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Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Friends
OMG! How much did I love this chapter!! A LOT. LOL I read it while I was at work today, and am just now able to review it, so I'm sorry I can't give very many specifics for what I liked, but I remember laughing a lot, and then OMG the sexy shower scene! Loved it!!
I wish I could remember more things to comment on, but it's been over 12 hours and I can't. But I love it, and can't wait for more!! :)
~Cat~
Author's Response: It's okay if you can't remember what exactly you loved about the chapter; it's great enough that you simply liked it. (: And you found it funny! That's the greatest compliment, really. xD Thank you, so much! I'm working hard on the next chapter, so hopefully I can get it out quickly... but no promises.
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: where9 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Lovers
I really liked it! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: Babette (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Friends
I liked it! Yes, it was fluffy, but we all need some from time to time.
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you. Yes, fluffiness is good for the soul, I guess. haha.
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: Avabella (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Friends
I personally like the fluff, It's really cute. Are you going to write more to it or leave it as is? Either way it's really great.
Author's Response: I'm thankful you liked it, even with all the fluff. ;) I'm definitely writing more; I have five chapters outlined in my mind, but I don't think I'll go any further than that. Thank you!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Friends
I seriously can't wait to read the other chapters. I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry if the next chapter takes a while, but I'm trying to get it out faster than the second chapter did. I'm making no promises though. D:
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Friends
Really great story. I agree with one of your other reviewers, though. Six years isn't much at all. My parents are 7 1/2 years apart and this one couple I know are 8 years apart. My husband and I are almost five years apart. Six isn't anything to get worked up over.
Author's Response: As I told the other reviewer, I know that six years isn't really much. (: My mom's last boyfriend was almost half her age, but I've always found that sort of relationship normal, having grown up around age differences in relationships. I just wanted to convey how much Edward's worry is quite actually pointless. He thinks too much into Bella's age. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it. :D
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 02:19 AM · On: Friends
wow i love the length and the quality of your story, tho i felt so intrusive on bellas and edwards moment there at the end, really enjoying this, i'm crossing my fingers for another update soon =D
Author's Response: Goodness, thank you. :D I tend to like to write longer chapters more, even if it takes so much longer to get out... And the quality ends up being fuzzy, which is why I'm surprised you found quality. xD Haha. And, sorry if you felt like you were interrupting their moment, but hey, it's nice to get inside their relationship. Thanks again, and hopefully I'll get the next chapter out sooner than I did with the second.
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: shwriteme (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Friends
I really like this story. I thought it was a one shot at first, but am glad you are continuing it. I do take slight offence to the emphasis put on a six year age difference. That's nothing. My husband is 20 yrs older than me. We've been happily married for 15 yrs and have four children. He's my soul mate and it wouldn't matter how old he is. And yes, I can see that some would be appalled by such a big gap in age, but 6 years really isn't unusual at all.
Sorry for ranting, but that was the only thing that bothered me as I read. Yes there's an age difference, but should there really be a big deal made of it. I'd be more concerned that he was her teacher. Still she's old enough to make an informed choice--moreso than when she just graduated high school.
I love the intensity of the connection and look forward to reading more. Great stuff.
Author's Response: Oh, please don't take any offense in my making a big deal of the age gap! That's the whole point I was trying to come across with; it's all in Edward's mind that Bella is that 'much younger' than him. Trust me when I know that six years is definitely not that big of a difference (haha, it's even kind of an unspoken rule my mom has to date people fifteen years younger than her or younger; I grew up knowing that there shouldn't be an age difference in love). And congrats to you guys' marriage; it's a lot more than I can say about others who are together at the same age. :D
Actually you've touched more on what the next chapter is going to be focused on: the fact that he was her teacher. So, you hit it more on the mark there. (:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you still liked it even if if you were concerned about my focus. ahah.
