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Reviews For Hell School
Reviewer: rachsch89 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 07:17 AM · On: What are we waiting for?

james is gay!! hahaha! i had no idea it would be him, but i loved it! new sexy edward matches sexy bella! keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Hey I figured love interests deserve to be in the same league...ish. :-) Thanks!!

Reviewer: LovelyLola (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 06:29 AM · On: What are we waiting for?

Great chapter!  Wow I definitely did not expect it to be James!  Good surprise.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: thatgirljen (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 06:23 AM · On: What are we waiting for?

Good stuff, The only thing that confused me was why Bella wasnt wondering why Edward was being so flirty with her, calling her love and walking her to class when as far as Bella knows he is still dating Tanya.

Author's Response:

Good question. Bella isn't confused because she's still kinda dazzled by his appearance. Next chapter she's going to start questioning things. She may even think he's playing her and decide to play him right back. It hasn't been decided yet :-) Thanks!!

Reviewer: sirenastarot (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 06:03 AM · On: What are we waiting for?

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I love your stuff!

Reviewer: fangirl68 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 05:32 AM · On: What are we waiting for?

You made James her BGF! Love it!  Nice curve ball!

Author's Response: Haha!! Thanks!

Reviewer: Jaja (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 04:42 AM · On: What are we waiting for?

i really love that James is gay.  It just makes me feel tingly inside that he won't get in the way of Edward and Bella either.

Author's Response: I couldn't add another guy to get in their way. I figured that would be way too mean. :-) So James loves the boys. :-)

Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 04:18 AM · On: What are we waiting for?

Yay! I really, really love this story. For some reason, gay James makes me extremely happy. Now my only question is who is going to seduce whom?

Author's Response: Thank you so so much! I love your story by the way! :-). James has a boyfriend, but I'm thinking of sending someone to hit on him a little bit. The question is who? Haha.

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 04:06 AM · On: What are we waiting for?

James is gay, thats a good one! Hopefully someone will clear that up for Edward though.

Author's Response:

Hopefully...heehee. :-) Thanks for your review!!!

Reviewer: ShesDiabolical (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 03:38 AM · On: What are we waiting for?

WHOOO!!!!! The only sad thing about this chapter?? There wasn't any emmett. other than that, I can't BELIEVE you made James gay!!! And yet he's still got this 'if you were a guy' crush on Bella. I swear, your a genius :P Anyhoo, and of course, your description of edward was completely sexilicious :P As are all your descriptions of Edward. Holy freakin' crap. the next chapter can NOT come fast enough. <3 ShesDiabolical



Author's Response:

Haha :-). There's gonna be alot of Emmett next chapter. Jealous Emmett. It'll hopefully be delicious. :-) Heehee.  Thanks as always!!!!

--Chelsea.

Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 03:36 AM · On: What are we waiting for?

God, I'd kill for a picture of Edward like that!!

Author's Response: I know. I think I created that look to torture myself. Seriously. Haha. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 03:13 AM · On: What are we waiting for?

So good!  Can't wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: LovesSparkles (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 02:21 AM · On: What are we waiting for?

i totally guess wrong, haha. This story is going great! That was an original idea for James, hadn't seen that one before:) where do we go from here? hm...

Author's Response: Haha, I thought it would work for the story. I'm really glad you like it. :-) Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Haha, I thought it would work for the story. I'm really glad you like it. :-) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 09:11 AM · On: Momma Bella?

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i cant wait



Author's Response: Next chapter's almost done. :-)

Reviewer: jazzluvr (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 08:26 AM · On: Hells Bells

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!   psht!  i thought Jake was better than rape.  guess not though.  that was creepy but it was well written.  i like this story! :)



Author's Response: Haha, sorry for the creep factor. :-) I'm glad you like it! Thanks!

Reviewer: ShesDiabolical (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 04:42 AM · On: Hells Bells

yes!!! yes yes yes yes YES!!! this was completely....GAH GAH GAH!!! First of all, YES TANYA IS GONE!!! whoooooo but I bet she tries to get him back or something. and then WHOO emmett's in trouble with rosie for still caring about bella...kinda. and then 1000 X WHOO BECAUSE EDWARD JUST GOT SUPER SUPER SEXY!!! Please tell me it's him at the end of the chapter??!! and also, you wrote the Jake part incredibly well. stupid butthead. that was perfect. THIS WAS AMAZING (lol I had to say amazing...i say it every review :P) <3 Shesdiabolical



Author's Response: It wouldn't be a good review if you didn't say amazing lol. I'm glad you like it. I'm writing the next chapter. :-) I'm actually not sure what I'm doing with Tanya yet...I'll figure it out. As always, THANK YOU!!!!

Reviewer: MandaPanda0905 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 07:14 PM · On: Hells Bells

Yay for Edward showing up. At least that's who I think it is, because honestly, who else would it be?

Author's Response: You never know...:-). Thank you!

Reviewer: Lead69 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 04:37 PM · On: Hells Bells

No more Prude-ward, thankyou!  Looking forward to you bringing on bad ass Edward since he is “f_cking ready to go.”  Getting a kick out of your characters playing their own bad ass characters in this story, the games people play.

Author's Response: Haha! Thanks!!

Reviewer: dreamsatnight (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 03:24 PM · On: Hells Bells

ahh you can't leave it there!!  come back!!

 

ugh jacob is a sleaze!  can we do something painful to him?  please?



Author's Response: I'm writing the next chapter right now. :-). And believe me, I'd like to do something terrible to him. Haha. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: iWant2BaMonsterToo (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 03:08 PM · On: Hells Bells

haha Emmett keeps digging himself into a deeper and deeper whole. i love it :)

Author's Response: Yep...he does that sometimes. :-) Thanks

Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 02:49 PM · On: Hells Bells

Please hurry and update!  That was great!

Author's Response: Thank you!! :-)

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 02:47 PM · On: Hells Bells

you said edward cullen in this chapter...isnt he edward mccarty in this story? O.o i love the story though can't wait to see what happens next :D

Author's Response:

*slaps forhead* Thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it. I completely got carried away...heehee. He is McCarty. Thank you.

Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 02:42 PM · On: Hells Bells

HOLY SHIT. I do not which one to love more. Prude-ward or Bad Ass Edward. The choices are just too awesome!! You have got me all in tizzy! Haha. And who is it that saved her?! Please say it was Edward!! Gah.That would be priceless. God, I love this story.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I think I'm likin' Bad-ass-ward at the moment, but maybe cause he's down n dirty, like new Bells. :-)

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 01:56 PM · On: Hells Bells

Damn it, that was just wrong! Good chapter though. Eddie's so hot!

Author's Response:

Haha, thank you!

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 01:05 PM · On: Hells Bells

Can I just say that I love bad ass Edward? Great job. I loved it.

Author's Response: Haha, yes, you may say that as much as you like! Thank you, I'm glad you loved it. :-)

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 01:00 PM · On: Hells Bells

Jake = jerk!  However, new Edward = HOT!  Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm writing the next chapter right now.

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