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Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 12:55 PM · On: Hells Bells
cool edward is now the knid of man i like and i want you to please write more fast jake as good as dead to me so whateve to him for what he did ubdate fast please
Author's Response: Haha, I'm writing the next chapter right now. :-)
Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 12:43 PM · On: Hells Bells
I really, really like this story. I like the fact that badass Bella is taking matters into her own hands. I also like the fact that Edward is trying to badass up for her. I didn't think the scene was particularly violent--the guardian angel stopped it before things got that far. :-)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're likin' it. I had to warn, just in case, you never know.
Reviewer: fangirl68 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 12:39 PM · On: Hells Bells
This may be a duplicate comment, stupid server kicked me off while I was reading. So the cliff hanger on this chapter? Mean! Cruel! Critical comment? I am really enjoying your narative style and the different interal "voices" you are writing for each character. Your dialog is snappy and the story pacing is steady and engaging. So *please* post the next chaper soon? I NEED to know where this is going and I can't wait to see how long it is going to take to pop Edward's cherry!
Author's Response: Wow, I really appreciate your review, I'm always happy to know that I'm doing a decent job, and I'm so happy that my writing has captivated your interests. :-) I'm writing the next chapter right now. :-)
Reviewer: lostinhishazeleyes (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 11:28 AM · On: Hells Bells
OMG MORE MORE MORE
Author's Response: :-) I'm writing the next chapter right now. :-)
Reviewer: Bellavampiresbetterthanyou (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 11:23 AM · On: Hells Bells
This is an awesome chapter. Here's three cheers from Prudeward coming out of his shell! I really didn't see that coming. Good twist!
Author's Response: *toasts* Thank you!!
Reviewer: azilecullencz (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 11:09 AM · On: Hells Bells
I'm really enjoying the spin on things that this fanfic has. PLEASE load the next one soon.
Author's Response: :-) Thank you!
Reviewer: vos es meus vita (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 11:07 AM · On: Hells Bells
Edward as a rebel is totally hot. Although he shouldn't smoke. That's so not cool. Maybe he could just dangle the cigarette from his lips for effect, or maybe, put it behind his ear. But I love this! Update soon!
Author's Response: I was actually going to have him light one up, cough alot and decide not to smoke again. :-) I thought it would be funny.
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 10:50 AM · On: Hells Bells
Oh come on, you can't just leave us hanging like that!!!!!! Get on with it please cuz I love it!!!!!! Bad boy Edward...yeah!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm writing the next chapter right now.
Reviewer: scarletpyrre (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 10:39 AM · On: Hells Bells
This story is wonderful. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: midsummerstars (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 10:37 AM · On: Hells Bells
WOW!!! You just made Edward AWESOME!!! Totally wasn't expecting him to change for Bella - considering She alrady liked him, not that he knew this of course! SO looking forward to the next chapter! Is Bella going to take away his innocence?! Emmett is gonna freak! haha
Author's Response: Haha, maybe...maybe not. :-) I'm writing the next chapter right now.
Reviewer: searchingforstories (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 10:17 AM · On: Hells Bells
This story is hilarious! It's like you've taken every bad cliche and thrown them at us in quick succession. One joke after another. It is suppossed to be funny, right? The end of this chapter not so funny. But the rest...very funny.
Author's Response: Haha, yes it is supposed to be funny :-) I'm glad you like it!!
Reviewer: celtic mommy (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 10:13 AM · On: Hells Bells
Nice. I wish it wasn't Jake being the slimeball, but I guess it made sense for the story. Great chapter. Can't wait for the update and more Rebel Edward.
Author's Response: Haha, I really like Jake, but it made sense with the way my story is going, so I had to do it. If it makes you feel better...I felt guilty. :-)
Reviewer: cristynd (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 10:00 AM · On: Hells Bells
Loving it! Bella's bad girl act is going to bite her in the ass and does Edward smoke now? More please!
Author's Response: He wants to smoke, but it may not work out well. :-). Thank you!
Reviewer: Lhiyhelle (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 10:00 AM · On: Hells Bells
update soon pls! =)
Author's Response: I will!!
Reviewer: PeaceLoveTwilight (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 09:39 AM · On: Operation Filth.
Hey! I think it'll be easy for me to just c/p the chapters I haven't corrected yet, and then send them back to you...so you don't have to worry about attaching.
