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Reviewer: searchingforstories (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 07:55 AM · On: A Chain Of Flowers

why? why? why oh why oh why????????

Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 07:46 AM · On: A Chain Of Flowers

*tears*

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 07:45 AM · On: A Chain Of Flowers

Wow, ladies.....Next chapter gets happier, right?  Maybe the one after that?  But the angst is beautiful because be really loves her.

Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 07:20 AM · On: A Chain Of Flowers

Fabulous as usual!!

Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 07:19 AM · On: A Chain Of Flowers

I don't drink, so what the hale am I supposed to do? Imma just gonna go cry for a while. :(

How sad. I've said it before, and I'll say it again... I love Gothken. And how he always seems to be there to help Screwupward (even when it's not Edward's fault!) I'm so glad ya'll made James as Gothken in the first place instead of Bluehican/Jacob.

Reviewer: Platinim13 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 07:16 AM · On: A Chain Of Flowers

I love these two misfits. I don't completely understand Charlie's behavior though.

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 07:13 AM · On: A Chain Of Flowers

Poor, broken, Edward!! I think that he proved himself time and time again, but I think that she still has some issues that she needs to deal with!

Reviewer: happymoon35 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 05:38 PM · On: A Chain Of Flowers

I'm calling b.s. on Miss Bella here.  She got so mad at Edward for not trusting her when he saw the note to Jasper, but now she won't listen to him when he tries to explain? 

When is Bella ever going to have to make something up to Edward?  He keeps doing these grand gestures to prove his love, but she hasn't reciprocated.  He's damaged, too!

Reviewer: mary jane88 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 04:53 PM · On: A Chain Of Flowers

Omg omg its s0 sad i actually wanna cry ! hope fully she f0rgive him great chapter omg omg tears tears

Reviewer: wandaf (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 05:52 PM · On: You Look So Fine

Last two chapters effing rocked! God almighty! I lovelovelove your Edward. Update soon, for the love of all that's holy!

Reviewer: bloodlust72 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 03:11 PM · On: You Look So Fine

love, love, love it!!

Reviewer: mary jane88 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 02:04 PM · On: You Look So Fine

Update s0on please . great chapter !

Reviewer: manyafandom (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 10:53 PM · On: You Look So Fine

Guh. Mel you are a liar. It did not fail miserably. At all.

Good you two are killing me wit hteh sweetness. Love it!



Author's Response:

I thought datefail would annoy everyone. Because he does something sweet and she winds up sobbing despite it. Or his emoness at discovering she's vegetarian.

Glad you liked it though, bitchface. <3

Hit me up on chat, bb.

Reviewer: flibbins (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 10:09 PM · On: You Look So Fine

Ahh.  Sweetness.  I love a reformed jackass.  Brilliant ladies.

Reviewer: Rochelle Allison (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 07:41 PM · On: You Look So Fine

aww! this made me very. very happy. i absolutely LOVE that they're finding their way. they're sooo perfect together.

Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 03:38 PM · On: You Look So Fine

Of course, another fabulous chapter.  Just can't seem to get enough of these two. Very sweet with her cooking for him. The sex, just plain hot.  Cute that he wanted to have this little picnic for her, even if the poor guy is a bit obsessed with wanting to know all of her details.  Can't wait for next update!

Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 09:29 AM · On: You Look So Fine

Ah, I love their perfect imperfections.

Lovely lovely interactions.

 Great chapter, great story!

Ta.

x

Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 09:15 AM · On: It Must Be Love

They are horny happy bunny's huh?

 Very nice.

 Good chapter - thanks!

x

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 09:11 AM · On: You Look So Fine

Oh, ladies, what a wonderful piece of fluff!  He truely does love her!

Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 08:57 AM · On: One More Hour

Oh wow!

 I was all over the place in that chapter.

GREAT chapter!

Thanks.

Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 08:43 AM · On: Teenage Kicks

Hahaha! Guyliner! Genius!

 

Another great chapter!!

Thanks ever so!!!

x

Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 08:29 AM · On: Trust

Oh man! Trauma! & a twister worthy of The Wizard of Oz. . .

This was my fave funny bit from the cuteness before the storm:

The rest of the day awesomed on in much the same way.  The occasional cockblocking teacher would question why I was in Bella's class instead of my own, but I just smiled and shrugged, and for the most part they left me alone.

But what the hell - She said Edward was her 2nd. So did she after their major fail?

Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 08:20 AM · On: Asleep

Aw.

 THis chapter was all kinds of sweet. What a pair eh? So well suited as they are both as insecure as the other!

Bless them. Loved their chemistry & interactions in this chapter. & of course Ed's way with his mouth - lucky Bitch Bella!!!

Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 08:04 AM · On: Sweetest Perfection

Wow! Nice, nice, nice!!

How hot is Douchward when he's Dom & DT?

Woah, I think my laptop just short circuited - or prob it was me?!

lol. Wow.

 Great chapter!

Cheers.

Em.

xx

Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 05:04 AM · On: How Can I Tell You?

One of the hottest effing pieces of fanfiction smut I have ever read in my life.

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