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Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Prospect

I am just waiting for another chapter of this excellent story. I really like it and hope that you will come back to it to write more chapters and a wonderful ending for it. I hope you don't desert the story. PLEASE update soon! I miss getting chapters for this story!

Disney Vampire



Author's Response:

I suck so much and on so many levels.

I hope you can forgive me for my late reply to your review, but more importantly, I hope you found your way to my FFn profile, where this story was completed.

I'm horrible at updating here because I go through the chapters with a fine toothed comb to ensure that they are worthy of validation, as I was beta-less when I wrote this. Additionally, I'm not sure everyone is aware that you can only post one chapter at a time, meaning that each chapter posted has to be approved before you can post another one. If I could just spend a day posting everything, I definitely would. But having to go back every other week, when I'm not even writing this anymore, is hard to remember to do and make time for these days. It's a lame excuse, but it definitely delays things.

I will update all of these chapters, but instead of waiting while I procastinate, I hope you don't mind traveling to the other site so that you don't have to go on continueing to wonder what the hell ever happened with this Edward and Bella.

Thanks so much for reading, caring enough to review, and hoping for the rest. It means a lot!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Prospect

Salad?  What salad?  Bella definitely needs to find out more about this man!  Like where does he live?  Where does he work?  Does he mind stalkers?



Author's Response:

Well, since canon Edward is a bit of a stalker himself, he's probably not deterred by them. LOL! Thanks for the review! <3

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Prospect

OKAY, READY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER



Author's Response:

I'll do what I can to get it up in a jiffy. Thanks for the review! <3

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Prospect

I like how this sotry is written, that each chapter is a part of their conversation. And both characters are adorable.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! With only a day to write each chapter, I thought it might be more realistic to stay in the moment vs trying to cover vast periods of time. lol. I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: feebee70 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Deliberation

really enjoying this. :)



Author's Response:

Yay! Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: purplexbuttercup (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Deliberation

ahh, more soon, please!



Author's Response:

Sure thing! Thanks!! <3

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Deliberation

And you have to wonder just how long these inner monologues actually take.  Seconds?  Minutes?  How long was Edward staring at her?  And instead of saying thank you, couldn't she have said something like-Do you want to come back to my place?



Author's Response:

lol! I think about that too. How much time it takes to process her thoughts and how he just watches her when she does it. Though, the story would have turned out completely different had she said that. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Deliberation

I love his comments about her blush...



Author's Response:

Aw thank you. You know Edward's a sweet talker. ;)

 

Thanks for the review! <3

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Seclusion

I'm really liking this!



Author's Response:

*happy dance* I hope I can keep you interested. Thanks for the review! <3

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 05:32 AM · On: Seclusion

Maybe Bella should take the rest of the day off, she may get more accomplished than she thinks!  Love this, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

LOL! I imagine it would be hard to focus on her job with Edward on the brain... Thank you!! <3

Reviewer: purplexbuttercup (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Seclusion

Awh, that was a really short chapter!

 

I'll be waiting for the next update. :)



Author's Response:

Sorry for the shortness. Next one is uploaded and ready to go. Thanks for the review! <3

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Seclusion

keep it coming



Author's Response:

Gladly! Thanks for reading and every review!!! <3

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Seclusion

I love their converstions. I read on FF. I love this story,



Author's Response:

You're SO sweet for having read on FF and still showing me love here. Thank you! <3

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:54 AM · On: Trade

I REALLY LIKE THIS



Author's Response:

*beams* That makes me so happy! Thanks for the review! <3333

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Trade

Great chapter. Glad E/B are getting to know each other. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Yay! Glad you liked the chapter. Next one will be up soon. :) Thank you! <3

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Chance

yes..and then some...*sighs*..hahaha..



Author's Response:

I'm with you on the and then some. Thanks, sweets! <3

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Trade

lol..edward is adorable..:D



Author's Response:

Don't you just want to pinch his cheeks? Or maybe kiss them...? hehehee

Thank you! <3

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 11:57 PM · On: Chance

lol..i wish i was lucky enough to fall randomly into the arms of beautiful men..haha



Author's Response:

Ikr?! Wouldn't it be nice if every stumble resulted in that kind of save? lol.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: purplexbuttercup (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Trade

Awh, I kinda hate the fact that the chapters are short, but what can I do? Anyway, can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Not all of them are quite this short. Most of them reach at least 1k. However, I was writing one entry a day for the month of December and didn't really have a lot of time for longer chapters. Thanks so much for the review. I'm updating as quickly as possible. <3

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Trade

Boy, Bella is really making Edward work hard for the priveledge of eating with her!  I'm glad he's not so easy to give up his secrets!



Author's Response:

Bella's never really been in this situation, before. She's trying to figure him out. ;)

Thanks for the review! <3

 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Query

Great chapter. How did he do that? I like magic but it frustrates me when I don't know how they do the tricks. I like knowing how things work. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Heheheee! Edward can be so tight lipped sometimes. :P Thanks for the review. Updating as quickly as possible. <3

Reviewer: jaceslashalec (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Query

Great beginning!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! <3

Reviewer: purplexbuttercup (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Query

How cute. :) How much do you have written so far? I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

It's completed. So as quickly as my amazing and work-a-holic validation beta can get it to you, you'll have it. Thanks so much for the review! <3

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Query

so love it



Author's Response:

*hugs* Thank you! <3

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Query

Excellent!  I kept thinking he was going to explain the flower trick with "Elementary, my dear!"  But you surprised me!  This is fun, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I'm happy you're pleased with my choice. Edward isn't known for spilling his secrets easily. ;)

Thank you! <3

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