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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Indecision
One shot this may be, but it is also the loveliest, most touching , romantic thing I've read in quite some time. This would make Stephanie Meyer jealous, if she were to read it. In my humble opinion, you wrote the Edward dream scene better than she did. Just saying.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Indecision
Very well written!
Reviewer: jesskaye101 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Indecision
Yeah! Your writing is awesome. Very succinct and perceptive. I like the pace here. Controlled without being over done. Top notch!
Reviewer: Jiminy Crispies (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Indecision
Oh, this was so lovely!
I actually found my way to your page because I was looking for Alice-centric stories, but thought I could get started with your one-shot to get a feel for your style.
This whole story was wonderfully written - but there were also several lines that jumped out in their entirety, including (of course) the very last one. Beautiful.
Thanks so much for sharing! Now I can't wait to get started on the rest...
Reviewer: edward_lover229 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 10:23 AM · On: Indecision
That was really cute:]
Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 12:01 PM · On: Indecision
excellent
Reviewer: reader (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2008 03:14 PM · On: Indecision
Oh I liked this one...In a way it's so simple it allows for their connection to rest in your mind without interupting your thoughts.
Author's Response: That was the goal... I just wanted to take a quick wander into Edward's thoughts and just be in that moment, where he knew that he could not hurt her....
Reviewer: spaniard (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 05:41 AM · On: Indecision
This was extremely well written. I loved the interaction between Alice and Edward, and the comparisons at the very begginning. It was also great how you tied the title in at the end ("by twilight, Bella Swan would be his") Beuatiful. Looking forwfard to reading more from you, even if this was onlt a one shot!
Author's Response: Thank you! I wrote this before I began my ongoing Alice epic (something more for you to read!). I was nervous about it.
Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 09:05 PM · On: Indecision
Aww! I love how Alice played a part in it, I just wish we knew what her vision was. I'm very detail oriented.
Author's Response: As am I. But keeping in mind this was meant as an extension of Twilight, you know what the visions were, really: Edward and Bella, together. The details... see Breaking Dawn post-wedding. ;)
Reviewer: elizabeth18 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 08:29 AM · On: Indecision
This was really good, like, exceptionally good. You have a real gift. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! This one was a one-shot, so it's complete. I am working on (an epic, it seems) Alice fic but after that's done. I'm fiddling with a few one-shot ideas for the future. Glad you enjoyed!
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