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Reviewer: transitory_moment (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 6: Alter

I think this is great but I don't get why it seems like you're rushing Nessie's feelings towards Josh. I mean, they barely said a few words to each other and already she's thinking about if she'd want to change him? She doesn't even know if he's in love with her, though I guess that is the direction you're taking, to her it isn't clear yet so it doesn't make sense.

Reviewer: transitory_moment (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 04:13 PM · On: Preface and Chapter 1: Read This!

Good. I like the Gossip Girl quote. I think it fits Bella/Edward's love story too.

Reviewer: cortierox (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 8: "Tent"

oh my god. your story is so confusing...its so hard to keep up and nothing you write makes any sense

Reviewer: twilight2244 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 9: Snow Angel

Your totally right, now I do really no what Bella felt like in New Moon even more. And I can tell you New Moon almost made me cry when Edward left Bella and now this chapter almost made me cry for whats going on. Poor Jake... Josh sucks... Nessie belongs with Jake...he's not a monster.... but anyways please update really really soon... great story... and i really want to ,find out whats going to happen to Jake being rejected and find out more about Josh...please update as soon as you can...please and thanks

Reviewer: twilight2244 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 8: "Tent"

please update as soon as you can... i want to no whats going to happen next... i really want to no whats going to happen between nessie and jacob... and whats the deal with josh. plz and thankz

Reviewer: Yavanna (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 7: Home

Wow - cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response:
Once again I must thank you! I'm truly glad that you're enjoying this so much. The next chapter is pretty intense and should be out soon. So you won't have to wait too long for an update. Thanks for your kind words!

-Shanna

Reviewer: Yavanna (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 6: Alter

Really liked this one.. Cannot wait to see what's this all about with Josh!

Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your nice review. I think you're really going to like the next chapter. More of Josh's mysteriousness is revealed in it. Hope you continue to enjoy reading this!

-Shanna

Reviewer: happylauren15 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Preface and Chapter 1: Read This!

Forgot to rate! Ooops!

Reviewer: happylauren15 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 4: Vampire Review and Baseball Group?

Wonderful! Please continue. I really like how you made Jacobs and Nessie's relationship. Usually in N/J stories Renesemee and Jacob end up confessing their love for each other in the first chapter. I like how it progresses slowly. Please don't keep me waiting too long. I am really loving this story.

Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 3: 4,33,29...

Great chapter! I kinda feel bad for Jake though, Nessie crushing majorly on Josh. The J/N moments are so cute! I can't wait to find out exactly what the danger is around josh! Great job!

Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 2: Sour

Aww Poor Ness! I enjoyed reading about how they interacted in school. Seeing that she called her grandfather made me smile! Great chapter.

Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Preface and Chapter 1: Read This!

This is a good start! I like how Nessie is in the dark on the whole imprinting thing. When I wrote my N/J story I did the same. I don't think she should have to grow up knowing that Jacob has been chosen for her and that's her only choice. Great job!

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