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Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 01:22 PM · On: Between Love and Hate
Hehehehe!!! Great start to a story! Love it & douchwards whole la familia is in the story! Win! Win! I want to read the remaining 22 chapters, but its 2.21am, so i had best not . . . Great tale -I can tell its going to be as addictive as Ladders! Cheers. xxx
Reviewer: mllesinistre (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 12:10 PM · On: You Look So Fine
Too cute! I loved this chapter. Is it safe to say that Edward's not a douche anymore? He's got it made so he better not screw things up again. The same goes for Bella. Charlie needs a girlfriend or something that keeps his mind off of Bella. I can never take his role as a parent seriously. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 11:18 AM · On: You Look So Fine
Ahh, the love is just so sappy and awesome. I truly love it. Makes me all sorts of happy to see them like this. Especially Edward, oh that picnic was wonderful. He couldn't help not knowing she was a veggie. Did we know she was a veggie? I don't remember.
Author's Response: It comes up with James in Phoenix when they go out to dinner. ^_^ Babs is always a veggie in my fics. I'm weird like that. (Of course so am I!) Poor Doucheward had no idea and of course, she doesn't blame him and neither do we. <3 -Wishy
Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 10:26 AM · On: You Look So Fine
that was the sweetest thing ever
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 10:06 AM · On: You Look So Fine
Awww they are getting to know each other!! So sweet!!! Excellent chapter!!
Reviewer: obsidian (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 09:28 AM · On: It Must Be Love
i love the vulnerability in both of them. the tough facade that just seemed to fade away. i love that instead of being proud of the marks he left on her, he was upset and cared more about her well being. i also adore how Edward in charge wasn't cocky or overly rough but attentive and intense. kudos.
Reviewer: obsidian (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 09:26 AM · On: It Must Be Love
i love the vulnerability in both of them. the tough facade that just seemed to fade away. i love that instead of being proud of the marks he left on her, he was upset and cared more about her well being. i also adore how Edward in charge wasn't cocky or overly rough but attentive and intense. kudos.
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 08:53 AM · On: You Look So Fine
Awwww, I loved them playing 21 questions. They are so cute. Great update!
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 08:45 AM · On: You Look So Fine
aww, so sweet. and i just love the fact that he is always stealing her panties!
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 08:11 AM · On: You Look So Fine
Sweetness! :)
Reviewer: mary jane88 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 08:09 AM · On: You Look So Fine
Omg s0 sweet ! loved it t0tally! please update s00n !
Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 07:58 AM · On: You Look So Fine
Marve and Wishy, thank you for the lovely LONG chapter ladies! I have to say I'm quite taken with Inloveward. He's as hot as Doucheward after this chapter. That whole love sequence in the beginning up until Charlie came home was amazing! You two write that shit perfectly. Thanks so much for posting. I'll need another dose very quickly though. :)
Reviewer: eamcims (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 07:33 AM · On: You Look So Fine
I <3 Doucheward.
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 07:20 AM · On: You Look So Fine
That chapter was win! I loved it!! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Beckserrrr (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 07:15 AM · On: The Rapture
So sad :(
Reviewer: Beckserrrr (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 07:02 AM · On: When The Levee Breaks
The 6th to last line like just made my day. Great chapter!!
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 06:54 AM · On: You Look So Fine
You know, I think this may be one of my favorite chapters in this story so far. Lots of emotions running through both of them. I really enjoyed it. They're both so jacked up, from jacked up families, and I think the line from Untamed Heart totally works for these two... "He doesn't make sense. I don't make sense. Together... we make sense."
Reviewer: xcmuchip (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 05:00 AM · On: You Look So Fine
That was such a sweet chapter. How romantic! It started off with a bang and ended with a deep sigh. Can't wait to see if they get home on time.
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 04:35 AM · On: You Look So Fine
"Because I am in love with you, Bella," I declared as I stared into her eyes. "Because you could answer a million questions, and I still wouldn't know enough. Because I could spend every night for the next ten years just like this. Even the part where you have your clothes on." She giggled. "I'm serious, Bella. I love you." Absolutely sums up the beauty of this chapter. God I'm in love with this Edward. He's amazing.
Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 04:30 AM · On: You Look So Fine
I was pwnt! And this chapter was win, I loved the picnic it was sooo sweet!
Reviewer: edward_lover229 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 04:29 AM · On: You Look So Fine
I love that Bella can tell Edward that she loves him:] Great job update soon:]
Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 04:27 AM · On: You Look So Fine
Aww.. Bella as a baby, I bet she was so cute! I love these two. They're so sweet.
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 04:15 AM · On: You Look So Fine
Awww! that was so cute and so edward and Bella (even doucheward and badass bella too!) they're both f-ed up and have had crazy childhoods and are so perfect for eachother it hurts just to read! Love it! can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Devlin (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 04:09 AM · On: You Look So Fine
" I wanted to see her smile that shy smile she got when I did something romantic. I wanted to hold her close and watch the sunset, and whisper soft words to ear at twilight. I wanted to fuck her in the woods." I'm sendin my boys to you two for lessons in romance, but right now I need to go un-mush myself. /adore
Reviewer: happymoon35 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 04:08 AM · On: You Look So Fine
This is my favorite story on this site right now, hands down. I love watching your Edward and Bella figure out how to be in love and be in a relationship. It's romantic and funny and cute and I just want more. Thanks for another great chapter!
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