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Reviewer: VampireDolphins (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 02:35 AM · On: Amis

next one please, these are ereally good

Reviewer: ucsdgirl_cali (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Amis

A twisted love story. I love it. My heart breaks for them both.

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Etrangers

Hang on, he's there in the same town as her, from the five years after the first chapter and she doesn't know about it? Well.. I would have thought she would notice him.. at least once! The ending is interesting.. so hes moving on? really? Will be interesting to read the rest!

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Amoureux

I have to admit I was a little bit confused with this. Especially the start. It didn't really make sense to me. I get she was talking to Rose about Jasper, right? But what has Edward got to do with this? Is he her boyfriend and Jasper is her.. well long term friend/ on-off boyfriend? If thats the case, then I understand.. Anyway, I really like your style of writing. It is very good indeed. Especially some of the phrases you use, I thought they were really good. I liked the ending, that was interesting how he said he was leaving again and she let him.. hmm.. I will have to read on me thinks!

I have one question though, how old are they all in each of the sections?

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Etrangers

Two manged hearts and confunctory thoughts of love and right/wrong, living in the same small town. Circling each other, haunting each other, and running to and fro. Such complications keep them repelling each other and yet still pulled in the direction of each other. The nastiest actions can't immobilize the innate pull. And deep down, there is that soulful connection when skin calms skin and the decaying world disappears.

Why can't I write like that all the time? No sleep seems to allow me to dribble.

xoxo

Reviewer: OBEG (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Etrangers

Those are two of the most pathetic and twisted creatures anyone has ever created. I'm apalled and intrigued all in one. I must be just as twisted and sick.

Reviewer: lydia malfoy (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Etrangers

wow! wonder what's going on here. these characters seem to be longing for the same thing so what's stopping them from coming together? what's jasper's story? i'm so intrigued! this is great and i really really really hope you update frequently.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:32 AM · On: Etrangers

I am really interested in this story. I look forward to the next chapters.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Amoureux

I had forgotten how great this one-shot was...I hope you are successful in creating a story from it. :)

Reviewer: keezy (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Amoureux

Dayum! I like it. I like it alot.

Reviewer: kyndria15221 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Amoureux

omg so sad i loved it

~k~

Author's Response:
Thanks!! Glad you liked. :)

mop

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