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Reviewer: iWant2BaMonsterToo (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 01:54 PM · On: It's time!!
hmmm, i wonder who was at the door? lol
Author's Response: Indeed...I wonder. :-)
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Momma Bella?
Yummy =)
Author's Response: Thanks :-)
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 01:27 PM · On: It's time!!
OMG!! All I can say is WOW! And update soon. Please?
Author's Response: Haha! All I can say is, THANKS! And I will most definitley be updating soon. :-)
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 01:26 PM · On: It's time!!
love this story. just finished it for the first time. its awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you love it! :-)
Reviewer: emmettsbutterfly (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 12:37 PM · On: It's time!!
GREAT!!, yup that one word pretty much sums it all up, from the revenge plan, which is genius, to the sex, it was a really good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate that! :-)
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 11:13 AM · On: It's time!!
Oh no they been caught! Awsesome lemon!
Author's Response: Haha, yep. Thanks!
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 11:05 AM · On: What kind of fuckery is this?
I love supernatural! good story so far.
Author's Response: Me too! Obviously, haha. Thanks!
Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 09:04 AM · On: It's time!!
oh shit daddy's home. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hmm...maybe, maybe not. Haha! Thanks :-)
Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 08:30 AM · On: It's time!!
Dun dun DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN lol. Great chapter, update soon!!!
Author's Response: Lol! Thanks. The next chapter should be up in a few days. Maybe sooner.
Reviewer: sirenastarot (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 08:12 AM · On: It's time!!
I was expecting it to be a little more awkward though. Seeing as it was Edward's first time. But it was a realley great chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah, I was going to make it a little more awkward, but...I kinda wanted it to be a little more steamy, so I did my best. :-) Thanks!
Reviewer: Keela Byrne (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 08:07 AM · On: It's time!!
It was great. Very in tune with the rest of the story and the way you write the characters out to be. And I love Bella's tirade when she first cums. Great! :D Although, isn't Edward ready again a little quickly? I think I've read somewhere that it takes at least 30 minutes for a guy to be ready after the first shot, so to speak. But I wouldn't know.
Who came home? I'm thinking either Charlie (most likely, of course) or Emmett, but he is locked down at home, so wouldn't it be Charlie? Hmm..
It's "Oh shit" no matter who. :D
Author's Response: Lol. First off, thank you so much! I love your reviews. From my personal experience, it all depends on the guy. I figure that Edward's a pretty cool dude, so I made him rarin' and ready to go a lil' faster. Hehe.
Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 08:06 AM · On: It's time!!
that was so fucking hot!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 07:38 AM · On: It's time!!
Ahhhhh! Bella! Okay, I loved the ending.
Otherwise, super hotnesss. Fanning myself here.
Wellllll done.
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks, I really appreciate it. :-)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 06:48 AM · On: It's time!!
Charlie came home early, huh?
Author's Response: Not telling. :-)
Reviewer: dreamsatnight (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 06:31 AM · On: It's time!!
well, at least they were done with round 1?
i was hoping for round 2. guess that'll have to wait.
great update! hurry back!
Author's Response: Haha. Don't worry, there will most definitley be a round two. :-) Thanks.
Reviewer: Keela Byrne (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 09:26 PM · On: Revenge is some sweet shit!
Haha. Looking forward to seeing what happens!
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :-)
Reviewer: sonyabrady1971 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 06:04 AM · On: Revenge is some sweet shit!
JUST FOUND THIS TODAY, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT. LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE, PLEASE POST AS SOON AS YOU CAN. HAPPY HOLIDAYS.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so glad that you love it. :-). I'm finishing the next chapter right now. :-) Thanks so much and Happy Holidays to you as well.
Reviewer: ShesDiabolical (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 10:10 PM · On: Revenge is some sweet shit!
okay, Idon't have much time to talk, because it is LATE and WINTER BREAK and I am going OUT BABY!!! WHOO!!! BUT.....this was a supr super amazing chapter. All the Edward x bella stuff was AMAZING. like always :P And of course, I'm practically pacing because I'm so eager to get to the Emmett x Bella x now ROSE stuff!!!!!! Gah. Hope your feelin' better chels. <3 Bethany
Author's Response: Haha. WOOT! For winter break. Ugh, I hated finals. :-). Have fun Beth! :-)
Author's Response: Haha. WOOT! For winter break. Ugh, I hated finals. :-). Have fun Beth! :-)
Reviewer: lostinhishazeleyes (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 08:26 PM · On: Revenge is some sweet shit!
hahaha that was totally unexpected dont you just love 2 hr delays it lets you get caught up
Author's Response: Haha. Most definitley. That's one thing I miss about high school. Lol. Thanks. :-)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 10:56 AM · On: Revenge is some sweet shit!
Yay! I love games!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 07:50 AM · On: Revenge is some sweet shit!
hahahaaha! Bella/Rose/Alice teaming up again Emmett is evil, and I love it!
Author's Response: Haha. I'm glad! Thanks! :-)
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 07:19 AM · On: Revenge is some sweet shit!
definitely interested in seeing where this goes. i hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter should be up in a few days. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter should be up in a few days. :-)
Reviewer: DiacetylSunshine (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 06:51 AM · On: Revenge is some sweet shit!
Nothing you or Bella would care to drink contains elemental carbon. I believe you are thinking of the carbon dioxide bubbles in the soda, or even the carbonic acid, which would give the soda its "bite."
9, because it was good, even if she would have become ill from drinking C-12 soda.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I know now. :)
Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 06:07 AM · On: Revenge is some sweet shit!
Oh damn this is getting good! This is going right on my favorites list, and please update soon!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks! I'm glad to know you're diggin' it. I'm writing the next chapter right now. :-) It should be up in a few days.
Reviewer: jazzluvr (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 05:45 AM · On: Revenge is some sweet shit!
this is a lovely story or as me and my friends would call it.... penguins! like from eclipse when edward says "penguins.lovely." (my favorite line :))
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! Hah. penguins, that's incredibly clever. I may just pop that into my story. I will of course give you the proper shout-out, and give credit where it is due. :-) That's one of my favorite lines from Eclipse.
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