Where de epilogue?  hehehehe

Waitin for ther epilogue.....for awhile now....LOVE THIS TALE...One of my faves. Want the Epilogue...kay?

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Oh., I see that it IS done, BUT...We need the Epilogue anyway....I hope your dissertation went well and you are doing what you want to in life. You certainly are a phenomenal writer!

I rarely read Author's Notes...I know I should, I would find out what I need to know that way...but I I will learn my lession from this...Still....please to an Epilogue!!!! I love this story and want it tied up....

Wow......started reading this yesturday and just finnished......and wooo.......I really love it......complicated and action filled.......and just amazing :D

I really want to read the epiloge now....will it be up soon??

 

much love......this is amazing :) xx

It's over?!?!?!? Already??? Wow! Of course, I suppose that would be the culmination of the story. I have to say, I really enjoyed it. And this was a real fight, with missing arms and everything! Thank you for sharing your story with us. 

I agree with Sue, this is definitely an awesome fic! Thank you so much for sharing. I didn't even skim one paragraph. Nothing felt like I'd read it twenty times somewhere else. It's all been a new exploration.

Wow, that was completely gruesome!  I knew that Alice was using Edward-how completely awful!  I'm guessing that Carlisle is the only one who Edward could really want to keep a relationship with after knowing this-maybe!  I can't even imagine how the next chapter will go.  Will Edward have any peace?  Will Bella hate him, or still carry over whatever resonated about him to her in her human life and be glad to be with him?  Will they leave the Cullens?  I would!  Even with all of Alice's remorse, genuine or not, he'd have to know that he would be sacrificed for Jasper and maybe even the others and she's obviously able to block him well.

well shit! great chapter!

From my other reviews you must know I love your writing - the attention to details most people don't think of, the well crafted characters, your talent with suspense. This chapter was no exception in that regard. 

I had issues with the story arc and proportion. In the first several chapters, a lot of time was spent on Edward's emotional, mental and physical reaction to the change. Even when Edward killed the jogger or found Angela and Ben there was an unhurried quality to it. It felt clipped to me to find that the fight with Maria, the fallout from E's realization that Alice had orchestrated everything, and the fact that Bella was changing were all going to be wrapped up in this action filled chapter and an epilogue. 

I thought about just waiting for the epilogue before I reviewed. It's entirely possible that it will go a long way toward rounding out the story so that I don't feel like the end was rushed. But I wanted to review this ch to say that I did very much like that you weren't afraid to get the fighters really hurt - particularly Edward. It's not something you usually see. Another thing you don't see (which I didn't like, but that doesn't bother me; it was realistic and I don't have to like everything a character does) is Edward leaving Bell behind out of fear for his life in a dire situation. Last, I have no problem with Alice having planned this. In canon, she told Bella that when it came down to it, keeping Jasper safe was her first priority. And you gave us hints earlier that she was keeping big secrets despite the costs. So go for it, I say. It was great to see her strong and focused.

Thanks for posting. Good luck in the Indies.

I don't like this story anymore, because I HATE Alice. She plotted, manipulated and used Edward for her purposes - with no regard for his life, his family and friends or his feelings. Alice is a selfish, conniving, vile monster. Maria was better than her becos at least she was up front about evilness - unless Alice who hid hers behind a false facade of sweetness & caring.

The Cullens are just as disgusting as her, as they actively colluded to use Edward for their own gain. I'm DESPERATELY hoping that Edward will LEAVE this pathetic excuse of a family, a family that clearly DOESN'T see him as one of their own.

Honestly, Edward would be better off with Aro and the Volturi. He'd be valued and at least they'd be honest and open that they are in fact using him WITH his tacit agreement!

The last real chapter??? ACK!!!!

It was a great chapter! Alice as Mastermind. Well, yeah.  Have you read Marionette by EchoesofTwilight?  Alice as mastermind there, too. 

So Edward gets some scars, Jasper gets MORE, Bella gets changed...

And we all move away to live happily ever after and ever after and ever after?

Wow. I am really looking forward to your epilogue. This has been a gripping story.

I'm appreciating the Greek references :)

Oh crap!  Things went all wrong!  Where's the calvary when you need them?!!!  How is Edward going to get himself and dying Bella out of this?

Wow, again with the cliffhanger and I'm all caught up.  Wicked, wicked woman.

Maria is on the scene and Bella has been bitten.  Where the hell is Alice?  Did she see this and just know she couldn't do anything about it?  Aarrrggh.

I can't wait for your update.  Best wishes at the Indies!