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Reviews For A sweet family moment -One-Shot

Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2012 02:22 AM · On: A sweet family moment

Awww!!!!

Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 06:12 PM · On: A sweet family moment

Did Edward sing to Renesme? That would have been sweet too! We all know how Edward loves 50's music (hint, hint, wink) Why not check out some songs he would sing to Renesme, to Bella?! Did he talk to Renesme about her growing up to be a fine young lady and Edward would watch her have a few boyfriends --human ones, before she discovers Jacob? Do Bella, Alice, Rosalie and Esme love dressing Renesme up? Hope I gave you some ideas.. I enjoyed this! Good Luck!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2010 02:54 AM · On: A sweet family moment

I love the little moments like this. This was very cute and heart touching. Thank you.

Reviewer: Morgana3731 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 06:07 AM · On: A sweet family moment

This story doesn't go anywhere or do anything. But it was such a nice, cosy read, I quite enjoyed it. Wish it were longer.

Reviewer: bitme (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 03:56 PM · On: A sweet family moment

waaaaaaaa so sweet

Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 11:04 PM · On: A sweet family moment

apart from referring to the child as an it instead of she it was very good

Reviewer: ladybug123 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 11:35 PM · On: A sweet family moment

awwwwwww this was sooo sweet do more

Reviewer: ladybug123 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 11:35 PM · On: A sweet family moment

awwwwwww this was sooo sweet do more

Reviewer: mizbiz (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 02:20 PM · On: A sweet family moment

aawwwww!

Reviewer: nita100 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 06:28 AM · On: A sweet family moment

too short.. its a good start, th

Reviewer: TheLionIsAnAngel (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 09:05 PM · On: A sweet family moment

Thanks a lot, all of you! Your reviews are so sweet! i will write more soon

Reviewer: Anya Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 04:15 AM · On: A sweet family moment

Aw that was so cuteee ;) Great job!

Reviewer: Coco_chanel1983 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 12:40 AM · On: A sweet family moment

I didn't think it was terrible at all. Good job and keep writing.

Reviewer: AubreyRose (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 06:26 PM · On: A sweet family moment

That was so cute!!

Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:51 PM · On: A sweet family moment

Your story was pretty good although I probably wouldn't ever refer to a character or baby as "it"

Author's Response:
Yes, you are right! Thanks for telling me :)

Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 03:46 PM · On: A sweet family moment

That was so sweet! I loved it.

Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 03:37 PM · On: A sweet family moment

Absolutely beautiful!

Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 12:27 PM · On: A sweet family moment

it was very sweet My only wish was that it was longer :)

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