hi! nice and intresting story!!
keep going on becouse I want to know what will happen... will Bella fight for her reputation or will leave it go? will Edward do something??? ( I would like see him kick mike's ass.. he can control himself to just give him some bruise! can't he?? :) or can Rose disassemble his car??? and the car of Jessica?? by the way yes, yes, yes, the mother of jessica must be fired! )
and i love that Rose isn't bad... she is kind and friendly also that strong... she isn't bad! I don't like when she is always against Bella! for that, thank you for not describe her like a bitch... she is not! ok, she isn't the most kind person of that world, but you know what? it is like the meyer has something against every blonde in this planet...  tanya (whore), irina(traitor), jessica(queen of drama, gossipgirl), james (psyco), ecc...  also jasper and rose are the devil in the Cullen family... what about the volturi?? caius(blonde so he is psyco and aggressive) aro (white.. but may be he was blonde.. you know he is evil, king of plotter and manipulation) marcus ( ok, not blonde but he isn't evil, he is apatic and neutral.. so) SO THANK YOU, not every blonde is evil.. it is a leggend! xD
soo return to your story!!  love that Edward didn't runaway to Denili, and that Alice has a vision about her... she is a important event in the life of Edward and so it is fair that Alice has a vision about her and the conseguence for Edward...

also the story of Bella... will you descibe it more?

so! keep going on! thanks for update your story!!! I realy love it!

Really hope you continue the story... someone recc'd this and I just stumbled upon it. Love it already, and the interactions between the Cullens and Bella. Great read! :)

Please, pretty, pretty Please. On both knees begging here, can we please have the next chapter.

lovce this-looks awesome!! i reckon will be really good-now UPDATE!!!!!

Lovely.  A thumbs up from one who was also the freak in class.  Please write more soon!!!!

Really great first chapter.  I'm intrigued by the small twists you have put on these characters...the greater evil from Mike Newton, the immediate kindness from Rosalie, the easier acceptance of Edward.  I'm very intriqued and look forward to reading more.  I look forward to learning more of Bella's past, of what caused her to be the girl she is today. 

Oh wow...your story has originality and the dialogue is great!  Can't wait for more.

I really like what you have written so far :) Thank you for sharing your story!

That was fantastic! Worth the wait!

So far, this story is a total win. I can't wait to see what comes next!

Please  take this the way I mean it,  I think I love you!  I definately love this story.  I love Rose in this, she does have a heart!  And Alice, I adore that little pixie.

I am really liking this story! 

Sorry life is not altogether peaches and cream for you, but some of the best creative expression is born in adversity, so...

I look forward to seeing how you plan on weaving your story. :)

 

LJ