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Reviewer: theabigayle (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2013 12:51 PM · On: One-shot
Nice :)
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 11:57 AM · On: One-shot
diffrent, I liked it. I'd be interested to read a one shot between them after Bella's change.
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 05:52 PM · On: One-shot
Very good.
Reviewer: lexy lujan (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 05:59 PM · On: One-shot
gosh i love bella/alice storys. i was looking for some all day and this has to be my favorite.
i say wrire more! great job by the way.
Reviewer: lexy lujan (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 05:57 PM · On: One-shot
gosh i love bella/alice storys. i was looking for some all day and this has to be my favorite.
i say wrire more! great job by the way.
Reviewer: raspberrylucky (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 04:56 PM · On: One-shot
Love it! I want someone to write an Alice/Bella fic but with more emotion and romance.
This was a lovely lemon :)
Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 08:26 AM · On: One-shot
Oooooh, steamy. If you were to go chronologically (like if this was really in the books), Bella had an orgasm with Alice before Edward.
Interesting! (:
Nice writing, unique concept. I liked it!
The only thing that seemed sort of unrealistic was the fact that Bella went along with it so easily. I guess it was already over the line, though, so it doesn't really matter. :D
xx
Author's Response: Yeah, I agree with your 'unrealistic' comment. I figured, why spend time having Bella resist when we all know what's coming. *ahem* Glad you enjoyed the steam. :)
Reviewer: BLETB (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:40 PM · On: One-shot
mmm, very well written, how about more to this one, maybe with Alice able to control herself? That would be VERY nice!
Author's Response: Thanks for the good feedback! While there are a couple different ideas floating around in my head, the next fic will probably be a seperate alice/bella oneshot.
Reviewer: Cale Masen (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 12:05 PM · On: One-shot
good read
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 11:35 AM · On: One-shot
that was......AWESOME!!!!!..........it would have been good if Edward had been watching but it was HOT all on it's own
Author's Response: THANKS! That would have been a good idea. But who knows, maybe he'll see or hear it all later. Alice does have a vivid memory after all ;)
Reviewer: Carlisle060 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 02:22 AM · On: One-shot
kind of awkward but uhm ,,,,
interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks for the input! That's good to know if I write another one. :)
Reviewer: Cerulean (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 04:01 AM · On: One-shot
wow great job! i love bella and alice pairings and i am glad you had alice be very gentle and reassuring for bella - it was so cute!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like a gentle Alice. She's fierce, but soft. :D
Reviewer: Dreaming Dimitra (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 03:07 AM · On: One-shot
This sort of thing never even crossed my mind but I liked it. A lot! Would have been nice if you had run with Bella and her thought to return the favor but I don't think I'd like to read about Edward and Jasper experimenting.
Keep writing and I'll read more! Great job!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, it could have definitely gone into Bella returning the favor but then I thought...a chick vamp's orgasm is probably pretty intense. Would she bruise Bella's fingers? I don't know...but I don't think Alice would risk anything before Bella and Edward's wedding. *shrug*
Thanks! The encouragement means a lot!
Reviewer: Crazy4Chris (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:27 AM · On: One-shot
wow..oh wow...hotttt!!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! :D
Reviewer: btpcullen12 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 06:44 PM · On: One-shot
that was amazing lol MORE MORE... PLEASE!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You've been HEARD. You've been HEARD! lol
Reviewer: isabellarose (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 10:52 AM · On: One-shot
wow....ive neva read anything like that one here...dude pls write some more like this
Author's Response: ive neva read anything like that one here
Well, I hope you meant that in a good way. :P Thanks for the review! It made me smile. :)
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 06:20 AM · On: One-shot
uh yeah...you should definitely keep writing oneshots!
Author's Response: lol well thanks! It's definitely something to consider.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 11:43 PM · On: One-shot
Well written- just not quite sure how I felt about the content. Not offended, just not my cup of tea.
Author's Response: Yes, it's not for everyone. Thanks for reading though! I appreciate the feedback. :)
Reviewer: Lys (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 02:25 PM · On: One-shot
WOW. Very hot.
Author's Response: XD Glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Jeannette (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 11:43 AM · On: One-shot
Very nice;) and sweet too. I was a little confused by Jasper's wink, what exactly did Edward do at his party, and was it with Jasper. Now that would make an interesting companion one shot to this piece.
Author's Response: Well this fic takes up right from the moment Jasper winks at Bella in Breaking Dawn when the guys come over to take Edward away to his 'party.' LOVE your take on it though! That would definitely be an interesting tale to pursue, as I love me some Edward/Jasper slashy goodness. Thanks for the review!
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