Well you got me again, I didn't expect to hear from the arsehole at all.  My opinion has not changed.  I'm even more disgusted that he was unfaithful to Bella right from the moment he went to college, he just couldn't keep his dick in his pants, it's a shame it hasn't dropped off from some disgusting disease, lol.  I keep wondering if Angela had told Bella about the incident with Jake earlier and things had turned out differently for Bella, would she still have met Edward?  How would the fates have conspired to get them together?

I'm so glad that Bella's not backing down and is in fact showing Jake how much stronger and happier she is now.  Jake has been one of the most monumentous fools in the world and I'm taking a perverse pleasure in the fact that he's realised now what he had and how he's fucked it up big style.  Leah's welcome to him, she's stupid beyond belief to want him.  Once a cheater, always a cheater.......I could say so much more on that one......like hmmm, it's only a stupid mistake once you've been caught. *raises eyebrow*  Anyway I really shouldn't go there.

Thank God Bella's selling the house.  I would say she should move to England permanently but I know she would miss Charlie, but then again with Edward's career she's going to be back and forth anyway.

Jane x

What the...!!!  I have my pitchfork out again Mrs, I'm putting my boots on and I'm about to grab my coat.

Stupid arsehole Mike, what was he thinking.  Of course he really wasn't thinking of anything but those dollar signs that were flashing up in front of his eyes.  Far be it for me to wish anyone dead but I hope he gets what he deserves.

Please make Edward and Bella alright, they're just starting out together and have so much future in front of them.  I guess Claire's going to be regretting what she said.

Now, where are my keys?......

Jane x

Oh no, I was just getting comfy then for some sexy kitchen lovin' and now this.  Has guilt got the better of Jake and he's turned up or has Charlie arrived because I don't seem to remember Bella calling her dad and Claire on Thanksgiving?

These two are certainly hot together and finally Bella has her sexual awakening and now she knows what all the fuss is about, lol.  I'm so happy for them.  I've put my pitchfork away........for now, lol.

Jane x

Well, Tanya was a surprise and a rather nice one at that, for a change I find myself liking her. *gasp* Lol.

Bloody Jane, won't she ever go away?  Is she that much of a publicity whore that she did a deal with Newton?  Where's he got his tan from?  Jane's lucky that Edward doesn't hit women.

Wow, I knew James was creepy but God he's a sick git, a serial rapist!  So it was him in the car watching Bella on her jogs, he must have been following and watching her for quite some time.  Thank God Charlie turned up when he did, it's a pity he didn't kill him.  How is Edward going to manage getting back to Houston in the middle of filming, surely he won't be able to get too much time off, if any?  I'm glad they're talking again even if Bella nearly had to die for it to happen.  Sometimes you need something to jolt you awake and make you realise what's important and what you might lose.

Jane x

"I've got your back with Claire if you've got mine."  Seriously, is that a thinly veiled threat or something because it sure sounds like one to me.  I'm sorry but he's the one that's leaving he should be the one to explain to Claire.  It just goes to show just how big of a shit he is that he insists that Bella tells her what's going on but not why.  I know that Bella's gone along with this because she doesn't want to hurt Claire or destroy her relationship with her dad but she will find out one day exactly what Jake did and I just hope she understands why her mum didn't tell her the full story.

Trust Emmett to bring the fun back to things what with 'that' t-shirt and his unfortunate googling of Edward's crotch, bwahahahaha!!  You've just got to love a clueless Emmett.  Although, I suspect he's not that clueless, he just doesn't care.  Now, who's going to be the one to slip up and mention that Alice talked to Bella?  Will it be Alice herself or Jasper?  Someone's got to say something.  Maybe Angela will do some furtive searching of Bella's phone for Edward's number, hmmm.  Just please get them back together soon, I can't stand much more of this misery, my heart's already in pieces, please don't crush it.

Jane x

Wow, that was hot and, as Edward said, he hasn't even begun to show her pleasure yet, ahem.  The only thing that worries me is that Jake is going to find out and turn this all around on Bella when he's the one that's been cheating for ages.

Is Aro related to Marcus in this?  Will we find out just how freaky Marcus is?  Lol.

Jane x

God only knows whose secret will be revealed first but one thing I will tell you, which your already know since it's your story, lol, is that once it comes out about Edward and Bella the shit will hit the fan with Claire and her coming on to Edward and him using her parents as an excuse.  Erm, I think they should start building a bunker in the back garden quick because all of this going off could be epic.

