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Reviewer: mshaz (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 11:44 AM · On: Lovers

this is anything but decent... decent isn't even in the same universe as this one-shot.

this was... mind-blowing, epic, better-than-triplelayeredmudcake-B&Jicecream-and-keylimepie...and i like my sweets.
there's no words to justify this. i read this the first time a few days ago. it left me so hot and bothered that i had a erotic dream that night. mm, i enjoyed being in bella's place. haha.

thank you, now i patiently wait for the next... ;)

Author's Response:
Wow! I'm so glad you thought of it so highly! :D And it's good to know my writing can induce pleasant dreams! Thank you!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 11:39 AM · On: Lovers

wow is it me or is the room suddenly very hot... haha this was good, it was somewhat tasteful and less smutty than I thought it would be... can't wait till the continuation is posted...

Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 08:32 PM · On: Lovers

That one was so awesome! really hot.

Author's Response:
Thank you very much. :)
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 01:42 PM · On: Lovers

ummmm... what?! This is the hottest thing EVER!
I am in lust... I mean love with it! You totally won in my book! Write more!!!

xoxo
jennie

Author's Response:
Ahaha, to be in lust is a good thing. ;D And yay! Thank you so much!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 05:50 PM · On: Lovers

Yep - that was awesome! Loved it! Why didn't they have teachers like that when I was in high school?? LOL!

Author's Response:
Oh, I know! :\ Thank you for the review! :D
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: limona (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 03:32 PM · On: Lovers

Hot. It was definitely hot. You did a very good job of building filling in the background of the Edward and Bella's relationship.
This is the best teacher/student fic I've read (though I haven't read that many, since they sort of freak me out a bit, lol). Yours did not freak me out, it was sweet.

Author's Response:
Aw, thank you so much! I'm absolutely happy that you thought that it wasn't freaky, 'cause that's not what I was going for... Neither Bella nor Edward wouldn't jump into something that would compromise their morals, I think. Thank you again! :D
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: Avabella (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:52 PM · On: Lovers

oh my god i was on the edge of my seat the whole time, the way it was bulit up was really good, it wasn't just a lemon it was...what's the word...enticing and wonderfully written, to be honest which parts were supposed to be cheesy?

Author's Response:
Wow, thank you! I'm so glad you liked the build up... As for the cheesy parts, well, I thought of his speech as such. The way I wrote it wasn't exactly how I wanted him to word it, but I couldn't imagine him confessing any other way. Thank you again!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:30 AM · On: Lovers

Okay, so I read this twice. Once at work and again when I got home. This was a phenominal one shot and I'm so happy you're going to continue it. It was sugar and spice and EVERYTHING nice. I cannot wait to read more of this fic and your work. GREAT JOB!

Author's Response:
Wow, I'm so flattered that you'd read this twice. :D Thank you so much! And I hope the continuation doesn't disappoint!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 11:18 AM · On: Lovers

that was soooo great! I loved how you still made Edward's "temptation" happens in a classroom in your story as it was in Twilight ;-)

Author's Response:
I tried to parallel this to Twilight with what little I could parallel with, so I'm glad you caught on that. :) Thank you for the review!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 10:23 AM · On: Lovers

It was more than 'decent', it was hot!
Makes me wish I had a hot high school to fantasize about.
Great job!

Author's Response:
Haha, thank you so much! And actually... a hot teacher I used to have did essentially inspire this... Of course, there's NO WAY in heck that'll happen, because our age gap is a little wider. And that'd be odd. Pahaha.
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: hippiehippieshake (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 08:21 AM · On: Lovers

Serioulsy, this is amazing, amazing, amazing! Left me wanting much, much more.
I'm off to read it again and again. :)

Author's Response:
Ah, I'm so glad you could like it enough to read it again! And don't worry, your wants will be satisfied soon. :) Thank you!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: KatieBelle (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 06:54 AM · On: Lovers

Wow! I can't believe this is your first time. ;)
"Silly Bella... It's Dr. Cullen now." <--- gah. seriously. that lit me on fire lol. Hope to see more from ya!

