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Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2008 12:24 PM · On: Disarm
AAACKK!! I love it when Stalkward shows up!! He is awesome when he hangs around outside her window or sits in the sand watching her!! YAY!! Love it when this story updates!
Reviewer: EmoXChild (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 12:09 PM · On: Disarm
awesome chapter! :D more plllllllllllzzzz!!!!!!! fantastic story i reeaally like it plz update soon! :D
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 12:09 PM · On: Disarm
I hope she won't be pissed at him for buying her bike.
Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 11:16 AM · On: Disarm
This story is so delicious. I adore it. Every. Single. Chapter. This is the best Doucheward in fictional existance. much love, ~Leslie
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 11:12 AM · On: Disarm
genius = "What? Did he think I was going to run up screaming, "Neiner neiner neiner," kidnap her, and take her off into the woods to drink her blood? I mean, I'm a bad guy but I'm not a demon or anything." LMAO - love this story!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 10:34 AM · On: Disarm
I'm surprised it didn't occur to Edward that Bella's phone got confiscated. Of course Edward will have to replace it with another one. Preferably so tiny Bella can practically hide it in her nose if need be so daddy won't find it. But then again Edward's working with a handicap (hard on) so I guess I should forgive him the oversight.
Reviewer: sarcasticcheese (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 10:28 AM · On: Disarm
I know I've said this before, but this story keeps getting better and better as each chapter is posted. The two of you together are simply magic and each time I get a little email telling me this story has been updated, my day gets a little bit better. I love how you've written these two characters. You've written them in a way that while they're both frustrating as hell, I love them both. I care about them. I'm rooting for them. This whole concept/plot is excellent and your writing style is on par with a lot of published authors. You guys are amazing. I don't ever want this story to end and when that time comes, I really hope you guys will write another one together. *bows to marve & wish_girl*
Author's Response: Gah! We love all of our reviewers (and even those who don't), but this is one hell of a review. Thank you, love! We have tried to write them so they had depth in their crazy, and so you (and everyone) would root for them to overcome their crap in order to see how right they are/were for each other. It's great to see that we're succeeding. The story shall continue for quite some time yet, so no fears there. It's harder than we thought for them to fight their demons together and apart from each other, so there's plenty more to come. Thank you so much for such a comprehensive and lovely review. xxx
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 10:03 AM · On: Disarm
That chapter was perfect. Wonderful! Stupendous! Edward's declaration at the restaurant was incredibly sweet. Bella thinking half-heartedly about poisoning Charlie was oddly hilarious. Seriously, ladies, this was a great chapter. :)
Reviewer: mllesinistre (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 10:02 AM · On: Disarm
Awww major points to Doucheward for saving the bike and surprising her like that. With any luck she'll drag him into the janitor's closet and he won't be able to resist. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 09:59 AM · On: Disarm
Love this Edward, such a jerk with such a huge turnaround. Edward never does anything half way... lol
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 09:46 AM · On: Disarm
"What? Did he think I was going to run up screaming, "Neiner neiner neiner," kidnap her, and take her off into the woods to drink her blood? I mean, I'm a bad guy but I'm not a demon or anything." Best line ever!
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 08:02 AM · On: Disarm
OMG LOVED THIS!!!! She won't be able to keep her hands off of him for saving her bike and I don't think he will be able to keep up the hilarious sexbargo either! LMAO!!! WOOOOHOOO!!!!!
Reviewer: EmoXChild (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 11:59 AM · On: How Can I Tell You?
great chapter!!! :D luv this story plz plz update soon
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 03:19 AM · On: How Can I Tell You?
HOLY SHIT! What a way to come home!! That action in the lounge was fucking hot!! Loved it!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 03:00 AM · On: Writing To Reach You
LOVE Edward! I am so glad he can see through Bella's fascade and knows what he needs to do to have her face the fact that she is in love with him too.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 02:46 AM · On: Love Lockdown
BELLA!! Just let let him love you!GAH!! I hope she gets her butt on a plane pronto!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 02:27 AM · On: Gone Daddy Gone
YES! Edward saves Bella from that ASS Phill!! Love that he went after her!!
Reviewer: wants_an_edward86 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 08:50 AM · On: How Can I Tell You?
that was SOOO amazing! Damn i wish i had that welcome home when I arrive at the airport! Bella is so lucky...i hope they can work things out---she just let's him in now instead of the games. ah hell--i love the games! Can't wait for an update :)
Reviewer: spiky_black_do (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 06:58 AM · On: How Can I Tell You?
aww... see, i never hated James... so thanks for making him hot and perfect XxoO<3
Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 05:44 AM · On: How Can I Tell You?
eeek! that was... grar! i loved it. :)
Reviewer: jdsk (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 04:40 AM · On: How Can I Tell You?
You always bring the hotness. always.
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 03:19 AM · On: How Can I Tell You?
MIND BLOWING!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 10:40 PM · On: When The Levee Breaks
I wodner where Bella went when Edward saw that she wasn't at home... And James! Oh, my! He even seems to be a nice guy, which I like. Onward I go with my reading! ^.^
Reviewer: MuffNbutter (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 10:25 PM · On: Bigmouth Strikes Again
Poor BitchBella. But I'm glad she fucked with his car hahahaha
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2008 10:04 PM · On: How Can I Tell You?
Oh my... the non-sex was so... sexy!!!
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