I keep forgetting to mention the car.  I have two theories.  It's either Mike Newton stalking Edward for juicy gossip and he's found him via someone from the Zombie set who knew he'd been to Houston or, Jake has hired a private detective to try and catch Bella cheating on him.  I'm going for the second one.

Ironically, it's bedtime for me now so I'll have to wait to find out if Bella sleeps with Edward in their own version of bedtime, lol.

Jane x

Author's Response:

Heh, heh! Still loving all of your comments and theories - keep 'em coming! I know you don't REALLY want any spoilers as to what's ahead, so I'll just keep quiet for now and let you discover how things unfold on your own. ;)

FM

Woohoo!! They're back together again.

Jake kept the fact that Leah would be going on his business trip rather quiet didn't he.  How many other times has he kept her presence secret, does she always go with him?  I wouldn't have thought she'd have to go at all really.  Oooh the ring, well from Edward's description of it and Bella's description of the earrings, I'd say that Jake bought the tacky ring for the tacky Leah.  Now the question is, what's Bella going to do about this?  Personally I think she should hire a private detective pronto, tell them where he is and get the evidence she needs to divorce him whilst he's on this trip.  I know this is her marriage and she loved Jake once upon a time.....didn't she?  She's worth so much more than what Jake is doing, he's making a mockery of their marriage and family.

They kissed! *squee*  I'm looking forward to more, lol, I know I shouldn't be wishing for Bella to cheat on Jake but, well.....it's Jake, he's a shit, who cares about him, he doesn't care about Bella.  Oh, and whilst I'm thinking about it, what did he mean by saying he'd call to check up on her??  Check up on her!  He's the one that needs checking up on, is he even aware of the shit that comes out of his mouth?  Aaarrghh!!!

Okay, I feel better now, lol.

Jane x

So is Marcus psycho or psychic?  He's an odd one isn't he.  That chapter was really hard to read with Edward going through detox on his own, I kept wanting him to call someone to help him but the only person he really would want would be Bella and she wouldn't have been able to drop everything without raising suspicion. 

I'm glad he's off the pills now, but he still has a hard struggle in front of him.  Thank God he's called Bella and told her everything, I'm glad he's going back to see her.  Now I'm beginning to worry about Edward's investments with Jake.  If Bella and Edward start a relationship could he bankrupt Edward?  Could he already be using Edward's money for his own purposes?  If I was Edward I really wouldn't like Jake having financial control of my life.

Jane x

Awww, they're both at a crossroads in their lives and decisions have to be made and houses put in order, so to speak.  Edward really needs to knock his addictions on the head or he'll be no use to anyone especially Bella. 

Bella, bless her, needs to stand up for herself more.  Jake is away all the time, Claire will leave for college probably in the next 12 months and Bella is unhappy, worse than that she's bored and unhappy.  Time re-evaluate her life, think of herself for a change and do what she wants to do.  If that means divorcing Jake so she can be happy then so be it.  I think he's having an affair anyway, I mean, what man with a beautiful wife like Bella says no to 'cuddle time'?  Exactly, tired my arse.

Jane x

Bella's dress sounds amazing and I'm glad that she's going to go out with Angela and Ben.  What's Edward going to buy her?  I'm getting more and more suspicious that Jake is having an affair.  This thought doesn't seem to have crossed Bella's mind at all.  Is that because she's just not got a suspicious mind or because she doesn't really care?

I'm getting more and more worried about Edward with his drug cocktails and drink on top.  Everyone around him are too wrapped up in their own lives to notice what's happening.  If Bella was there she'd notice.  I think going home is the best thing for him, apart from Bella obviously.  Hopefully his family and friends will spot what he's doing and help him out.

Jane x

 

Author's Response:

I'm really enjoying reading all of your reviews! Sounds like you have a lot of questions, but I promise, they'll all be answered in time. ;) Fair warning - things do get a little angsty, but I think you'll be happy with the way everything works out in the end. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

FM

Awww, they're so sweet together both not saying what the want to say.  Bella could call or text on the pretext of thanking Edward for the note and also making sure he got home safely especially as he doesn't like flying, see not awkward at all, lol.  Thank God she didn't get the sheets out of the washer to smell them.  I love that Angela and Ben have 'free pass' lists, there's no way that Jake would go for that, if he did his would have people like Leah and Alice on it.

I loved 'fact or crap' with Claire, I think they should play more of that.  Why didn't Edward say 'crap' to the dating Jane question?  They never really did date they were just forced together and had occasional sex, he wouldn't have been lying really.  Yes, I know, I'm trying to justify it to myself but I don't care that's what I believe and I'm sticking to it, lol.

Jane x