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Reviewer: BelovedSunshine (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Lovers

Loved it! Wow, loved it. I'll be waiting for more!

Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Family

Hiiii I don't know when the last time you updated this story was but i'd REALLY like for you to continue it, whenever you have time of course. Thanks.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Family

awesome chapter. im glad that you finally updated.



Author's Response:

Thank you. (: I'm glad I finally updated too. It was just so much to get out! Haha. Of course, this upcoming update will be just as grand, just as delayed, probably. D:

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: irishjo (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Family

Great story.  Please update soon!!!!!!!  Thank you!!!



Author's Response:

Ah, no, thank you. (: I'm happy you enjoyed it, though, I'm not sure when my next update will be. It's almost AP/SAT season, and I don't know how much time I'm going to have to write. It's hard enough as it is. ): But, I will try, since the next chapter is the one I've been waiting to write!

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Family

This chapter wasn't awful. Plus I really enjoy long chapters.



Author's Response:

Heh, well, I'm glad you think so, and that you like long chapters, because that's what I specialize in! xD Thank you!

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Family

I didn't think it was unorganized at all.  I loved this chapter!!  I just starting this story this morning and I am so captivated by it.  I can't wait to read more!  What a fantastic story.  The characters are compelling and have such chemistry.  I love it!!!



Author's Response:

Ah, thank you; it makes me happy to know that I'm doing my job right, in some way, to keep you intrigued, especially through the characters. (:

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: geek_chic (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Family

this was great, really enjoyed the revealation at the cullen dinner table!



Author's Response:

Ah, I'm glad that you thought so, because I had the worst writer's block during that time (and, I think obviously, at the Swan residence). Thank you!

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Family

I liked this chapter. I was a little freaked by Charlie's reaction but I'm glad he's allowing their relationship.

I liked the reactions in the Cullen household. I love your Esme.

The phone sex was... wow. I still wish Edward were there though. The whole time I was hoping he'd climb into her room through her window. 

Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Hehe, thank you! I'm sorry if Charlie freaked you out a bit, but I don't think he'd just sit around and do nothing (which, he ultimately did by the end, but - we don't know the full story of it, and I don't think I'll release that, unless I make an outtake about what I have in mind). The same with Esme; I believed she would be a lot more laid-back and with a heavy mindset of "for-my-son's-happiness" kind of thing.

And, haha. I'm flattered you liked their conversation. ;D I rushed it this chapter, so I was worried it wasn't too good. Also, I thought about Edward sneaking in, but I figured it'd be too much. Besides, I want to keep their actual sexy time to a minimum until the last chapter or something (not that that chapter is too far off)... Though, that still may be a while because I take forever to write, and it's almost AP/SAT season, so I'll hardly get a chance to. But, thank you, regardless!

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Family

This is such fun!  Love the awkwardness of them telling friends and family....and Charlie's reaction vs Esme's.

So...are they going to stop by the high school at some point to say hi to folks...or how about attending a football game there? THAT would certainly raise a few eyebrows (starting with Jessica and Lauren's!!)

Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Lovers

uh oh. great start!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Friends

I really liked this chapter. I'm glad everyone got together. I liked the retelling of everyone's stories. The E/B moment was sweet.

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Family

Talk about letting the cat out of the bag!  Edward telling Charlie he loves Bella, before Bella and in front of her no less.  Than Jake and his big mouth. LOL  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Lovers

i like it;)

(hehehe)

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Family

This was a great chapter. Carlisle and Esme were so great at understanding, while Charlie reacted just like I thought he would. Classic!

Please update soon?

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Family

Great job =]

Yay for coming down off of writer's block!!!! I love those stretches when the writing bug bites =]

I can't wait for you to update more!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Lovers

Omg that was so hot. Damn I need to go to the library more often.

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Lovers

I enjoyed!

Reviewer: shwriteme (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Family

I love this story. I read this earlier on FF, but just wanted to take a minute to say that I'm enjoying this very much. I really loved it as a one shot, but am glad to see that you are continuing it. Great stuff!

 

Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Friends

Sorry it took me so dang long to catch up on this jewel!! Love the second chapter as much as the first! I do hope that we get to hear more soon! Love all the fluff and stuff in it! Perfection!!

xoxo
jennie

Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you. (: There's no need to be sorry; I mean, there're plenty of greater fics to overshadow my little ol' story. Ugh, it's taking so long to write the next part though, so I'm sorry if it doesn't come up soon enough... but I'm really trying to write as fast as I can! Life is just getting in the way. : Thank you again, though. Heh.

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: jap_doll (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Friends

that's it?!...MORE!!!...i'm hangin' up here!!!



Author's Response:

Haha, I'm really sorry. It's just taking so long to get it out. Life is so freaking hectic right now, I can't even wrap my brain around everything. I really am working on it hard, though! And I'm trying! Thanks for the review. (:

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Lovers

Yummy yummy!!!



Author's Response:

Hehe, thank you, thank you. :D

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: rhepona (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Friends

I'm so glad you continued this! I liked that it was a coincidence that all of their friends knew each other and that they got together all by themselves. I thought this chapter was a great mix of 'I can't keep my hands off you" and "I really like you as a person, too'. I'm kind of a sucker for the fluff mixed in with the smut. This is definitely on my favorites list!



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah, I have a fondness for writing situations where the characters are ALL connected, yet they don't know it till later (I'm actually working on another story that has a main point of basically that: skirting around each other). And yes, smut/fluff has always been a great combo to me, and I'm glad I accomplished that. :D But, I'm even more glad that you consider this a favorite! Thank you so much!

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Friends

Well, if that's the worst they get for a May/July romance, they'll have no problems for the rest of their lives!



Author's Response:

Hahah, hopefully they'll never run into any more problems... but don't count on that. Next chapter: Thanksgiving, and Charlie's not exactly thrilled about Edward. :D Thank you so much for the review!

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Friends

OMC. A second chapter! *dances merrily on the spot* Loved it!



Author's Response:

Hahaha! Yay, second chapters! (And hopefully more yays for a third, since I'm actually getting work done on it!) *dances with you* Thank you so much!

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

Reviewer: stargazer (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Friends

I loved it!!! I love the fluff. I read this one shot a while ago and I loved it. I was so excited when I saw that you were continuing the story!! Can't wait to read more soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. :D Yeah, a lot of people requested to continue this, and, well, I just couldn't could help myself. ahah.

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

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