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Reviewer: heatherxdawn (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 06:35 AM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

:( sad bella.

good chapter. can't wait to see what happens



Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is in beta. So hopefully, I'll have it soon. :-)

Reviewer: ShesDiabolical (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 03:00 AM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

This was AMAZING. you have this great balance of angst and...i don't even know what else the other stuff is but it's GOOD. and yeah for edward showing up...soon i hope :P

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You just made my day. And as for Edward, he'll be making his mark very soon. :-)

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 05:02 PM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

Wow, so that really sucks for her...I like your story by the way!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 03:45 PM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

Dang, Emmett was pretty harsh at the end yelling he never loved her. I'm looking forward to ch. 4 :) and am patiently waiting for Edward to enter the picture.

Author's Response: Yeah I felt bad for making him harsh, but it needed to happen for the story to gel. He'll get better I promise. Thanks!

Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 01:57 PM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

Great story! I cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm writing the next chapter right now :-)

Reviewer: twilight4evr (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 12:59 PM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

I really hope u upload soon!!!

Those last few lines were really meaningful!!!

I feel her pain!

Thnx for the chapters so far



Author's Response: Awe! Thank you so much. Your review made my night :-) I'm writing the next chapter right now.

Reviewer: Syndie (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 12:03 PM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

Liked it will watch for more!!!!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm writing the next chapter tonight.

Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 11:14 AM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

Great story!  Awe, for Bella.  Heart ache sucks!  Now, where's the Edward?  hehe!  Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Haha, Edward makes a special appearance next chapter. :-) Which infact is being written right now.

Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 09:55 AM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

Damn.  I'm glad Bella told Emmett how she felt.  I hope it helps her actually get over him...I also have a feeling a certain bronze haired hunk will help out with that as well ;)

Author's Response: Oh he will :-) Thanks!!

Author's Response: Oh he will :-) Thanks!!

Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 08:05 AM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

Aww... Poor Bella... I bet there is "someon" out there who will make her feel better!!

Author's Response: Oh there definitley is *someone* in her future :-) Thanks!

Reviewer: LovesSparkles (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 06:00 AM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

aw, poor Bella! I hope she meets *someone* soon so she isn't so sad. can't wait to see what happens next in this story!

Author's Response:

Don't worry, *somone* is coming along. :-) I'm writing the next chapter right now.

Reviewer: Goo82 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 05:13 AM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

aww.. Emmett is mean

Author's Response: He's a boy, and boy's can be pig-headed and mean. He get's better. :-) Promise.

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 03:54 AM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

I love this story...I am looking forward to seeing Edward erase her pain!

Author's Response: Thanks! We get as sneak peak of Edward's POV in the next chapter. :-)

Reviewer: thatgirljen (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 03:36 AM · On: Your awful, I love you. No seriously, you suck!

This is really getting good. Im glad Bella told Emmett exactly how she felt instead of keeping it inside and pretending to be happy for him. I like that there is no beating around the bush. And I hate Emmett right now. The only thing I didnt like was the choice of car. That type of car just seems a little too much. I would have been happy with some sort of vintage classic car or even a new audi or mercedes.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for review and input. :-)

Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 04:46 PM · On: Memories...like the corners of my mind.

WANT MOOORRRRE!!!!!!

Update soon!  Like, by midnight?



Author's Response: I'm updating as I type! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 03:58 PM · On: Momma Bella?

Um, yeah....if you're for real about owning that car, than I'm for real about being insanely jealous!  That car is so sex. 

Oh, this chapter rocked too :)  Eager to read more, but figured I'd drop a review after ch 1.

much love,

~Leslie



Author's Response:

Haha, I know. I about freaked when my mom told me that was my Christmas present. Thank God for settlements lol. Thanks for the review!

~Chelsea

Reviewer: heatherxdawn (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 03:40 PM · On: Momma Bella?

that car is one sexy piece of eye candy. 

and i'm loving this story!!! 



Author's Response: Isn't it though? Haha. Thanks!!

Reviewer: bluemoongrl (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 02:30 AM · On: Memories...like the corners of my mind.

BxEm? Love it. Can't wait to see where this goes! Update soon please....



Author's Response: Thanks!! I'll be posting Chapter 3 either today or tomorrow :-)

Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 09:24 AM · On: Memories...like the corners of my mind.

love it so far.  can't wait to see how it goes!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter should be up soon :-)

Reviewer: EdwardsGirl1117 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 06:40 AM · On: Memories...like the corners of my mind.

i really like it!!! keep going!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter should be up soon. :-)

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