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Reviewer: Karmabites76 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 11:12 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

LOVE it! <3

Reviewer: flutterback (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

I thought this story was so beautiful and touching. Truly an original concept, but you still managed to make it pure and wonderful nonetheless. The baby's name at the end made me cry. That was a perfect touch.

Thanks so much for sharing! This one is staying on my favorites list!!

Reviewer: Natty_K (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

Wow, I absofuckinglutely love your little story! Its brilliant!



Author's Response:

Hey there. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I'm glad you liked the story. :) 

I actually did a few more o/s' for this story line that I haven't sent in to Twilighted as of yet. So if you're interested, please feel free to read at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5555911/1/Alices_Jasper_Edwards_Bella

 

Thanks again!

Reviewer: shefelldown (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:46 AM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

i saw this recced on ADF.  it made me want to cry a little bit.  i appreciate how you didn't try to solve the problem of them loving their first spouse.  so much fan fic disregards that when laying aside canon couples.  it was really good, i enjoyed it a lot.



Author's Response:

Woa! What's ADF?

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :) it means the world to me.

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

I can barely see to type here and there is a big pile of wet tear stained tissues on the table. 

This is truly beautiful, bittersweet and so sad.

Thank you

Achilles



Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. You know, I actually forgot I posted it to Twilighted... if you're interested, I've actually continued this story (sort of ... it's a collection of O/s's) over on FF.net. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5555911/1/Alices_Jasper_Edwards_Bella 

 

Either way - thanks so much for taking the time to review. It means a lot to me.

Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

That was SO beautiful! I absolutely loved it, amazing job! Made me want to curl up and cry a little, but then you fixed it and made it better ;) Fantastic!

Reviewer: Malka (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

WOW.... just wow! this is sooo amazing!

Reviewer: Malka (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

WOW.... just wow! this is sooo amazing!

Reviewer: minutewithoutyou (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

Wow! A sad story all around with a happy and kick butt ending. I loved it!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it. Yea, I killed Edward and Alice...wtf is wrong with me!?

Reviewer: la_bella_sera (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

beautiful..absolutely beautiful



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad I did this subject matter justice.

Reviewer: Corinab (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

That was something amazing. I am in total awe of your story.



Author's Response:

I'm in total awe of the response it's gotten thus far. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me.

Reviewer: Witch Hazel (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

Oh, wow. That was so sweet it brought tears to my eyes. You had a wonderful balance of pain and sorrow and hope. Absolutely wonderful.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad it came through the way I wanted it to. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

That was really sweet. I like it.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: nita (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

 very good  i loved it



Author's Response:

So glad you like it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Its_Never_Enough (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

that was so sweet. had me in tears all the way thru



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It's amazing the emotional response this stoy has had with people. I love it. Thanks again. It means a lot.

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

This was so beautiful! And heartbreaking! But I loved the fact that they were able to rebuild their lives and find solace in each other, falling in love along the way.



Author's Response:

Broke my heart to write it but the payoff has been rewarding to say the least. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me.

Reviewer: alllliii (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

that was beautiful!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: PreferBrunettes (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

A wonderful story using so many little things from the books - Jake showing up at the wedding, the He's worth it line just like Jasper had said to Bella - and I love this pairing.  I really liked how they weren't replacements for Edward and Alice but were able to fill the holes left behind by them.  Very nicely put together and thank you for sharing it with us early.



Author's Response:

How did you know it was Jake? lol. I mean, it was Jake in my head but I purposefully left out the name to make it ambiguous.

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me. Especially because I don't normally do non-canon READING let alone writing....

Reviewer: GreenEggs89 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

Amazing!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: butterlfybetty (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

Wow, that was really good.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Louisa Williams (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

I really liked it. I think you did an exceptional job dealing with very heart breaking circumstances.



Author's Response:

That's so good to hear. I was nervous about the circumstances to say the least. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

This by far is one of the most wonderfully and beautifully written, emotional and left me speechless type of one shot. Just Fantastic!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words. They mean a lot to me, especially with this particular fic. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Artemisia (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

Incredible.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: DesiCullen (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Alice's Jasper, Edward's Bella

wow... just wow... 

I can't believe I almost passed this up and went to bed early. This is better than any one shot I've ever read and better than most full length stories. Freaking amazing!



Author's Response:

I'm passing up sleep to respond to reviews! Thank you. Thank you so much for your kind words. They remind me why I love writing. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

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