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Reviewer: mluch1121 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Craving Death

wow these are really intense! im really interesting in read more of your writing.

Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Craving Death

I wasn't sure if I wanted to read this at first, but I just could not turn away from it. I'm a sucker for some soul sucking. Both of these snaphots are quite unique and original, and yet still not straying TOO far from canon... in a way.

I hope you have more! Because, I'll be reading it.  :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading them..

When I started writing them, I never meant for them to be canon, but I guess they are in a way. Not Jasper doing drugs or anything, but him with Maria. Alice is very canon, except she never became a vampire.

I have a few more ideas that I need to put on paper and flesh them out. But I'll update as soon as I have them done.

I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review these one shots. I really do.. :)

Reviewer: TheGodsCanDance (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Junk

You start by quoting Kurt, which immediately garners my interest.

And you mix that egocentric, all-consuming twenty-something almost-innocence in with death and urine and vomit and dependence.

And you have your girl say "she did not want this to end in tragedy" and I don't know whether to laugh or cry because there is nothing here that is not painful. And heartbreaking. And reeks of despair and self-abuse.

But these two see this as their Love Story. And who am I to judge another?

This is a fabulous piece of writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you,

After reading that review, I had to ask, do you write? And if so, I must read it.

I am touched by your words, and can only hope that the next one shot that I will put up here soon will gain the same response from you. It is an Alice one shot, she is in the aslym.

I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review this one shot


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