Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49
Twilighted :: All-Inclusive, High-Quality Twilight Fan Fiction






Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviews For Detention Hall
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

totally werid story

Reviewer: Demize (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

Omg that is so cruel to ask someone out and because you found a flaw go against it what is with that !!

Reviewer: Ramona89 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Buh! Edward, why did you do that?

Wow, I really didn't expect that. I thought that Bella would do something so they would get detention together for a month. But that really is different.

Reviewer: stupidlamb92 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

WHAT?!?!? is that it? i was really into the story and then BAM it took a 180. lol i kept pushing the down button and reloading the page thinking maybe there was an error. it wasnt what i was expecting but it was good.



Author's Response:

I know it ends unexpectedly but it definitely keeps you on your toes. I'm still toying with the idea of making it into a multi-chapter

>

Reviewer: ButtrickLovesCullen (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

that made me laugh in a good way :)

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

Quite amusing - poor Bella but she seem a bit stuck up and goody 2 shoes!

Achilles



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I think it is quite an amusing story as well! I haven't decided if I will continue it or not. I personally kind of like it as a one shot.

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! You should change his name to Dickward. What flew up his ass? If you do decide to continue this I hope you pull that rod out of his ass soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Edward is definitely dickward in this story. I don't know if I plan to continue this story but I might add a couple of chapters so Edward doesn't seem like such a jerk!

>

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

So, he is mad b/c she turned the fan off?



Author's Response:

HI! Thanks for the review! Yes, technically he's annoyed about her wanting the fan off, but because it meant the "music" that made his time in detention pass faster and more pleasantly. IN reality, it's just because he's a bit of a control freak.

>

You must login (register) to review.




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.