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Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 09:19 AM · On: Teenage Kicks
Why is there still a sexbargo? she loves him...
Author's Response: She loves him. She knows it. He knows it. But it's implied and not declared. Doucheward demands a declaration!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2008 09:10 AM · On: Teenage Kicks
MMmmmmmmm.... so fucking hot!! I wish I could actually SEE Edward in some guyliner!! LOL! Cannot WAIT for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: LoveDarlingX (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 06:01 AM · On: Trust
OH my god, did bella really do thatttt!! How dare you keep me waiting!!!!
Reviewer: sarcasticcheese (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 05:10 AM · On: Trust
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! The first part of this chapter moved me to tears. So beautifully written. Ugh, you guys, you never fail to elicit some sort of emotion out of me with your writing. It touches me and this chapter was amazing. And then you had to go and throw in that ending. Haven't they been through enough? *shakes fist*
Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2008 05:08 AM · On: Trust
oh no!
Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2008 12:24 PM · On: Trust
DOH - What the?! That was Jasper in the closet?! You are sneaky as shit! Awwwww, I loved that Bella used Trust by the Cure to "tell" Edward she loved him. I hope he takes that into account before he reams her a new one. Great chapter and I loved the surprise. Can't wait for the next one so hurry please!
Author's Response: **giggle** I THINK you're getting this one and BFG mixed up. ^_^ ((the full answer to this can be found in chapter two)) Re Trust: Gah, I LOVE that song...so much! I think Eddo'll figure things out sooner rather than later. The next one will be up VERY SOON! Wishy <3
Reviewer: Bulls in Brooklyn (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 05:40 PM · On: Trust
WHAT!?!?!?!?!
Reviewer: Emibella (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 04:49 PM · On: Trust
The end is near! Wait, not really;) The chapter was win, bbs, as is a monkey made of coconuts. loveyou.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 04:29 PM · On: Trust
Dear wish_girl and marve~ I like this chapter. Alot. I always like the chapters. I had a Leave it to Beaver moment when Edward called to "Mr. Swan" in his best I'm a good boy voice. Edward sounded an awful lot like Eddie Haskell but I got over it. But did you know that there are no girls in the group Sisters of Mercy? I mean shouldn't they be called Brothers of Mercy or Men of Mercy? As I said earlier ... I really liked this chapter. Things were so smooth. Bella was all happy and in love and Edward admitted he'd lost himself to a girl. So why did Alice have to bring up the broom closet and Jasper? That wasn't very nice. Until Next Time ~ one of your many readers
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 03:55 PM · On: Trust
Oh nooooo! So much guuuhhhh... followed by so much angst. Just when Bella gets up the nerve to tell him in her own way that she loves him. I'll be waiting IMpatiently to see what happens.
Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 02:37 PM · On: Trust
Wait. What? huh? *confused puppy* I WAS SO HAPPY, BB. THEY WERE SWEET! AHHH! ...and now I'm going back to re-read some because I can't remember there being Jasper/Bella stuff going on here.
Reviewer: thatgirljen (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 02:27 PM · On: Trust
WTF!! That was out in left field. I actually went back and started looking through all the old chapters trying to get some kind of hint. I totally had forgotten that Bella even knew Jasper that well. But alas, I saw no indication. So please update soon!
Reviewer: fangirl68 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 02:25 PM · On: Trust
Ok, that twist at the end was just cruel!
Reviewer: EmoXChild (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 02:07 PM · On: Trust
OMFG!!! holy crap!! update update update!! one of the most suspencefull cliffhangers ever for me cuzz im obsessed with this fanfic :D. again UPDATE!! plllllllllllzzzzzzzzz! :D
Reviewer: manyafandom (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 01:10 PM · On: Trust
Crap I have to go back and reread now. I totally forgot about that. Mel really your Bella is so hauntingly beautiful and fragile. God I love her.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 11:04 AM · On: Trust
What?!?! When did that happen? Maybe I missed something, or was it just in the very beginning??
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2008 09:39 AM · On: Trust
HOLY HELL!! Did I miss something, when did I miss this,,, I am going to have to go back and re-read this whole fiction... how could I have missed that!! ARGH!!
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 08:16 AM · On: Trust
but she DIDN'T do Jazz in the Janitor's closet.... did she??? cuz if she did, it was either on one of her first days, or after edward left during sex, before James showed up.... but I really don't think she did... WTF!?!?! all other parts of the chapter were stupendus though. The bedroom scene where she tells him she loves him- SOOOOO SWWEEETTT!!!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 08:05 AM · On: Trust
Oh the drama! Loved it. I liked how their relationship is building. I wonder what Bella is going to do now?
Reviewer: quickbunny01 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 08:05 AM · On: Trust
And just when things were going smoothly. Great cliffy by the way, can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 07:40 AM · On: Trust
She wouldn't have done that! *looks around for confirmation* Right? Its just Edward and Gothkin right *almost pleading* Cause that would suck because they were almost happy. Aaagh, I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great writing, Jace
Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 07:40 AM · On: Trust
Whoa! That is a big twist! Cant wait to read more!
Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 07:29 AM · On: Trust
Oh no! What was on the paper!!!! I need to know!
Reviewer: mllesinistre (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 07:24 AM · On: Trust
What now? When the heck did this happen? I am so confused. Please update soon.
Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 07:12 AM · On: Trust
Jsust as all was well ..ARRRGG the angst
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