DAYUM. Sweaty, sexy Jasper below you, fingering you? Shit don't get no better than that, s''truth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  (fans self in vain attempt to cool down.)

I was SO stoked to see a new chappie up!!   Bums me out though - that prologue of yours is some nasty shit, and I know that despite her forward steps, baaaad shit is coming for Miss Bella. :(((( Please oh please, let Jas and Emmett kill him afterward????   Really, I'll never ask for anything again, Santa!!!!!

I cannot freakin' WAIT to see Eclipse tomorrow!!!!!!!  Jasper's gonna be all fight-y and HOT HOT HOT!!!!  (searches under bed for BOB)

;)

 

 

Oh, yeah.  I'm mean, OH, yeah.  Loved the fact that you had them getting all hot and sweaty, fightin', before... Oh yeah.

I know some of those moves, and you are correct, they do exist.  I understood by your descriptions, but maybe cuz that's cuz I know them!

There's one you forgot.  A paralyzing finger in the fleshy part under your chin - I call it the one-finger move.  Heh, heh.  An army guy taught me that one.  ;)

Great, great chapter.

Author's Response:

I don't know that one! Tell me more about it so I can use it... er... later ;)

I'm glad you like it! I don't have a teaser for you yet but I er *cough* am working on it... :D

spent two days readin this thro. and tho i don't normally read AH i do give select few a chance, and your's is by far one of the top i have read. Wish you luck on future chapters and hope to see more soon.

Author's Response:

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond! I had to write something new before I could tease you! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Here's your teaser:

“He’s not teaching me to fight, Em, he’s teaching me to defend myself,” I told him, stirring the sauce so that the cheese mixed seamlessly with the tomato base.
“Same difference,” Emmett said, reaching a hand towards the sauce.
“Emmett McCarty Cullen,” I said, my voice a warning, “Don’t you dare put your finger in my sauce.”
He looked up and grinned devilishly, his eyes glinted with the challenge, “Oh? What are you going to do about it, little sister?”
I turned towards him with a smirk, “Are you stupid enough to want to find out?”
Emmett’s grin widened. He moved faster than you would expect, given his bulk, but I hadn’t been training with Jasper for nothing. I reached out, just as fast, and grabbed his finger before it went anywhere near my bubbling sauce.
“Consider this your warning,” I said, still smirking, fully hoping he’d push me.

He did.

I wouldn't mind being dryhumped by Jasper. Where do I sign up for that?

Author's Response:

Haha, get in line!

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond! I had to write something new before I could tease you! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Here's your teaser:

“He’s not teaching me to fight, Em, he’s teaching me to defend myself,” I told him, stirring the sauce so that the cheese mixed seamlessly with the tomato base.
“Same difference,” Emmett said, reaching a hand towards the sauce.
“Emmett McCarty Cullen,” I said, my voice a warning, “Don’t you dare put your finger in my sauce.”
He looked up and grinned devilishly, his eyes glinted with the challenge, “Oh? What are you going to do about it, little sister?”
I turned towards him with a smirk, “Are you stupid enough to want to find out?”
Emmett’s grin widened. He moved faster than you would expect, given his bulk, but I hadn’t been training with Jasper for nothing. I reached out, just as fast, and grabbed his finger before it went anywhere near my bubbling sauce.
“Consider this your warning,” I said, still smirking, fully hoping he’d push me.

He did.

I love that she is in therapy.  I know that it can be hard but it is necessary.  I think that the therapy and Jasper teaching her self defense will help boost her self confidence so that she is less afraid and can get on with her life.

Author's Response:

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond! I had to write something new before I could tease you! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Here's your teaser:

“He’s not teaching me to fight, Em, he’s teaching me to defend myself,” I told him, stirring the sauce so that the cheese mixed seamlessly with the tomato base.
“Same difference,” Emmett said, reaching a hand towards the sauce.
“Emmett McCarty Cullen,” I said, my voice a warning, “Don’t you dare put your finger in my sauce.”
He looked up and grinned devilishly, his eyes glinted with the challenge, “Oh? What are you going to do about it, little sister?”
I turned towards him with a smirk, “Are you stupid enough to want to find out?”
Emmett’s grin widened. He moved faster than you would expect, given his bulk, but I hadn’t been training with Jasper for nothing. I reached out, just as fast, and grabbed his finger before it went anywhere near my bubbling sauce.
“Consider this your warning,” I said, still smirking, fully hoping he’d push me.

