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Reviewer: aleene35 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Absolution

I love all the extras you are giving us thanks.

Author's Response:

Well, no story is really ever over...glad you're enjoying these additional visitS <><3

Reviewer: Ladielove (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Perihelion

P.s. your description of Jake in the parks and wildlife uniform with a pair of sexy aviators just gave me the best mental image. Ugh! who can resist a man in uniform?!

Author's Response:

*licks lips* especially alongside the 'other Jake's', shirtless...tux... <><3

Reviewer: Ladielove (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Perihelion

Oh my goodness. I read the Moonshadow series and I was blown away. You did such an awesome job!.. Then I got finished with the story and saw that you had this added and I was overjoyed cause lets face it... when your reading a great story..the longer the better.. especially if the plot is awesome. I thought this had just the right amount of passion and intensity. I am such a fan!

Author's Response:

Why, thank you, my dear! These two just wouldn't let of me! I have a few more MS related things slowly coming to the surface...glad you enjoyed it, <><3

Reviewer: nemesisstar (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Perihelion

Oh...I so didn't want to cry!  But here I am, blubbering all over my desk.  This was so beautiful!  I absolutely adored it.  Everything was so sweet and just flawed perfection if that makes any sense to you.  And the "action?"  So effing hot! Breathtaking.

Author's Response:

I love the 'flawed perfection' comment - just the impression I was wanting to make! These two are so cute I simply had to have another visit with them... glad you liked it! <><3

Reviewer: xfirespritex (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Perihelion

So you are officially my new favorite person ever! As you know I loved Moonshadow (my reviews should be evidence enough) and now this?! Ugh so much love. <3

Author's Response:

EEEeee! That makes my day, honey! Thank you! <><3

Reviewer: GuysGirls3 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Perihelion

Wonderful!  I loved it!!  I wish Jacob was mine, all mine!!!

Author's Response:

Hey! The line starts behind me! Glad you liked it! <><3

Reviewer: elfchick (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Perihelion

That was lovely. All of it. I needed it today, so thank you.

That's all I'm gonna say.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Um, glad Jake and Bella (and I) could be there for you...<><3

Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Perihelion


Author's Response:

;D  <><3

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Perihelion

That was all of Sweet! I love Pooh Bear quotes, they are so simple but so true! Love the chapter!!!!!

Author's Response:

That just seemed to express perfectly how they feel about each other... thanks for the r&r, sweetie!<><3

Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Perihelion

Loved it, loved it, loved it! Favorite line, "Okay," he wheezed," you talked me into it, let's get married." Sooo cute and sexy! We want more, please. Soon.

Author's Response:

That one cracked me up, too! Isn't that Jacob and amazing - and funny - guy!?! *sigh* <><3

Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Perihelion

Serious giggling going on here.  First of all, welcome back to my favorite couple. And--yippie--more to the Moonshadow story!!  I missed reading that story.  That was SO Bella to freak out and not let Jacob get a word in edgewise.  AND WHO CARES if it is "pornish" (is that even a word??) Jacob/Bella lemons are ALWAYS more than welcome!  Especially the way you write them.  Anyways, always a pleasure to read your fiction, especially when it is Team Jacob!!

Author's Response:

Wouldn't you just know that these two would manage to turn a romantic intention into a comedy of errors!

At first I thought two lemons in a one shot might be a bit much, but 'what the fic'! It seemed *slurp* appropriate to the situation, glad you liked it, er, them! <><3

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 02:31 AM · On: Perihelion

That was perfect!!!!!! I loved it...... i'm at a loss for words, I'm just staring at the screen with a smile on my face and a warm fuzzy in my heart.  So I guess this will be my review, thank you for your story :)

Author's Response:

That's a perfect review - exactly the effect I wanted!! Thank you! <><3

Reviewer: gg1982 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Perihelion


Author's Response:

It was just a natural - I simply HAD to write it! <><3

Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Perihelion

I loved it!!! It was the perfect combo of sweet and sexy!! I can't wait to read the new stuff you put out! Keep up the lemony goodness!!!LOL!!

Author's Response:

Glad it was hit! I just wanted to have another visit with these two..., well, and an excuse to write more steamy love scenes! <><3

Reviewer: MZmanda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Perihelion


Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! <><3

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Perihelion



Author's Response:

Thanks for the R&R! Wow, a wedding scene...hmmm...I'll have to do some research...<><3

Reviewer: toooldforthis (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Perihelion

I thought this was a lovely supplement to your awesome story.  It's only fitting that there would have to be so much drama involved in J/B's proposal.  But, seriously Jacob, that's how you start a proposal?  What is with you man?  All in all, I LOVED it.  The connection between J/B was wonderful.  The sex, well, that was AWESOME!  You're a great writer.  I look forward to reading more. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, my dear! I must confess, I felt sort of like a modern-day Jane Austin (is that presumptuous, or what?) writing this proposal-at-cross-purposes. Of course, Miss Austin never got to have this much lemony fun, poor thing! hugs <><3

Reviewer: twifan14 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Perihelion

I am so excited that you wrote this follow up to Moonshadow! I absolutely adore all things jacob black and this was no exception. I haven't read anything about them so far into their future together and I love it! Too bad the movies don't end this way too...!

Author's Response:

I find Jacob pretty irresistable, myself! I've gotten to be SO TJ that i sometimes forget the Saga ends otherwise! OK, officially crazy now...*sheepish grin* <><3 

Reviewer: inergia (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Perihelion

Awwe! I loved the quote from Pooh at the end ^_^ And that was a fantastic love scene. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

That little line from Pooh just seemed tailor-made for this fic & insisted on being included! Glad you enjoyed the, um, persuasive bits...<><3

Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Perihelion

Thanks for the e-mail. I love it!!!! I like the way you write and I found it hilarious that in the end it is Bella who proposed first to Jake. This is so like them, misunderstandings and stuff. Do you have a picture of the ring? Because I loved to see it! I wanted engagement ring shopping online for Bella's ring in the Kangaroo :) Maybe you did the same thing?

Author's Response:

Y'know, i just thought it was time that Bella showed what a 'proactive woman' she'd become. It just seemed a natural with these two that such an event could quickly become a comedy errors! The ring is one I saw a long time ago in a shop window and coveted - no pictures, alas! Thanks for reading, mademoiselle! <><3

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Perihelion

Oh wow. 

I loved this.  Nah, not barely veiled porn. LOL  But highly lemony, yes.

There is something distinctly satisfying about reconnecting with beloved characters.  Thank you for bringing them back!

Author's Response:

So glad you liked it, ma'am! You know how it is - one line popped into my head (“For crying out loud, Bella, will you shut the hell up? I’m trying to propose to you!”) while I was doing something else, and I built the whole fic around that. And anyway, there's just something about jake and lemons... *blush* <><3

Reviewer: SassenachWench (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Perihelion

I love your fics!  Nice work, lady.  Still love your Jake.  More than ever! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, darlin'! Aren't fictional men wonderful? <><3

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