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Reviewer: SlashyMcGee (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2013 02:07 AM · On: one-shot
Love! Theres gotta be more to this!
Reviewer: Maranda (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 09:19 PM · On: one-shot
I love this story. It's the perfect amount of tears, tenderness and sexy. I reread it all the time. Great job.
Reviewer: Maranda (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 12:54 PM · On: one-shot
That was amazing. I love how you added that little tidbit about Jacob not being able to fix Edward, but how he could make him not so broken. Just as he had tried to do for Bella in New Moon. Please continue writing.
Reviewer: SheSDaZZled (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 03:15 PM · On: one-shot
Beautiful
Reviewer: Cethmisdtmyk (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 09:17 AM · On: one-shot
when i first read the begining, my only thought was: this could never work, not even in FF. but you made it work! awesome job.
Reviewer: mousekitty (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 11:20 AM · On: one-shot
That was pretty hot! Who'd have thought it?
Reviewer: IVYnurse (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 07:32 PM · On: one-shot
I just wish there was MORE!!! You made such a non-canon pairing totally convincing and really made me root for them, who would have guessed?? haha great job!
Reviewer: IVYnurse (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 07:31 PM · On: one-shot
I just wish there was MORE!!! You made such a non-canon pairing totally convincing and really made me root for them, who would have guessed?? haha great job!
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 11:34 AM · On: one-shot
WOW!! I mean WOW!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I appreciate the time you took to read and review.
Reviewer: joyful (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 04:16 AM · On: one-shot
great story! i loved it and well written too!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you loved it. :) I appreciate you reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: ms_ambrosia (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 07:27 PM · On: one-shot
It's a testament to your writing that I was able to read this, given my complete and utter disdain for Jacob. You have turned me into a slash lover, something that I never thought I would be able to enjoy, simply because I am obsessed with canon couples only. :)
Reviewer: RosieKiss85 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:54 PM · On: one-shot
oh geeze, you took my review the wrong way! my wow was a good wow ;) i liked your story, it just isnt something i had read yet being new to this. but now i love lemons of all sorts, including yours =)
Author's Response: Ah I see! Well, I'm glad you liked it then. I seriously look back on this oneshot and am embarrassed at the lemon. I hadn't written in such a long time when I posted it. :) If you like odd pairings I have a multi-chapter Edward/Demetri fic, and I think the lemons are MUCH better in that. Anywho, thanks for clarifying! I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!
Reviewer: RosieKiss85 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:25 PM · On: one-shot
oh geeze, you took my review the wrong way! my wow was a good wow ;) i liked your story, it just isnt something i had read yet being new to this. but now i love lemons of all sorts, including yours =)
Reviewer: oriens (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:35 AM · On: one-shot
That was absolutely amazing! I'd love to see more of these two. Perhaps a small series, or even a sequel? I just want more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's always nice to hear someone liked it. As of right now, I don't really have any plans on expanding it; I couldn't really think of anywhere to take it. Who knows, though? I might have a brilliant idea someday. Thanks again, I appreciate you taking the time to comment. :)
Reviewer: RosieKiss85 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 01:32 AM · On: one-shot
Umm... yeah, wow. thats all i can manage right now
Author's Response: That bad? I hope you enjoyed it maybe just a bit...
Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 02:46 AM · On: one-shot
Very poignant and powerful.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Racoona (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:56 PM · On: one-shot
This tears at my heart! I hate the hurt and grief they are put through, I absolutely do, and it's so goddamned believable, and Renesmee dead? I almost cried...
Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a comment! I'm so glad it...made you....sad? Well, I guess that was what I was going for, but sorry it made you almost cry! I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave feedback, for real!
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 05:52 PM · On: one-shot
OMG!!!!........I did not see that coming!!!!!
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 05:52 PM · On: one-shot
OMG!!!!........I did not see that coming!!!!!
Author's Response: Ha ha! I'm pretty sure they felt the same way!
Reviewer: butterlfybetty (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 12:48 PM · On: one-shot
I really like it. You did a really good job.
Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for taking a moment to review. I sincerely appreciate it. : )
Reviewer: GraceBlack (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 11:40 AM · On: one-shot
I forgot to rate you! Have I mentioned I love this story?
Author's Response: Ha Ha! I'm so glad you lurrrrve it.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 11:11 AM · On: one-shot
I really love the build up to "the moment." I feel so much for each of them.
Edward's surprise was MY surprise. I confess to being a little squicked out at this pairing. lol Like.. wth? Now? Right now?
I think I'd like to be inside Jacob's head, if you ever want to do a mirroring of "the moment" here in this story. I'd probably be less squicky about it. LOL
Very brave, bold and adventurous of you! I think I just wish there were more! :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it even though you were squicked out a little.
I love the word squicky!
Squirmy + Icky = Squicky, Squicky + Me = New favorite word :)
Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
Reviewer: GraceBlack (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:41 AM · On: one-shot
I'll be your first review! I love it :) You write so well, and you can make a grilled cheese without a recipe! Kudos.
Author's Response: Awww, you took my review virginity. I heart you.
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