Author's Response:
Well, it was my first real attempt at Twilight fanfiction, but I've written fanfics before... only not as graphic as this. The (one) lemon I've written in the past was so much more vague. I'm so glad you liked it though!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: TheNewRosalie (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 06:22 AM · On: Lovers

>.< I really need to stop reading these during school, my raging girl-boners are getting out of hand. I loved it. Don't know what you were talking about it being bad for, I thought it was incredible. Wonderful ending- Rosalie and Emmett. :) lol.
<3

Author's Response:
Oh trust me, I do the SAME exact thing! I get all heated up, and the sad part about it is that some people notice how red I get... UGH. I'm glad you thought it was incredible though. Hopefully I didn't cause you too much distress. :D Thank you so much!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:39 AM · On: Lovers

Much more than decent! That was fantastic. There was a nice amount of build up and a good relational setting to have it be not just a physical thing, but quite emotional as well. Nicely done.

Author's Response:
Ah, thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked it. :) I didn't want them to just be in it for physical attraction (as much as that was a driving force), because I feel like Edward and Bella are so much more than that. I'm glad you caught on that. :D Thank you again!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 01:12 AM · On: Lovers

GUH!! Can I Just say that I am speechless after that!! AMAZING hot and sexy and what a great way to start my morning! Fantabulous job!!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I never thought I would make anyone speechless. ;D
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: prepster2008 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:40 AM · On: Lovers

AWESOME! I think you have the potential to continue should you want. Maybe some scene from HS or this from Edward's perspective.

Author's Response:
Actually, with what I have in mind for a continuation (because I really am continuing this), I have ideas similar to yours. You'll just have to wait and see. Thank you so much for the review!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: TwilightChicky (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 11:47 PM · On: Lovers

Cute, hot and funny. This was great! Would love to hear Rose and Bella's girl talk or Edward and Em when he gets home. Really enjoyed this.

Author's Response:
Hm, you know, what you suggested gave me a little inspiration. :D Thank you!
thats's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: Bulls in Brooklyn (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 07:34 PM · On: Lovers

hahahahaa I loved the ending!!!

Author's Response:
I'm glad you did! Thank you for the review. :)
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 07:01 PM · On: Lovers

Decent? OMG that was awesome!! LOL I absolutely loved this! It was sweet that they had liked each other then, but didn't do anything about it (cuz yeah, not of the good lol), and then the sex was totally HOT! Love the ending with the next people to have the room being Rosalie and Emmett. LOL
Great job! :D
~Cat~

Author's Response:
Ahh, thank you so much. I'm glad you thought that it was sweet yet hot, 'cause that's what I was trying to go for.
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 05:55 PM · On: Lovers

Very good! You are a good writer...have you ever thought about writing a multi chapter story?

Author's Response:
Wow, thank you. :D I have actually thought about it, and I've been working on one. (My first real Twilight fic is a multi-chaptered story... I'm currently on chapter 5, but I've never posted it anywhere. Haha.) And this story will actually have a continuation with it. Thank you again!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: Lena (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 05:44 PM · On: Lovers

Darn. I was hoping it was Jessica at the door. Still, that was brilliant, and you captured the teacher/student stuff without making it weird. Please, please, please continue!

Author's Response:
Ahaha, actually, since I've been writing a continuation for this, you seemed to have caught on to something that'll come up in the future. ;) Thank you so much for the review! And I'm glad you thought it wasn't too weird/creepy.
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: Elizabeth (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 05:43 PM · On: Lovers

haha i loved it! thanks for it

Author's Response:
Oh, no, no, thank you! :D
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: InnerAnomaly (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 05:02 PM · On: Lovers

I fully, totally, completely and utterly think you should turn this into a full blown story.
So great! I love it! :)
If you decide it's worth it, I'd love to know! so I can keep an eye out!! totally awesome! :)

Author's Response:
Well, after a lot of coersion, I've decided that I'll make this into a short story. :) Hopefully I'll get the next part up soon. I'm so glad you liked it, and hopefully the continuation won't disappoint too much.
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: crazygreenfrog (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 04:57 PM · On: Lovers

Wow, Wow, Wow!! HOT!!
Great job! Feel free to write more stories or continue this one. I'd love to read more of your work. :D

Author's Response:
Oooh, thank you so much! I do plan on writing more for Twilight and having a continuation of this. :D
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 04:41 PM · On: Lovers

squeeee. that was amazing. please continue it... please?

Author's Response:
Ehe, oh, I will continue, actually, even without the begging. ;D Thank you so much for the review!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

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