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Author's Response:

Sorry for not posting the last few.  Here's this for you.  https://www.dropbox.com/s/de41fu7zq3x9tap/Midnight%20Sun.rtf?dl=0

I think u r a wonderful writer and I think u should continue. U r very much as good or even better than Stephanie Meyer and I wish u would continue the series. Some one should anyway and y not u? U r the great at what u do and I thank u for finishing this wonderful book for all of us. 

Author's Response:

Sorry I didn't post the last bit!  But you can read it here.  https://www.dropbox.com/s/de41fu7zq3x9tap/Midnight%20Sun.rtf?dl=0

Please, since u r wonderful at writing TWILIGHT in Edwad's point of view, can you please write New Moon too.

I really really appreciate your work.You have way too much of good imagination. I am your fan!!! I almost cried when Stephenie Meyer didn't finish Midnight Sun and i was soooooo glad when I found out there is someone who is gentil enough to finigh it (you!!!).

 

 

Thank you soooooooo much and I am looking forward to your answer!!! ♥♥♥

I've been reading this on and off all day (I too have little ones so I can't just sit down and read for long periods of time like in the days before children).  I just wanted to let you know that I love your story and I think that Stephenie Meyer would probably be happy with where you've taken her characters :)

True, but Bella would notice and maybe comment on it. There is a big time gap between the end chapter and the epilogue in the orriginal book so you could always put something in there (of course that would add to Edward's angst), and remember in BD Edward said Bella's eyes would change to gold in a few months? It would take awhile for his eyes to change back to full-on gold :) just a suggestion

Author's Response:

 hmm... actually I don't think it would take that long for his eyes to change back to gold.  Going from a newborn who has their own human blood pumping through themselves is what takes so long as a newborn, so for a vampire to drink human blood when they don't normally would certainly NOT take that long to change from the red back to the their normal gold.  It's been a while since I originally wrote all of this, but I'm pretty sure she just noticed that his eyes were black because he hadn't left the hospital at all to feed.  So, likely what happened was that his eyes changed from a more golden to a slightly redbrown (because he drank some of her blood) to black and not back to gold until he'd fed after getting back home.. nothing needing contacts and probably nothing that anyone would notice in the hospital either.

 

I am going to be so sad when this is over!  I hope you might consider an "Edwar" version of New Moon. 

Author's Response:

Actually, I have put a lot of thought into doing Eclipse since I haven't found a good version of that one, BUT another writer "Blondie AKA Robin" has done a fantastic job in writing "Dark Side of the Moon" and really... it would be stupid for me to try to compete with what she's already done because it's SO fantastic.  I also know of an amazing version of the last book as well, but NOT of Eclipse yet.. there are tons of versions from his point of view though that have been done for Eclipse, but none that I've found (thus far) that ring true to canon.  I'm still hoping that I'll find a good one and there was one that was pretty close, but.. yeah.. anyway.  Do check out blondie's though because it's fabulous.  I actually used some of what she quoted from Victoria in the scene where they meet them so that our stories will even match somewhat.  I liked the idea of making them flow even though we have slightly different styles, BUT the styles probably match the books better anyway.  I tend to be a bit more introspective and have him do a LOT of musing which is pretty helpful at this point in canon and she did an amazing job with action which was exactly what was needed in his version of New Moon.  The few places I might have wanted to explain more in her version (of what was going on in his head) aren't necessary if you've read what I wrote because you'll already know those things. 

I don't think your story is repetitive- it's great!

great chapter-  I love the fact that you're not rushing

Thanks for the update! I think if we had all read Midnight Sun before New Moon we wouldn't have been as surpirsed by his leaving. Congrats on the baby and the new job and new location!

Hey I love how you put in Bella's answers to Edward's questions. It really adds to her character. Good job with this chapter :)

OME, how did I miss this chapter update???  I was thinking it had been a while since you updated, went in to check the story and here it is!!

Loved it - great job.  Really suspenseful when he could hear and see what James was doing to Bella as they approached - never thought that through, but it makes perfect sense.  I really enjoyed the part where Edward was agonizing over the decision of what to do - interesting Alice's first vision, Bella either burning for days or Edward "poisoning" her further.Great description of how her blood tasted to him - how it had been "missing" from his existence.

I agree with your a/n - this is a huge, big deal for Edward.  From Bella's POV, we don't really get it - we don't really start to understand what changing Bella means to Edward until her conversation with Carlisle in the beginning of New Moon (and, truly, I'm not sure Bella ever really understands Edward's agonizing pain and fear about this).  And I loved what you said about the true fight being with himself, not James.

This story is awesome, i can go from reading S/M's midnight sun to yours and not even miss a beat, they flow so well. I think your doing not only the story but also the characters justice. :-P

 personally i was pretty annoyed that S/M isnt going to finish her story but chose to show us some of it, like half a story was better then no story at all, when i actually would have been happier not reading any rather then having all these unanswered questions and thoughts, until i started looking into fan fiction and found your amazing story, now im getting all my answers and i want you to know us fans are so greatful, AWESOME JOB!!! thanks :-P

do you no when you will post more chapters? i cant wait, im so exited, ill be bouncing off the walls with anticipation till then :-P

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'll try to get another one out soon.  I'm showing my art in July and have been overloaded with just doing art ALL the time and haven't had a chance to post, but I WILL do it soon.  :]  Just a few more chapters left.  :]