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Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 3

oh man!! i wanted a reunion!! :(

it was good anyway!!

Reviewer: Zakaira (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 2

Great chapter! I would like to see some flashbacks of what happened inbetween now and when Edward left. Like why did she chose cooking school and why is Jake not around more? Is he still in high school or something?

Reviewer: Zakaira (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 Red Sky

I really liked how Alice left the suit for Bella! That was really cool

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great chapter! Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

nice

Reviewer: Alby Mangroves (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 3

I want to send you some encouragement; I know how hard it is to keep going when your real life gets in the way! Your story is easy to read and entertaining, and I was excited to see a new chapter update today. Keep up the great work! Hope to see you back soon x

Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 2

I really like this take on the original story

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 2

looking forward to more

glad to here it is a E and B tale

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 2

love it.

Reviewer: Alby Mangroves (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 Red Sky

Nicely written so far, and interesting! Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 Red Sky

truly interesting, do you have this somewhere else, too ?

Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words. This story is only here on Twilighted. This is the first story I've tried to publish online. It's also the only story that I've written about twilight that I've been able to get past the first chapter.

Reviewer: pricel (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 Red Sky

Well done. Keep going. Looking forward to seeing more of the story and how you move on from here with it.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 1 Red Sky

good start

please tell me this is an E and B tale

Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 1 Red Sky

I really enjoyed the first chapter!

Is this going to be a E/B story or a J/B story? I like them both, so I guess it really doesn't matter :)

Please update soon!

Happy Holidays!

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