. 

She is deeply attracted to Demetri...and he to her.

Hope you enjoy this little tid-bit!!

 

SM owns Twilight and all of it's characters...I'm just playing in her back yard. ; )

8. Chapter 8 The Trip by Yacht by twitina [Reviews - 4] starstarstarstarstar (2313 words)

Alyssa is with Demetri on the yacht.  She hears his history.

 

SM owns all things Twilight...I'm just a kid on her playground!!

9. Chapter 9 Seafood by twitina [Reviews - 0] (2756 words)

More of the trip to Italy.  More Demetri.  And eating with the Volturi.

 

 

 

SM owns Twilight and everything about it...I'm just playing there!

10. Chapter 10 Preparing to Meet the Volturi Council by twitina [Reviews - 3] (2846 words)

Alyssa is almost to Italy.  They stop long enough to feed before returning to the castle...

She meets Heidi - and gets a taste of the relationships in the Volturi.

Hope you enjoy...

 

SM owns all things Twilight.  I just like to imagine living in her world.

11. Chapter 11 Judgment Day by twitina [Reviews - 2] (2728 words)

Thanks for following along!!

Alyssa has chosen to go to Italy to meet the Volturi leaders.  She had no idea what she was in for, or what they would think of her ability.

In this chapter, she is being judged...Aro knows what she can do.  Will they accept her? 

I hope you'll like my characterization of the Volturi leaders!!

Enjoy!

 

As always...I have to acknowledge that these characters belong to SM.  I've taken them into new adventures, using my own creation, Alyssa Brooks.

 

Thanks qjmom!!!  Awesome Beta!

12. Chapter 12 The Decision by twitina [Reviews - 4] starstarstarstarhalf-star (2158 words)

Alyssa and Demetri are awaiting the Volturi council's decision.  See just how wicked Aro can be in this chapter!!

 

Thanks qjmom for your beta work!!

 

SM owns the Twilight world.  I'm enjoying playing with her characters!!

 

13. Chapter 13 Alone Time by twitina [Reviews - 5] starstarstarstarhalf-star (3031 words)

This chapter is a fun one (for me, at least).  Alyssa and Demetri together, learning more about each other. 

There's more action coming...but they needed a break!  Hope you like it!!

 

Thanks to qjmom - my beta!!

 

SM owns all of the Twilight world.  I'm just happy to spend some time writing there!

14. Chapter 14 Ancient History by twitina [Reviews - 4] starstarstarhalf-star (3234 words)

In this chapter, Sulpicia tells Alyssa her history, and part of Aro's. 

I hope you enjoy it!!

 

Thanks to qjmom!!

15. Chapter 15 Heidi's Fate by twitina [Reviews - 4] starstarstarstar (3010 words)

This chapter contains Heidi's trial and the outcome.  It also contains more of the Volturi's history!!

 

Enjoy!!

 

Twilight doesn't belong to me...I only wish it did!!

 

Thanks qjmom!!

16. Chapter 16 Protere by twitina [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarhalf-star (2185 words)

Alyssa and Demetri get to take a break from the stress of Volturi life. 

 

Thanks to everyone who has reviewed!! 

 

Thanks qjmom for your beta work!!

17. Chapter 17 Unexpected by twitina [Reviews - 4] starstarstarstarstar (2914 words)

I really hope you enjoyed Alyssa and Demetri's little vacation!!  I know, no lemons...sorry 'bout that!  I'm sure you all have wonderful imaginations...I'll let you paint the picture, for now!

 

In this chapter, Alyssa gets to see what the Volturi do - on a small scale.  A little twist.

 

Thanks to qjmom for being my validation beta!

 

And thanks to all of you who have taken the time to review!!  Gets me motivated to finish my story!

18. Chapter 18 Discoveries by twitina [Reviews - 6] starstarstarstarhalf-star (2713 words)

Why was Caius screaming Demetri's name??  Find out in this chapter!

 

 

Thanks to qjmom - my validation beta!

 

And thanks to all of you who read my story - and those who review!!

19. Chapter 19 Challenges by twitina [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (2841 words)

Hi everyone!  I'm finally posting the next chapter.  Real life (Little League Baseball) has been crazy.

