Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Tear You Apart
So good! I can't wait for another update!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :-)
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Tear You Apart
That was great! Poor Edward's life is boring and he doesn't even see it! Oh well... it won't be for too much longer! :)
Author's Response: It is kind of mundane, isn't it? Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: pamirvine85 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Tear You Apart
that was great.... more please
Author's Response: Thanks so much - we're working on more!
Reviewer: pamirvine85 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Maneater
really good and really funny
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Maneater
Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Maneater
oh god that was great. Loved her pov on the incident. Perfect. Her mom is right NEVER question a guy that is reaching for magnums. MY GOD WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU WOMAN!!!!!!!!!!!!! LMAO!!!! The ending was great, okay head is in the gutter, but I still can't wait until they meet again.
Author's Response: Renee is my favorite part...She is all Colleen. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 3 - No You Girls
That was fucking hilarious.. Loved the back story of Edward and Jessica. It was perfect. The drug store scene was priceless, I would pay to see that. I was laughing so hard. I can't wait for their next encounter.
Author's Response: Hahaha....thanks. We really just wanted to work Preparation H into the story.
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Run This Town
Great chapter.. Love the Rose and Bella interaction. Okay off to the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you!! We love Rose and Bella, naturally.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 3 - No You Girls
LOL
Author's Response: ;) Thanks!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 3 - No You Girls
That was fantastic! Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Run This Town
So cute! I hope you update again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Prologue: The Beginning of the End
I really like this so far! I'm on to chapter 2!!
Author's Response: Great...we hope you enjoy it!
Reviewer: alandava (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Prologue: The Beginning of the End
Love all the snark in this story--it's just what I like. They don't have to fall in love at first sight all the time. The animosity is hot.
Author's Response: I think the first thing we decided on was making these two snarky and sarcastic. We're glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 1 - A Well Respected Man
Like what he told Tanya lol
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Prologue: The Beginning of the End
Stupid Bella LOL
Author's Response: She really is, isn't she?!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Run This Town
Another incredible chapter! Can't wait to see where it's going!
Thanks for sharing your napkin-planned idea!! :)
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks. We still have the napkin. You should have seen the looks the waiter was giving us.
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 - A Well Respected Man
Loved it! Next chapter for me!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading this! It means a lot to us.
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Prologue: The Beginning of the End
Way to hook me on the first chapter!! Clicking next!!
Author's Response: Awwww...thank you so much for reading this!
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 1 - A Well Respected Man
Loved this chapter as well. Great job. I love getting into Edwards head and what he is thinking. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, again. We're really enjoying creating these characters and giving them specific traits. It's so much fun.
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Prologue: The Beginning of the End
That was great. You two did a great job on it. I love it and I'm looking forward to more. The emotions that you write, you can feel them. Okay off to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! We have up to chapter 5 written, so I am trying to get the rest validated asap. Enjoy!
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