Great job.
PS. I love how you thank me even in the chapters I haven't beta'd yet! Mwa to you too, chicky!
Author's Response: :-) You're the greatest and I know that you've been busy so I wrote them and I was going to send them along to you. :-) And of course I would thank you, this story wouldn't exsist without you!!
Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 09:24 AM · On: Hells Bells
nice... i just get finished reading the last chapter, and here this one is!!!! lol ohmygosh... Edward is so freaking funny.... I loved his commentary on his change of look.... i spit my lunch out on my poor computer over that... i had to go find wipes to clean poor Debby off haahahah And I'm hoping it was Edward who saved her... Really hoping... But why is his smell off? Did he try "bad boy" cologne as well? lol
Author's Response: Haha! You'll just have to wait and see. I'm glad you thought it was funny!!! Thank you!
Reviewer: erinmiyu (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 09:15 AM · On: Hells Bells
ahh! goodbye prudeward! (btw i love that nickname)
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you like it!!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 09:08 AM · On: Hells Bells
Go Edward!!! Hot!!
Author's Response: Haha! Woo-hoo!
Reviewer: EmilyCullen (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 09:03 AM · On: Hells Bells
Edward to the rescue! I hope that was him, anyway. I read so many story where Jacob is a horrible person, and others where he's just a cool friend.....it's hard to form an opinion of him. LOL
Author's Response: Well I like Jake, but I decided to make him a bad guy in this one. It just worked for me. :-)
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 06:35 AM · On: Tanya.
Loved the way Bella put Rose in her place, that was sweet! I wonder why no one like Jacob? I imagine the La push party is going to be ALOT of fun! Can't wait.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm writing the next chapter right now actually :-)
Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 04:44 AM · On: Tanya.
I like it alot! I hope that Edward catches Tanya and Bella realizes that she should let Emmett alone and go after Edward. Great writing.
Author's Response: Thank you!! :-)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 04:43 AM · On: Tanya.
So, Tanya admitted to being a cheater, thats good, but I feel bad for Edward.
Author's Response: I know...she's scum. :-). But I have a little bit of a twist for our Edward-o.
Reviewer: jazzluvr (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 03:46 AM · On: Tanya.
tehehe! that's some funny stuff;) please keep writing!! :)
Author's Response: Haha, thank you!
Reviewer: LovelyLola (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 10:51 PM · On: Tanya.
great chapter :) unless Tanya is incredibly ditzy and braindead....I can't imagine her spilling her secret that fast...so I'm just gonna go with her being incredibly braindead lol
Author's Response: She is, she's supposed to be really...braindead. Also, she doesn't have many friends because of the way she looks and how incredibly bitchy she is, and when she meets Bella, she's like...damn I actually found a friend, so she's eager to answer anything Bella asks. :-)
Reviewer: ShesDiabolical (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 09:04 PM · On: Tanya.
okay this review is going to be LONG. I think this is absolutely without a doubt the BEST FREAKIN' CHAPTER YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN!!! I don't even know, maybe it's because i've been waiting for Tanya and Rose meets Bella for so long that WHOOM!!! SUddenly it was there!! And now..more specifically. I really liked how you worked Jacob in there. And also, how Edward and Emmett seem to HATE his pretty BUTT. Also, it was GREAT how you worked in the whole part about Edward leaving because Bella is everything he's ever fantasized about. GAH. The best PART OF THE WHOLE CHAPTER was tied for me betweeen Bella and Tanya's conversation about getting the boyfriend bella wants to eat out of her hand (SO GENIUS :P :P) and the "If I keep looking at you I fear my IQ will drop" comment to Rose. THat was BEAUTIFUL!!! I can't wait to see how Jake and Bella turn out...and also if there's maybe a REASON everyone thinks he's dangerous *gasp*!! And again, even though this is pretty much a given by now, your bella and emmett was again, mindblowing. *bows to yourbrandofheroin*. Your AMAZING. Keep up the awesomeness!! <3 ShesDiabolical
Author's Response: Wowza. I'm glad you loved it so much!! I was a little worried how people would take it, but I'm so happy it went over so well. I tried to think of things I would say to people I hated or...wanted to get to spill things. The next chapter is a doozy, and I'm still writing it. :-) There's an Emmett POV next chapter...and only you and I know that. :-) Thanks so much!!!!!!
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