 

I tried in this chapter to address some concerns that a few reviewers had.  I hope I have succeeded. 

This chapter is angsty and different.  But, it works to help move the story along.

 

More to come.  Hope you keep reading!

 

Thanks qjmom!!  And thanks to all who have reviewed!!

20. Chapter 20 Preparations by twitina [Reviews - 3] (2428 words)

Getting closer to the 'battle' of Breaking Dawn...Demetri and Alyssa are getting worried about touching Aro's hand.

 

 

21. Chapter 21 Irina Appears by twitina [Reviews - 4] starstarstarstarstar (2217 words)

Well, we are approaching the epic 'battle' from Breaking Dawn.  Here's just a little peek of what happens in Volterra leading up to that time.

There's more to come.  And, I promise, this won't end at the non-fight.

 

Thanks qjmom!!

 

And a huge thanks to those of you who take the time to review!!  I really love to hear that someone wants this story to continue!!  *throws kisses*

 

And, of course, SM owns all the characters from Twilight.  I just play with them now and then!!

22. Chapter 22 Christmas in Volterra by twitina [Reviews - 6] starstarstarstarstar (2646 words)

Christmas in Volterra and preparations for a trip to Seattle.  Almost to the battle.

 

As always, thanks qjmom!! 

 

I only wish I owned the Twilight franchise...sigh.

23. Chapter 23 Preparing for Battle by twitina [Reviews - 6] starstarstarstarstar (3525 words)

Well, here we go!  Into the battle scene.  It will take a couple of chapters to get all the way through. 

 

Sorry, I'm slow updating.  Real life is totally kicking my butt!!

 

Thanks to all those who have reviewed!!  You keep me motivated!! And to qjmom for being my validation beta!!

 

I only wish SM would sign the Volturi over to me...I could live with that!!

24. Chapter 24 New Information by twitina [Reviews - 4] starstarstarstarstar (3909 words)

This chapter contains a lot of the actual dialogue from Breaking Dawn.  It was much harder to craft around SM's words than I thought it would be.  Sorry it took so long...  Between working with her words and my real life, this chapter took much longer than I thought it would.

There are two more 'battle scene' chapters in the book, but I'm going to try to combine them into one for my story.  We'll see what happens.

I hope I have done this justice, from the Volturi side.  I also hope that I've given enough foreshadowing.  Hmmm.  I guess we'll see.

 

As usual, the characters belong to SM.  But, Demetri is mine (at least I've based him on my sweet hubby).

Thanks qjmom for all your hard work.  Digging thru all these stories can't be easy!!  I'll have to take you to lunch some day. :)

25. Chapter 25 To Fight or Not To Fight by twitina [Reviews - 7] starstarstarstarstar (6970 words)

Welcome to the longest chapter I have ever written!  Of course, it's only this long because it is a huge chapter in BD.  There will be a final battle chapter, and then, I will return to the tale I am spinning.

The dialogue in this chapter is mostly SM's from Chapter 37 of Breaking Dawn.  My words flow around her words - and I am grateful to her for writing them.  As always - these are her characters, for the most part.  I play with them and manipulate them, and I enjoy it!!  lol

 

So, off to battle we go...

 

Thanks qjmom for your validation work!!  You rock!

26. Chapter 26 Resolution by twitina [Reviews - 7] starstarstarstarstar (3576 words)

This is the final chapter of the 'non-battle' scene from Breaking Dawn.  There is a lot of dialogue directly from the book, again (chapter 38).  However, you will see the battle from the Volturi's side, and discover part of the plan to escape.

I hope you enjoy this chapter!  We're getting to the good stuff!

I apologize for taking so long to post this.  I'm now working on 2 stories - which is crazy, I know.

 

Thanks qjmom!!

27. Chapter 27 Plotting by twitina [Reviews - 7] starstarstarhalf-star (2652 words)

I have to apologize for taking so long to write this chapter.  Between a real life job change and writing another fic, I've fallen behind!!

This chapter isn't super long, but it's building to the climax of the story.

 

Thanks for reading!

Thank you qjmom - you are amazing!





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