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Friends
Holy crap! This is so great! I'm glad you're taking the short story route rather than a one-shot, because this is amazing! I'm looking forward to more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you; ee, I'm so happy you liked it. (: Yeah, sometimes I can't help myself, and I do have to continue... even if I blame it all on you readers. ;P Thanks again.
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Friends
That was great! I can't wait to read the next update! I had been looking for this story for a while, but couldn't remember the name of it! Thanks for the update :)
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked this... You probably couldn't find it because it's been so long since I last updated. xD Hopefully the next chapter won't take as long, but I'm not making any promises!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Friends
love the story. i hope there is more. love the long chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much. :D Yes, I like to write long chapters, but unfortunately, they eat up at my writing time... Thanks again!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Friends
This is great. I love it. I'm glad you decided to turn a one shot into a short story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. (: And quite honestly, I cannot deny myself from continuing a story... I've contemplated sequels to too many stories in the past, so it felt only natural that I continue this... hahaha.
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: Lena (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Friends
Overload of fluff?? Never!
I am tired and have to go back to school tomorrow, sooo...
In a nutshell: This story is awesome, I wish it was longer! (Not this chapter, I know you're human - I meant the overall story. 5 chapters is not enough)
LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Hahah, ugh, school tomorrow. Thanks for reminding me. :P Haha, but seriously, thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it, and I know five chapters may seem short, but the chapters themselves are going to be as long as this second chapter! If no, longer! Hopefully that'll be something to look forward too. heh. Thanks again. :D
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: Chocolatebrowneyes (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Lovers
THAT WAS HOT! woo I need to go get some ice now...
Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you very much! I'm glad it was hot enough for you. :D
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: Chocolatebrowneyes (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Lovers
THAT WAS HOT! woo I need to go get some ice now...
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 09:34 PM · On: Lovers
ha...holy hot cakes. That was....whew! It's below freezing here and yet I feel like I'm in a sauna. Can you say hot? Cause I can! That was Effkin HOT!!! *sigh* now I want to go have sex with Mr. Cullen in the library.
Author's Response: Oh no, sorry for the delayed response. D: I'm so, so glad you loved it. Hahah, but I'm sorry it's a little too hot for you. (x
I know no one could resist the Mr. Cullen charm. Thanks so much for the review!
that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: Washingtongirl23 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 08:34 AM · On: Lovers
I really liked it. You write very well. I can't wait to see what is next!
Author's Response: I'm glad you did. :) Thanks so much! And I know you can't wait, but I've been so dead while writing this story... it STILL might take a while. But thanks nevertheless! that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: mluch1121 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 01:56 PM · On: Lovers
great lemon! def an enjoyable one shot!
Author's Response: Ah, thank you! that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2008 02:36 PM · On: Lovers
That was great. Even though the sex was extremely naughty, I loved the characters even more. They were so likable and I loved the situation. Awesome writing, i am definately going to read more of your work.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked my characterization. To me, a story is all about the characters, and I tried to incorporate this belief into my own writing. I'm pleased to know that I achieved that at least somewhat. :) Thank you! I hope you won't be too dissapointed with my future stuff. that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 01:01 PM · On: Lovers
Very hot. And naughty. I like. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :D that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 01:00 PM · On: Lovers
Very hot. And naughty. I like. :D
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 12:43 PM · On: Lovers
that was hot!!! nice job!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :) that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: edward_lover229 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 11:22 AM · On: Lovers
I love all ur storys!! I liked this one, a lot!! Dr.Cullen can visit me anytime;]
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And, haha, if only. that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 08:36 PM · On: Lovers
That was one of the best one shots that I have read... Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy you thought so. :D that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
Reviewer: blueeyedshorty (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 03:18 PM · On: Lovers
Day-ummmm that was spectacular!!!! oh I can't wait for the continuation. lve it keep it coming:)
Author's Response: Eheh, thank you! Hopefully the wait won't be too much longer... but I can't make any promises. that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline
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