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Reviewer: momofthree (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2011 09:48 AM · On: Companion To Your Soul
wwrite a sequel. Please!
Reviewer: momofthree (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 10:07 AM · On: Revenge and Respect
AWESOME BUT try to add a little more romance between edword & bella
pppplllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee
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Reviewer: momofthree (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 09:53 AM · On: The Love of Juliet
COOL
Reviewer: momofthree (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 03:09 PM · On: A Strange Feeling
COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewer: momofthree (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 12:24 PM · On: Change on the Horizon
awesome ,ali bey !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111111111111111111 ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 111!! !
Reviewer: displacement (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Companion To Your Soul
i like the story, but it did come on pretty fast at the end there... not a lot of development between edward hating bella and undying love.
Reviewer: lilylows (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Relentless, Vengeful, and Absolutely Wonderful
Honeydew is green and cantaloupe is orange
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Companion To Your Soul
Luv it.!!!!!!!!!!! YES PLEASE DO WRITE A SEQUEL
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Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Companion To Your Soul
words can not express how heartfelt this story is. i felt the angst from edward as he dealt with his peers. ur plot was very strong. all ur characters were relatable and i wanted to jump in and protect poor edward and jasper. it's rare that i ome across a story that can hold its own without involving sex or some plot similar to the twilight saga. i applaud u for that...overall i loved ur story and i would be excited to read ur sequel if u decided to do one. keep writing! u have great promise!!!
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Shattering the Barrier
Owwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!
That must of hurt.
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Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:35 AM · On: Relentless, Vengeful, and Absolutely Wonderful
Emmet was HILERIOS!!! Lol
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Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Taking This Seriously
A clean room? Nice job
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Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Not Believing Just Quite Yet
still awsome
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Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Change on the Horizon
so far so good
<3 vampgurl777
Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Companion To Your Soul
I really liked your story! you ended it at a great time and I didn't have to skip the sex scenes. it was a great story for me!
Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 11:25 AM · On: False Impressions
I love this rose!
Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Revenge and Respect
now Edward changes. deep sigh. high school is complicated.
Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 04:05 AM · On: A New Perception
there it is. the signs of change
Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Lean On Me
I cannot fathom how this ends up a b.e story. she didn't do anything to stop emmett
Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Companion To Your Soul
good story overall but there were some problems
1. you need a beta. there were a lot of typos in here...who for how, ashed for ashes, stuff like that, stuff that spell check isn't going to catch. and some sentences just didn't make sense.
2. the title had me expecting more b/e interactions. i thought it was going to be more about b and e's relationship, but this was more about his transformation.
3. the changes in POV were a little disconcerning. it would take me a few paragraphs before i would realise who was speaking in each chapter. i don't know if you did that on purpose, but adding BPOV or EPOV at the beginning of each chapter would have helped. also, i was very surprised when you used RPOV. i wasn't expecting that, but i don't think you could have told the story completely without it. it just seemed strange that you would use a POV that wasn't b or e. it would have made more sense if you had a couple JPOVs or something.
overall, this was a good story, it just needs a little tweaking. ;c)
Reviewer: cheshiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Companion To Your Soul
Ok! so, I waited until the end to review because I wanted to know how the story ended...and since you had already finished posting it, I figured I might as well do 1 review...
I read it in 2 days and it was really good! I'll be checking to see if you did the Sequel after all and se your other stories!
I really liked your Rosalie and Jasper! =)
ok, I'm usually lost at what to say in reviews... so, ok! sorry for the rambling and thanks for the story!
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Critical Conditions
ug..sadness
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Love and Infatuation
why do i sense impending doom? lol
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Life Ends Without You
lol damn they share dream music. So uh why did she leave her truck at school and ride with Alice?
Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Revenge and Respect
ouch Meanward coming out to play! OMG the gay bit was too freakin funny...I laughed till I couldnt breath!
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