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Reviews For Hide and Drink
Reviewer: Aksrds1 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Mope and Hope

The first section of this chapter (31)was by far the BEST you have ever written! I was on the verge of tears, it was so compelling and intense. Great job!

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Mope and Hope

Hmmm, would be nice if the solution would work. Then Edward and Bella could have a more normal relationship.

Reviewer: AlohaWhatever (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Mope and Hope

I'm so glad there seems to be a cure for Boobward. I was stressing that the poor boy might be crazy forever. 

Reviewer: Ojojoj (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Mope and Hope

First I would like to apologise for being an awful reader as I have not submitted a single review even though I have been reading your amazing story for quite some time. Sorry.

I have to say that no other writer has the ability of describing Edward's desperate feelings fir Bella. I love, love, love that it's only EPOV, it really gives the reader a feeling of being completely inside his head. Your story has made me cry (e.g. when Daddy C tells him he's no longer part of the family), laugh (e.g. when he's in Boobward mode) and stomp my foot in anger (e.g. when the Cullens interfer to much). Though I'm happy that they might find the cure, I wonder what will cure my sense lost when this story ends...Thanks for giving us Boobward! // Dr C

Reviewer: mutley (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Mope and Hope

I have recently just finished getting up to date with your story so far - its really good and deserves more reviews! I thought the problem with Edward might be something to do with the spanish influenza.

I definately perked up tonight when i got notified another chapter had been posted.

It was brill - there is hope for them yet - thanks

Reviewer: kisbydog (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:40 PM · On: Mope and Hope

Ok, that's interesting.  But, if E has to take the blood directly from B for it to work, that means the blood in the sample under the microscope wouldn't work if Edward drank it.  So, that means there's something more that he needs, right?  Unless its just that the protein is rendered ineffective if at the wrong temperature?  Do I dare to hope?  Oh, boobward deserves a cure - please let it be so!! 

Reviewer: Belli (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Mope and Hope

Fantastic chapter! I can never get enough of this story. I liked how Carlisle saved Edward from embarassment and I'm really hopeful that Carlisles hypothesis is going to work. A lot of extra brain power and research for coming up with htat one. For a minute there, when Edward started to lose it again, I thought it was going to be another lost cause. But now  there is a chance of a HEA.yay.

 

Reviewer: oliveU (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Mope and Hope

Yay!!

Reviewer: EdwardsVampTramp (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Mope and Hope

I can't stop laughing!  The image of Boobward with a bag of Bella's blood and a *gasp*.....straw........just cracks me the hell up!!!  The look on his face sitting alone in the kitchen with it is so crystal clear in my mind and is priceless!  Excellent!

Wow!  Carlisle may have isolated the problem?  I knew he was a handsome genius........*wink*  Um, but the idea of him collecting Edward's ejaculate was a bit much for me. *shudders*  I think Bella should have collected it for him. :) 

So there is hope for our little "monster" after all.  *jumping up and down*

Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Mope and Hope

I was starting to get discouraged in this chapter when it turned out he could only drink directly from Bella to maintain some sort of sanity. Thank goodness Carlisle didn't give up and has come up with what could be the solution.

Reviewer: coltgal (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Mope and Hope

Yay a cure!  Lets hope it works. 

Reviewer: Julz04 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Mope and Hope

I will be so broken hearted if this doesn't end with a HEA but I'm not naive enough to think that it would be that easy to find a cure.  That was a super hot scene with the double lust groove going on.  Personally, I'm hoping he slips and turns her into a vamp while getting serious.  I just can't help it.  Can't wait for the next chaper...for this one and SB too!

Reviewer: KStewLipBite (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Mope and Hope

...And the drinking from the straw had me LMAO!

Reviewer: guineapig (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Mope and Hope

:) Thank God for that.....I was very worried he would kill her!

Reviewer: KStewLipBite (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Mope and Hope

Whoa... Is Edward becoming human?

 

Another nail biting chapter. Thank you!!

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Mope and Hope

yes please find the cure for Edward. I want  a happy ending!

Reviewer: Saxon23 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Mope and Hope

Another kick ass chapter - thank you.
I love the twist here - Carlisle finding the protein...does it seem too easy though?
Gah, in some ways i want this story to go on for another 20 chapters but at the same time I want these two to be together and to be happy....so I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: PulpAddict (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:08 PM · On: Mope and Hope

I like the science fiction twist this is taking!

Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Mope and Hope

*SQUEEE*!!!!!!
Please don't dash Boobwards hopes away. I don't think any of us could stand it 3=

Reviewer: Grizelda (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Mope and Hope

You are a mad scientist for thinking this one up.  Kudos to you.  Loving every chapter that you can draw out of this story. Truly a classic.

Reviewer: biblepam (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Mope and Hope

don't worry about how many chapters there are remaining. 3 or 4 or if too long 20..lol.. we are a greedy lot and i for one would like to hang on to boobward the hbv for a while.. hopefully a synthetic protein can be used to spare the bella abuse further... glad edward convinced bella to see her dad Christmas.. it's a special time for families.. .it's something though when a human dad can put the fear in a vampire.(LOL).... you really had me laughing though when carlise was collecting samples and bella was insistant on staying with edward till she found out it was an ejaculate sample that was needed..then she was like --i am outta here.. ... was happy edward recovered enough to remember the lullaby.. that was sweet..... thanks for the great post as always... one of my most favorite stories... hbv boobward has grown close to my heart !!  Pam B

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Mope and Hope

Go, Carlisle!  Keep that researching going!

I am hopeful that a synthetic can be found. I want him to find a way to be happy and to keep her happy. 

I look forward to how this develops!!  This is just a stunning tale!

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Mope and Hope

does anyone, anywhere, at any time, EVER, read a chapter without thinking: edward, edward, edward, you sweet, clueless, monster? as if bella didn't miss sex! please, we all missed the sex.

he's such a mess. and i love him. i kinda picture him with the same expression my boxer has when i tell him "no, it's not dinner time yet" and i get the boxer-sigh.

 



Author's Response:

Awww...I love boxers!!!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Mope and Hope

Great chapter!  So you are a scientist as well as a terrific writer...Wow! 

The first part of this chapter in Edwards words was so good, so evocative, so real it gave me chills.  It doesn't get any better than that!

 

 

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Mope and Hope

Hope?  Please don't tease, Savage.  My poor heart cannot take it.

Lovely chapter, as always.  You are a superior wordsmith!

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