He did.

Uhhhh I am so conflicted...I don't know what i want to think!!

The boys POV is fun to read...Emmett is just a riot. I love that Edward hasn't a clue as to why he's brooding...I wonder who's gonna clue him in?

This is just wow...

I wonder what Edward was going to say when he walked in...

Wow that was FABULOUS!!

It's heartbreaking to think Bella reacts that way...she must have had one hell of a past. I feel the warm fuzzies thinking how the boys took such good care of Bella. Edward definalty has more than brotherly feelings for Bella it seems like...I wonder how long that take before it developes into something more. I just hope they don't fight it...it's as enevitable as the sun rising. I wonder if Jasper is starting to have an inkling of how much Edward likes Bella. Ohh what will they think?

I loved it!!

*Gasp!* Oh from what i can read Bella has had a horrible past. Literally broken, I can't imagine what kind of demons she faces on a daily basis. Hmmm I wonder if Edward has more that brotherly love for her as it appears he was jealous of Jasper...

hmm there's just so many 'compromising' positions Bella & Jasper can find themselves in if he's teaching her self-defence... though I think I'm more amused by the prospect of Bella shoving Emmett around inside the house until Esme busts them and tells Emmett off. Because it couldn't possibly be sweet innocent Bella's fault? ;)

Author's Response:

YOu have no idea how close you are to the mark! ;)

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond! I had to write something new before I could tease you! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Here's your teaser:

“He’s not teaching me to fight, Em, he’s teaching me to defend myself,” I told him, stirring the sauce so that the cheese mixed seamlessly with the tomato base.
“Same difference,” Emmett said, reaching a hand towards the sauce.
“Emmett McCarty Cullen,” I said, my voice a warning, “Don’t you dare put your finger in my sauce.”
He looked up and grinned devilishly, his eyes glinted with the challenge, “Oh? What are you going to do about it, little sister?”
I turned towards him with a smirk, “Are you stupid enough to want to find out?”
Emmett’s grin widened. He moved faster than you would expect, given his bulk, but I hadn’t been training with Jasper for nothing. I reached out, just as fast, and grabbed his finger before it went anywhere near my bubbling sauce.
“Consider this your warning,” I said, still smirking, fully hoping he’d push me.

He did.

Jeez, Jazz can come up wirh colourful terms!

It's not surprising that Bella found the therapy hard. Therapy is never easy, and quite often exhausting, even though all you're doing is talking. But it was nice that she and Jazz got to spend time together as a couple without the prying eyes of people that know them. Dry humping would have been interesting though... but not in public.

Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond! I had to write something new before I could tease you! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Here's your teaser:

“He’s not teaching me to fight, Em, he’s teaching me to defend myself,” I told him, stirring the sauce so that the cheese mixed seamlessly with the tomato base.
“Same difference,” Emmett said, reaching a hand towards the sauce.
“Emmett McCarty Cullen,” I said, my voice a warning, “Don’t you dare put your finger in my sauce.”
He looked up and grinned devilishly, his eyes glinted with the challenge, “Oh? What are you going to do about it, little sister?”
I turned towards him with a smirk, “Are you stupid enough to want to find out?”
Emmett’s grin widened. He moved faster than you would expect, given his bulk, but I hadn’t been training with Jasper for nothing. I reached out, just as fast, and grabbed his finger before it went anywhere near my bubbling sauce.
“Consider this your warning,” I said, still smirking, fully hoping he’d push me.

He did.

Good for Bella seeking out help. I don;t think she;;s crazy necessarily, just paranoid.

Author's Response:

So then you don't think she's seeing James, eh? Well, we'll have to see!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

JPOV
Reaching the passenger door of the car, I had a sudden urge to prolong our time together. It wasn’t like we often got the chance to act like a real couple, after all. We couldn’t exactly waltz around Forks holding hands and kissing. So instead of opening the car door for Bella, I took her tea from her and set it down on the hood of the car with my half finished coffee. She looked at me curiously and opened her mouth, probably to ask me what the hell I was doing, but before she could get the words out I covered her lips with mine.

She froze for half a second before melting into my body. I groaned as her arms snaked around my neck; it had been so god damn long since I could hold her and kiss her like this. Our interactions in the past month and a half had been little kisses and sly touches but since nearly being caught by Emmett we had toned down the intimacy factor. Now I could pull her close to my body, hold her tightly against me and kiss her with abandon. I did exactly that.

And it was fucking glorious.